My first post is up.


@The Survivor I'd like you to hit dirt and be in the temple or on the landing pad when the attack happens - for your own survival.
Your last paragraph is a bit cluttered at points, and could maybe do with a proof read and re-writing a couple of sentences just so it's easier to read. If you sort this out you can throw it in the CS tab (A repost isn't necessary, the content is good and the rest of the sheet is written nicely probably just end of sheet syndrome where you're just trying to get it done :P Happens to us all).
Can you also PM me/IRC me rough dates of the times Worror shows up? Just so I can work it into my Bio.
Also did I read correctly that you were MusketMan on the oldguild?
@The Survivor Reading it, but at work so reading is slow. While I can reply to the IRC (Set up notifications so I'll notice if anyone says anything) easily I have less time too reply too the guild ;)
One thing I will say is Worror probably stood in when the ex-slaves went to kill the slavers.
Name:Wynn Shaia
Age: 28
Species: Catuman
Appearance:
Wynn stands at 6'5 and often wears the unassuming robes of the Jedi. He wears a traditional warrior ear ring in honor of his ancestors. He has dark ginger colored fur and intimidating green eyes. He wields a blue lightsaber.
Force Abilities:
- Force Sprint
- Force Pull/Push
- Force Wave
Non-Force Abilities:
- Lightsaber Form IV- Ataru
- Retractable Claws- In the early days of the Catuman race, when they were still primal and new, the cat race developed claws to hunt for food. This evolutionary trait remains to this day, though few Catuman use it.
- One with nature- As a Catuman, Wynn is extremely comfortable in the wilds and can adapt to any environment within minutes.
- Martial Expertise- The Catuman are a race of fighters, born for combat. Wynn is no different and his understanding of the force and Jedi training make him even more dangerous on the battlefield.
- Outdoorsman- Due to the extended studying of flora and fauna during his Padawan years, Wynn is very knowledgeable of many planet's environments.
- Skilled Strategist- Over the years of battle, Wynn has revealed himself to be a talented strategist.
Personality/Motivation: Wynn is a quiet and intimidating person. He looks and listens more than he speaks. But he is notoriously intolerant of foolishness and deception. He will listen, but if he finds it pointless or sees it as a form of stalling he will cut it off. That being said, Wynn can be kind and loyal and often volunteers to be in the thick of the worst situations. He does struggle to keep his emotions in check, sometimes quick-tempered or perhaps too passionate about certain subjects, including battle. His species violent nature makes him especially susceptible to the temptations of the dark side. However he is strong willed and many have faith in his willpower against the dark side.
Biography:
Secrets: Catuman Mercenaries: Many assume Wynn is just an orphan, but very few know of his true origins.
Relations:
- Master Fein Donos- Former Master
- Master Worror Tuldura- Friend and occasional teacher
- Master Kit Fisto- Former Commanding Officer
- Wynn has met many Jedi in his years of traveling and service
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o i am laffin
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Just wanted to say it's spelled Catuman. Hello.
