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7 yrs ago
Current Writing like you ate a Thesaurus does not make you a better writer.
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9 yrs ago
After a full month I finally got Internet in my new appartment. And they say we germans are punctual :/
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9 yrs ago
Quit Work and enrolled in College. Strangely enough I got a lot more time for this site now.
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10 yrs ago
After some unintentional time off I am back.
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“War is peace.
Freedom is slavery.
Ignorance is strength.”

― George Orwell, 1984


In a Europe of the 21 century everything is autocratic. People work day in, day out six days a week for their government.
Freedom and democracy is nothing but a distant memory, a story told when no one is listening.
Diversity as it once was called is now called chaos. Every child has the same hobby, every adult the same schedule. Here nothing changes.
It has been 50 years this way. The government is always watching, knowing the face of every single citizen.
That is where we come into play.

The Society of the False Faces was founded with one goal, overthrow the establishment. We use masks to hide our faces, use false names to disguise our identity's.
We don't know who we really are, to keep each other save.
Sounds good!
Good, good can't complain.
And your's old sport?
I don't know, with two new nations it could work.
Is anyone still on board?
"George?", the woman cautiously opened the door to his office, "They need you at Watchmake's Hill, that killer, the Game Master...". She couldn't even finish her sentence before Sir Lakeview interrupted her. He took his Jacket and his hat and reached for his cane. "Henry, Miss Analise. We need to get to the crime scene as fast as possible, "Lord knows perhaps we find a clue to catch that devil."

As fast as a limping man could George left the building. A coach was already there for him. "When we get there.", he said calmly while looking at Henry and Analise, "I don't want you to touch anything without permission okay? It is of importance that we see the crime scene in its original state. You know of that killer and let me tell you, he is playing with us. He might even have left a clue at the scene."

Now he looked directly at Henry, while the coach drove through a puddle of mud. "This is a war. People are dying and we don't even know who the enemy is.", George looked at his own reflection in Henry's glasses, "Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more."
No problem.
I am sorry to say this, but that is just one bit to unfitting and weird.
@Balena_Rex: It looks good, however it sounds funny when you can speak German.

@neinstein: A little more info would be nice and what exactly makes your pretender god worthy? From what I understand he is just a chieftain? Also the animal control thing kind of goes into the territory of the nation of Enelais.
Not late at all!
I like your character. I just wanted to say that you could have used mythological creatures like satyrs, centaurs or werewolfs if you wanted.
I think it is going to be interesting to see him up against the necromancer. Life vs. death kind of thing.
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