The Survivor

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

I know my post is short, but I wanted to add a thing with Corr and his mother.

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

~| Day 2, 16:00-16:10 GST|~
~| Aboard the Kaggath, Sith training room|~
~|Corr|~

Corr exited the dormitories and turned the corner, coming face to face with his Mother. Lieutenant Commander Isla Halcord. Her yellow eyes widened at Corr and she quickly embraced him, saying joyfully "I didn't know you were assigned to The Kaggath!" Corr smiled and returned the hug. I just got in today. I'm apprentice to Lord Sish." he said. Her face darkened at this. "Be careful around that alien, son. I don't trust him." Corr nodded and began to walk with her. "Neither do I, he seems to be goading his other ward into attacking him, they apparently have some history." His mother stopped a young officer and signed a form briefly before they continued to walk. "Everyone on this ship knows that the Zabrak wants to kill Lord Sish. He's a nasty one alright."

Corr looked around suspiciously before stopping and turning to his mother. "I beg you to keep your voice down, who knows where his ears might be. I have no doubt he would treat such talk from soldiers very harshly." She looked at him with defiance, but nodded and they continued to walk. There was silence between them as they entered the common room and she asked quietly "Have you been talking with your father?". Corr's head snapped in her direction. "No." he replied firmly as he sat down with her at a table in the room. She sighed and started to say "Corr, he's the only other fami-" "He thinks me weak and a fool and he knows I owe him." he snapped vehemently, leaning back in his seat. Her eyes narrowed at him as she stated firmly "He's still your father, you can't just ignore him all your life."

Corr looked at her when she said this and replied "Oh I know, Mother. When I surpass him in power, he'll be forced to acknowledge me. One way or another." With that he got to his feet and walked past his mother, gripping her shoulder as he went, leaving her alone in the common room.

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

Name: Marz Jago
Species: Arkanian
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Faction: Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Knight
Master: N/A
Captive? Yes

Appearance:

Marz stands at 6'2 and has a muscular physique. He has a large scar going diagonally across his chest and one going down his right thigh. He has curly flowing white hair and light white stubble. He wears a dense wrap around his head to protect his eyes from bright suns. A tribal tattoo on his neck goes all the way down to his shoulder. He received it as a symbol of honor and appreciation from the 12 Tribes of T'syriel on Shiva IV.

Notable Characteristics of Species:

Extremely Intelligent
Four Clawed Digits
Able to see in the infrared spectrum

Flaws:

Shoot first, ask questions later- While Marz tries to be impartial, he's more inclined to be aggressive towards people based on their clothing and assumed profession. Example, if a person looks like a gang member, he is likely to be rougher talking to them.
Realist- Marz is a Realist due to past experience, he does not expect things to go according to plan so he prepares and somewhat distances himself from other people as to not get hurt.
Distant- Marz hasn't let anyone get close to him because if they do he is open to the dark side as he cares very fiercely for people. That is more important now than ever.
Unintentionally condescending- Being an Arkanian, Marz was blessed with extreme intelligence. So sometimes he speaks to others as if they are slow. Not on purpose, it's just a habit.

Skills:

Lightsaber Form I- Schii-Cho
Lightsaber Form III- Soresu, though he is much more skilled at Schii-Cho
Excellent Fighter Pilot- Marz is a very talented fighter pilot, though any ship bigger than that he has some trouble with.
Wildlife Expert- Marz loves wildlife of all kinds and studies them whenever he can.
Excellent Singer and Musician- Marz is a surprisingly talented singer and musician, any instrument he picks up he can become skilled at within a few weeks at most.
Devious thinker- Marz can be devious and deceitful when he wants to be, but he doesn't prefer it.
Linguistic- Marz has gone out of his way to learn the languages of many species.

Force capabilities:

Basic Jedi Abilities
Force Mind Trick- Marz has spent years developing this skill and it takes extremely strong-willed creatures to resist it.
Art of Movement- Marz's master believed that body and mind must be equally in shape and the force could make the body even stronger. Therefore, Marz learned the force ability the art of movement.
Animal Friendship- Marz's love of animals has translated into the force and so he finds it very easy to control even the strongest of creatures.
Crucitorn- Marz believes that the Jedi are the protectors of the galaxy and nothing should get past them. So he began to learn the force ability Crucitorn, to fight and endure even when his body can't anymore.
Heightened Force Sense- While Marz can see, the wrap around his eyes dim his vision, so he has developed a heightened connection to the force to compensate. He is much more attuned than most Jedi.

