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My cat who was missing for a year finally came home, I'm so happy!!!
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Zelliana Nasan


“Yeah, I know what you mean, I was beginning to get a little stir crazy myself,” Ana gave a small chuckle, she was actually looking forward to getting out of the enclave for a bit, she’d been alone for the most part and even she could see that was starting to become unhealthy. “Yup, made sure I had everything before I came down,” Ana added, she was surprised she hadn’t forgotten what with her mind being preoccupied on other things, but no doubt it was her master’s constant reminders to always have herself prepared that kept her from forgetting.

Ana took notice to a man approaching Maria and herself, she could tell right away he was a Jedi as well, his armor giving away that he was Mandalorian too, something that she was surprised to see within the ranks of the Jedi all things considered, then again she sort of was a Mandalorian as well, so perhaps it wasn’t all that strange after all. “Oh, yes, my name’s Zelliana Nasan, but you can just call me Ana, everyone else does,” she responded cheerily when the Mandalorian Jedi addressed her.

She was quite curious about the mission they were going on, she felt much wasn’t told about what they’d be doing, so either she hadn’t been fully listening when it was being discussed or it was being kept purposely vague, though considering how she usually was, she didn’t put it past herself to have not paid attention, “So what exactly is this mission we’re going on?” She asked no one in particular.
@Gowi I spoke with Apollo a few days ago and he agreed to take on my character as his padawan, got to him first, sorry about that. :P
@Burning Kitty Why are you being so passive-aggressive? It was just some constructive criticism, we all make mistakes from time to time and it's good that they're pointed out so we can be better writers, nothing in the original post conveyed what you were trying to get across, your character seemed to dislike Gamorreans "just because" and they got into a fight and your character somehow beat it, plus the post doesn't really go anywhere, it honestly just seemed like fluff.
Little shorter than I had wanted, but I'm sure that'll change as we progress. :P
Zelliana Nasan


“Now run Ana! Save yourself!”

Those words were trapped in a young mirialan’s head, all that she kept thinking about and then the sound of blaster fire being heard in the distance. Zelliana still was having a hard time accepting that her master was gone, she had been hiding with him a few weeks earlier and then in the blink of an eye, he was gone, taking out by the Mandalorians and she couldn’t help but feel pain over his passing. Tears began to build up around her eyes, feeling guilty for her master’s death and how she regretted, abandoning him, at least that’s how she viewed it in her eyes.

“I should’ve stayed with him, he’d still be alive if I had,” the young mirialan spoke softly to herself.

She was supposed to be getting a new master soon, she believed his name was Tan El Nali, but she couldn’t exactly be sure, her thoughts still swelled with her master and currently, it was hard for her to focus on anything or anyone. Even when she first arrived on Valkaina, she mostly stayed recluse, interacting very little people of the enclave and mostly keep with herself. She knew that Jedi shouldn’t form attachments, but when she had been with her master for so long and began her training so late, it was hard for her not to.

Ana was broken from her thoughts when she heard someone call out behind her and quickly wiped away the tears that had built up before turning around. When she saw it was Maria, she gave a small facade smile, trying to keep her true feelings from bubbling to the surface again.

“Oh, hey Maria, what’s up?”
@DirtyDingo Awesome, can finally get started, been having a star wars marathon in anticipation for this. :D
I'm interested, count me in.

I'm interested, count me in.


Whew, finally done, hopefully everything's correct, did this over multiple nights cause of work, so I wouldn't be surprised in my tiredness if some things are out of order. Will try finishing up my second character next.
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