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ChampionName: Anthony
Age: Looks like late 20's, but has lived for hundreds of years
Sex: Male
Appearance: (I couldn't find a picture.) Humanoid, exactly 6'. Medium build, with blue spikey-ish hair, a black bandana to keep his hair out of his face, tanned skin, and a bare chest and abdomen. Dark brown pants with a black belt similar to the bandana on his head. No shoes.

Powers/Skills/Weaponry:

Despite his lack of armor, Anthony is extremely durable. His skin is as tough as iron, and resistant against magic that he casts, and other forms of similar magic. Acid has nearly no effect on him, unless it is an extremely strong kind of acid.

Anthony wields an indestructible scythe with around a 1-and-1/2' long handle, And the blade of the scythe comes in after a foot of handle. He can store the scythe in a safe place and summon it to his hands at will at any time.

He also has a bow and quiver with an infinite number of arrows. This also has the same summoning and storage ability. His scythe and arrows aren't normal, though. They are extremely sharp and the arrows fly close to 200 mph, and both have the ability to charge to different kinds of magic. Once a magic type has been used, it cannot be re-used for a minute. They are as follows:

Fire, creates an inferno once landed, envelops the area nearby completely, and tends to be ~1500-2000 degrees Fahrenheit

Ice, freezes the area nearby for about 15 seconds.

Earth, slows whoever was hit (only works on living creatures) by half for about a minute.

Wind, create (Very powerful) random gusts of wind around the target for half a minute.

Sun, blind whoever was hit for 15 second.

Moon, cause whoever was hit to hallucinate for 30 seconds. The hallucinations distort the reality they see (E.G. they see an object thats right next to them but its really 30 feet away, or vice versa.)

Lightning, summon a lightning bolt around the area where the arrow landed.

Rain, an immense amount of water appears where the arrow landed.

-snip-I edited slightly and added more detail. Thoughts/concerns?

I would break it up like this so it is easier to read and identify items clearly. Also I find your bow is a little lacking.

Presumably being a Champion of a God you would probably fire an arrow faster than a normal human being. A man with a 70 lb bow can fire an arrow 300 fps or 184 miles per hour. You are just a hair above that. As a Champion I figure you should be able to have the strength to at least match the speed of a .22 lr which is about 1,100 fps which is about 750 mph. I think this would elevate your attack beyond a mere human to at least demi-god status.

Also it seems that you are a one-trick pony. Perhaps you can acquire bow skills such as firing three arrows at once, both at a single target or three separate targets. Able to bank an arrow off of something to hit a target, hidden. Fire arrows and use them to climb a wall. Perhaps fire a curtain of arrows that drop dozens of arrows in an area 10 feet by 10 feet. Things to focus your specialization as a bow user.

I think your arrows are greatly underpowered for a Champion.

Fire, creates an inferno engulfing an area 50 feet by feet 50, reaching a maximum temperature of 2,000 degrees Fahrenheit.

Ice arrow creates a frozen mass of air and coating the ground with ice dropping the ambient temperature to -2 degrees Fahrenheit, in an area roughly 50 feet by 50 feet.

Earth, creates a mucky sticky bog in a 100 foot by 100 foot area radiating out from where it strikes, greatly slowing even the speediest of Champions until they are clear of the bog.

Wind, creates a vortex of tornado winds around the target and engulfing a 50 foot by 50 foot area. The winds reach a maximum sustain speed of 102 miles per hour. The winds are strong enough to challenge the strength of even the heartiest hero to remain standing.

Sun, creates a blinding flash of light reaching nearly 100 million lumens that can create after images in the retinas of the view if they look at the flash. . Be aware that Champions with other than optical senses can overcome this easily.

Moon, creates a hallucination effect in a 100 foot by 100 foot area. While not adversely affecting the target it distorts distance and creates images similar to a fun house of mirrors. Most effective after a Sun arrow. Be aware that Champions with other than optical senses can overcome this easily.

Lightning, can summon a bolt of lightning that will arc off the arrow toward the nearest grounded target, usually another Champion.
A secondary effect that can be used is that the arrow can fork into two separate bolts to strike a target.

Rain, when the arrow strikes the area, 100 feet by 100 feet is deluged by a torrential downpour rapidly flooding the area with nearly a ton of water in a matter of moments.

You can change the area if you want.

But that is just my opinion.

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