Biography:

Marz Jago was born on Alderaan in 3680 to a pair of scientists. However, he had medical problems that had him born skinnier than what was considered healthy. As a result he would be unusually skinny until he became 15. The Great Galactic War had been going on for a year. The Jedi were always looking for force sensitive children. Marz's parents decided that he was destined for greater things and gave the Jedi permission to take him in 3678. Growing up in the order, Marz always fell behind in physical activities due to his scrawny body. And even though he tried his hardest, he was always below average in physical performance. He made up for it in force aptitude and power, which he was definitely skilled at. He also excelled in intellectual pursuits. He loved to learn about the different planets while growing up and especially the flora and fauna. Marz started to wear the wrap around his head when he started to visit hotter planets, like Shiva IV or Tatooine, as the intense rays hurt his infrared eyes. Planets like Alderaan and Coruscant he was fine. While the wrap protected his sight overall, it dimmed it. But he wasn't concerned, he could feel everything around him with the force.

He passed the padawan trials. He constructed his lightsaber with astonishing precision. He was 11 years old. His first and only master was a human Jedi by the name of Yvette Ren. Yvette was a dedicated and loving Jedi, who thought all life was sacred, a view that Marz agreed with less and less as he got older. Yvette treated Marz as a partner, not a subordinate and he respected her immensely for that, among other things. Yvette knew they couldn't avoid the war and requested protecting positions instead of an assault position, although Marz would have much preferred to see action. Though it was impossible to avoid combat in the war if you were a Jedi. When Marz was 15, they traveled to Shiva IV to a Jedi enclave there. They were recruited to make allies with the local tribes to avoid any conflict. They were only there for 3 days however before the Sith attacked. They quickly overran the enclave. Knowing his master, they would both die trying to fight off the Sith. However, Marz had studied Shiva IV in extent previously. He knew he would have the best chance of survival in the desert. He had to get everyone else out of the enclave. Marz and Yvette directed all Jedi, Tribals, and civilians to the ships to escape. The Sith's arrogance had failed to account for the speed of their ships and they would be able to outmaneuver their guns.

As the ships began to take off, Marz told his master to leave with the ships, he would keep the Sith distracted. As expected she refused. Marz knew that if the Sith ground forces saw the ships leaving, they would alert they're main ship and blow them out of the sky. He used the force to propel his master onto a departing ship and jumped into the fray, effectively distracting the Sith. It worked and the Jedi were able to escape, though he can sense his master's anger and frustration. His skills were no match for three simultaneous Sith. He was quick thanks to his small frame, but he knew he couldn't get away by himself. One of the Sith slashed him across the chest, leaving a scar that would be there for the rest of his life. The pain from the attack made him pass out. When he awoke, he was in a camp. A Tribal camp. One of the 12 tribes of T'syriel. They had stormed the enclave and saved him. Marz was ever grateful and pledged to serve the chieftain faithfully until he could return to the Jedi. For the next 6 months he lived with the tribe. He gained muscle he had never know before. He became strong and tough, making strikes against the Sith who had taken up residence whenever he could. One day, about 2 weeks before the Jedi returned to Shiva IV, a Sith stormed the village Marz lived in with a squad of soldiers. Again, the Sith's arrogance showed, they underestimated the Tribe's ability to fight. Marx took on the Sith himself, receiving a slash would to his thigh in the process.

He was on one knee at the mercy of the Sith. But instead of ending him quickly, the Sith took this opportunity to taunt him. his arrogance was his downfall as Marz skewered him as he was reciting his monologue. The Sith looked at the young padawan in shock as he fell to the ground, dead. The tribe at a feast that night and gave Marz the Warrior's tattoo in honor of his service to the tribe. The Jedi returned and with Yvette leading the charge they took back Shiva IV from the Sith. Marz made his way back to the enclave and when Yvette saw him, she barely recognized him. He was shirtless, with defined chest and abdomen muscles with a large scar going diagonally across his chest. He was muscular overall, with a tattoo going down his neck and shoulder. His usually short neat hair, was now wild and sandy and he had a gleam in his eye that Yvette had never seen. But he greeted Yvette with a hug. The Jedi and tribes were on good terms and the tribes thanked them for removing the Sith. After a few more days they left for Coruscant. Marz was honored by the Jedi council for his honor and bravery and even received a medal of valor from the republic. Shortly after, Marz met a Coruscant street kid by the name of Cally. He fell in love soon after. But Cally was in trouble with underworld gangs and was killed in 3664. Marz was thrown into a rage, finding the man responsible and slicing him down without a second thought. However, Yvette had been following him and explained to him that he was dangerously close to the dark side.

Marz saw she was right and vowed he would never get to so close ever again. Some battles with the Sith and a few years later, Marz became a Jedi Knight at 18. Yvette expressed how proud she was of him and kissed him on the cheek. It was the greatest day of Marz's life.

When Marz was 24, he was sent on a personal guard mission with the General Contractor on Balmorra. He had just returned form a 6 month combat tour and this was a chance to catch his breath. The contractor had gone out of his way to make enemies and was a valuable resource to the republic. While on Balmorra, he met future Jedi Knight Xid Terrick. He thought the young man was quite bright and he seemed to enjoy the machinery of the weapons factories. He also met Xid's master, Sela Kythor, who he only known by reputation. She was quite the warrior. He left Balmorra a few days later, parting ways with the contractor.

The order sent him on many more combat missions throughout the years and he was appointed his Padawan, Kana Vapasi. He was 25 and she was 12. Though he didn't agree with Yvette's view on war, he took up her strategy of making his padawan his partner instead of subordinate. While he was determined not to become close to her, he came to think of her as family. They were on coruscant when the Sith attacked. They managed to avoid the Sith for 3 days. But they were cornered. He commanded Kana to flee and jumped into the fray, slicing down one of the Sith in a matter of seconds. But the other sith was much stronger. They fought furiously for 4 minutes straight, but the Sith sent the post powerful Force Choke he had ever seen. He was suspended in the air, struggling with all his might. And while he was giving the Sith the most trouble any Jedi had ever given him, he soon passed out. He only hoped Kana had escaped.

Personality and/or Motivation:

Marz is a very compassionate person, but he avoids getting close most other people. He is extremely adaptable to any situation, no doubt due to his species infamous intelligence. He thinks of the Jedi as servants of the people and that personal happiness must be sacrificed for the greater good, if not the Dark Side could overpower them. He deals with his enemies, especially the Sith, with little mercy. He will not kill an unarmed man, but if they draw a weapon on him, it will be bad. He has great respect for warriors and while he thinks the Sith are arrogant fools, he can't help but admire their combat prowess. He thinks pain and fear are earthly burdens that can be tossed away with the will of the individual. He thinks love is a necessary emotion, but he knows how it can lead to the dark side. He distances himself from most people to avoid forming attachments, with some few exceptions, but the future may force him to be an emotional crutch for other Jedi.

Player’s long term goals:

As a player, make Marz a Jedi to be reckoned with and not to be taken lightly. But also a figure of stability and safety for other Jedi.
As a character, escape the clutches of the Sith with the other Jedi and find my padawan.

Relations:

Jedi Master Yvette Ren
Jedi Padawan Kana Vapasi
Jedi Knight Xid Terrick
Jedi Master Sela Kythor

Note:
Gonna level with you guys, I used a lot of the backstory from the above CS because I like his character. I changed stuff to coincide with his species and racial attributes and stuff like that, but for the most part it's unchanged. Hope that isn't a deal breaker.

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

That species won't work, @The Survivor... They're not part of the Galactic community in this era. They won't emerge for another 3694 years.

@Ellri

@The Survivor Impossible to play a Keshri. Their species are so technologically backwards they don't make it off their planet until 41ABY.

@Sep

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FUCK

I do not have the energy or motivation to make another one right now, maybe later. Anyway, I gave it the stamp of shame for my lackluster research.

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

DISREGARD THIS FAILURE OF A CS

Name: Marz Jago
Species: Keshiri
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Faction: Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Knight
Master: N/A
Captive? Yes

Appearance:

Marz stands at 6'2 and has a muscular physique. He is skinnier than most, but makes up for that with being at his physical peak. He is quite toned. He has a large scar going diagonally across his chest and one going down his right thigh. He has crimson red eyes and sideburns, as well as light stubble. His eyes have a look of caring, but firm undertone. That tattoo on his neck goes all the way down to his shoulder. He received it as a symbol of honor and appreciation from the 12 Tribes of T'syriel on Shiva IV.

Notable Characteristics of Species:

Purple

Flaws:

Shoot first, ask questions later- While Marz tries to be impartial, he's more inclined to be aggressive towards people based on their clothing and assumed profession. Example, if a person looks like a gang member, he is likely to be rougher talking to them.
Realist- Marz is a Realist due to past experience, he does not expect things to go according to plan so he prepares and somewhat distances himself from other people as to not get hurt.
Distant- Marz hasn't let anyone get close to him because if they do he is open to the dark side as he cares very fiercely for people. That is more important now than ever.

Skills:

Lightsaber Form I- Schii-Cho
Lightsaber Form III- Soresu, though he is much more skilled at Schii-Cho
Excellent Fighter Pilot- Marz is a very talented fighter pilot, though any ship bigger than that he has some trouble with.
Wildlife Expert- Marz loves wildlife of all kinds and studies them whenever he can.
Excellent Singer and Musician- Marz is a surprisingly talented singer and musician, any instrument he picks up he can become skilled at within a few weeks at most.
Devious thinker- Marz can be devious and deceitful when he wants to be, but he doesn't prefer it.
Linguistic- Marz has gone out of his way to learn the languages of many species.

Force capabilities:

Basic Jedi Abilities
Force Mind Trick- Marz has spent years developing this skill and it takes extremely strong-willed creatures to resist it.
Art of Movement- Marz's master believed that body and mind must be equally in shape and the force could make the body even stronger. Therefore, Marz learned the force ability the art of movement.
Animal Friendship- Marz's love of animals has translated into the force and so he finds it very easy to control even the strongest of creatures.
Crucitorn- Marz believes that the Jedi are the protectors of the galaxy and nothing should get past them. So he began to learn the force ability Crucitorn, to fight and endure even when his body can't anymore.

Biography:

Marz Jago was born on Alderaan in 3680 to a pair of shopkeepers. However, he had medical problems that had him born skinnier than what was considered healthy. As a result he would be unusually skinny until he became 15. The Great Galactic War had been going on for a year. The Jedi were always looking for force sensitive children. Marz's parents decided that he was destined for greater things and gave the Jed permission to take him in 3678. Growing up in the order, Marz always fell behind in physical activities due to his scrawny body. And even though he tried his hardest, he was always below average in physical performance. He made up for it in force aptitude and power, which he was definitely skilled at. He loved to learn about the different planets while growing up and especially the flora and fauna.

He passed the padawan trials. He constructed his lightsaber with astonishing precision. He was 11 years old. His first and only master was a human Jedi by the name of Yvette Ren. Yvette was a dedicated and loving Jedi, who thought all life was sacred, a view that Marz agreed with less and less as he got older. Yvette treated Marz as a partner, not a subordinate and he respected her immensely for that, among other things. Yvette knew they couldn't avoid the war and requested protecting positions instead of an assault position, although Marz would have much preferred to see action. Though it was impossible to avoid combat in the war if you were a Jedi. When Marz was 15, they traveled to Shiva IV to a Jedi enclave there. They were recruited to make allies with the local tribes to avoid any conflict. They were only there for 3 days however before the Sith attacked. They quickly overran the enclave. Knowing his master, they would both die trying to fight off the Sith. However, Marz had studied Shiva IV in extent previously. He knew he would have the best chance of survival in the desert. He had to get everyone else out of the enclave. Marz and Yvette directed all Jedi, Tribals, and civilians to the ships to escape. The Sith's arrogance had failed to account for the speed of their ships and they would be able to outmaneuver their guns.

As the ships began to take off, Marz told his master to leave with the ships, he would keep the Sith distracted. As expected she refused. Marz knew that if the Sith ground forces saw the ships leaving, they would alert they're main ship and blow them out of the sky. He used the force to propel his master onto a departing ship and jumped into the fray, effectively distracting the Sith. It worked and the Jedi were able to escape, though he can sense his master's anger and frustration. His skills were no match for three simultaneous Sith. He was quick thanks to his small frame, but he knew he couldn't get away by himself. One of the Sith slashed him across the chest, leaving a scar that would be there for the rest of his life. The pain from the attack made him pass out. When he awoke, he was in a camp. A Tribal camp. One of the 12 tribes of T'syriel. They had stormed the enclave and saved him. Marz was ever grateful and pledged to serve the chieftain faithfully until he could return to the Jedi. For the next 6 months he lived with the tribe. He gained muscle he had never know before. He became strong and tough, making strikes against the Sith who had taken up residence whenever he could. One day, about 2 weeks before the Jedi returned to Shiva IV, a Sith stormed the village Marz lived in with a squad of soldiers. Again, the Sith's arrogance showed, they underestimated the Tribe's ability to fight. Marx took on the Sith himself, receiving a slash would to his thigh in the process.

He was on one knee at the mercy of the Sith. But instead of ending him quickly, the Sith took this opportunity to taunt him. his arrogance was his downfall as Marz skewered him as he was reciting his monologue. The Sith looked at the young padawan in shock as he fell to the ground, dead. The tribe at a feast that night and gave Marz the Warrior's tattoo in honor of his service to the tribe. The Jedi returned and with Yvette leading the charge they took back Shiva IV from the Sith. Marz made his way back to the enclave and when Yvette saw him, she barely recognized him. He was shirtless, with defined chest and abdomen muscles with a large scar going diagonally across his chest. He was muscular overall, with a tattoo going down his neck and shoulder. His usually short neat hair, was now wild and sandy and he had a gleam in his eye that Yvette had never seen. But he greeted Yvette with a hug. The Jedi and tribes were on good terms and the tribes thanked them for removing the Sith. After a few more days they left for Coruscant. Marz was honored by the Jedi council for his honor and bravery and even received a medal of valor from the republic. Shortly after, Marz met a Coruscant street kid by the name of Cally. He fell in love soon after. But Cally was in trouble was in trouble with underworld gangs and was killed in 3664. Marz was thrown into a rage, finding the man responsible and slicing him down tihout a second thought. However, Yvette had been following him and explained to him that he was dangerously close to the dark side.

Marz saw she was right and vowed he would never get to so close ever again. Some battles with the Sith and a few years later, Marz became a Jedi Knight at 18. Yvette expressed how proud she was of him and kissed him on the cheek. It was the greatest day of Marz's life. The order sent him on many more combat missions throughout the years and he was appointed his Padawan, Kana Vapasi. He was 25 and she was 12. Though he didn't agree with Yvette's view on war, he took up her strategy of making his padawan his partner instead of subordinate. While he was determined not to become close to her, he came to think of her as family. They were on coruscant when the Sith attacked. They managed to avoid the Sith for 3 days. But they were cornered. He commanded Kana to flee and jumped into the fray, slicing down one of the Sith in a matter of seconds. But the other sith was much stronger. They fought furiously for 4 minutes straight, but the Sith sent the post powerful Force Choke he had ever seen. He was suspended in the air, struggling with all his might. And while he was giving the Sith the most trouble any Jedi had ever given him, he soon passed out. He only hoped Kana had escaped.

Personality and/or Motivation:

Marz is a very compassionate person, but he avoids getting close most other people. He thinks of the Jedi as servants of the people and that personal happiness must be sacrificed for the greater good, if not the Dark Side could overpower them. He deals with his enemies, especially the Sith, with little mercy. He will not kill an unarmed man, but if they draw a weapon on him, it will be bad. He has great respect for warriors and while he thinks the Sith are arrogant fools, he can't help but admire their combat prowess. He thinks pain and fear are earthly burdens that can be tossed away with the will of the individual. He thinks love is a necessary emotion, but he knows how it can lead to the dark side. He distances himself from most people to avoid forming attachments, with some few exceptions, but the future may force him to be an emotional crutch for other Jedi.

Player’s long term goals:

Serve the Republic
Find True Peace

Relations:

[WIP?]

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

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Star Wars: Coruscant Underworld [Always accepting!]

Zolar Lindemann

Name - Zolar Lindemann
Species - Gank
Gender - Male
Age - 25
Occupation - Independent Contractor, currently working as Gorro the Hutt's bodyguard and personal assassin.

Appearance -


Under his armor he is covered in yellow fur, with green eyes and an angular face. While considered not very good looking by his own species, he would be one of the most attractive to other species. He's rather tall for a Gank, 6 feet even. Her has broad shoulders and muscular physique.

Apparel - He wears yellow armor that comes with Night-Vision, thermal vision, has a lot of storage. It can withstand at least two blaster shots, Though the shots would knock him back and bruise whatever's underneath.
Weapons -
DC-19 "Stealth" Carbine
DD6 Blaster Pistol
IQA-11 Blaster Rifle

Equipment -
Datapad, for all your data organizing needs. Also has GPS and radio.
Grappling hook attached to his blaster pistol.
Cybernetic augments that enhances reflexes, endurance, and agility. Common with most Ganks.
Utility belt with some useful odds and ends.

Skills -
Excellent Marksman- Zolar is an excellent shot with any gun.
Skilled Navigator and Pilot- Zolar can fly and read star charts and maps fairly well.
Assassin Training- Zolar's mentor taught him everything he knows about the art of killing, and he's become very good at it.
Linguistic- Due to his profession, Zolar has learned to speak many languages.

Flaws -
Ruthless- Zolar doesn't have mercy for anyone he fights.
Proud- If Zolar's pride is in peril, he will do anything to save it.
Arrogant- More often than not, Zolar underestimates his enemies.
Greedy- Zolar is loyal to only one person. Himself. If someone offered more money to kill Gorro, he would do it in a second.
Tobacco Addict- Zolar often enjoys a smoke.

Personality - Though Zolar is an assassin, he has a moral code. No women and children. Everything else is fair game. He is arrogant and proud and would most likely get into a fight with anyone who says otherwise. Zolar only loves one person, himself. He is in this business for the money and will kill anyone to get there. He loved someone once and they died a horrible death. And he hasn't loved anyone since. He doesn't want power. He just wants to fight and get paid and one day retire.

Goals - Gather enough money to retire on a scenic planet to live out the rest of his days.

Backstory - Zolar Lindemann was born in 34 BBY on Nar Shadaa to a bounty hunter and a doctor. His Father, the bounty hunter, was Osra Lindemann and had fallen in love with a free clinic doctor, a human as well, which would explain Zolar's more gentle facial features than most Gank. But Osra didn't stay with Zolar's mother and left Nar Shadaa to continue his business of hunting sinners and saints alike. When Zolar was 6, his father began to pass on his knowledge. He taught him how to fire a blaster, how to fight hand to hand, how to fly a ship, everything he knew. And he finally let Zolar come with him on missions when Zolar was 13. Up until that point, he had been the supply man, support on his father's missions. But now they were partners and Zolar loved it.

When Zolar was 15, His father and him were hired by an anonymous client to set charges on the foundations of the Jedi temple. Osra accepted, which surprised Zolar. The pay must have been good. After weeks and weeks of planning and brainstorming, they set out for the Jedi temple. The plan went off without a hitch. They infiltrated the temple and set the charges. After narrowly avoiding security they exited and made their way to the rendezvous point, which was the Senate building. After meeting with a hooded agent who claimed the detonator and gave them their payment, they headed out. A few hours later, they were staying in an inn. It was just below the senate building, as Osra wanted some time to make sure he had everything to make it off world. Zolar went out to see the lights of courscant at night. He always thought they were amazing. He then heard a dull thud off of the dumpster down an alley. Zolar's hand immediately went to his blaster pistol. Other bounty hunters had come after them before and he knew they weren't above gunning down a teenager. He made his way down the alley cautiously and saw a severed robed arm and... a Jedi lightsaber! Zolar made sure the area was secure before he went to inspect the arm. It was that of a black human, possibly male. He grabbed the lightsaber out of the arm's hand and inspected it.

Zolar had never seen one before, though he had seen a Jedi or two throughout his travels. He fumbled with it for a minute before he managed to ignite it. A purple glowing blade screeched out of the hilt and illuminated the dark alley. He waved it around for a moment for slicing down on the dumpster, cutting it in half. He grinned as he deactivated it and went to show his father what he had found. When his father saw the lightsaber he said "You can keep it, but we're leaving tonight." And so they did, an hour before the clone army turned on the Jedi. They were traveling through space when it happened, to an outer rim planet for a job. Soon enough they started to hear that the Jedi sought to overthrow the republic and the Supreme Chancellor had ordered the Clone Army to exterminate all of them. Zolar then knew they had played some part in the defeat of the Jedi. His father said nothing, only that "I will be repaid for my efforts in more than just credits some day."

That day was 4 years later, on Kashyyyk in 15 BBY, when Osra and Zolar encountered a Jedi in hiding while perusing a suspected Rebel, who had made friends with the Jedi. The Jedi had walked out from the bushes and told them to go back and even attempted to manipulate they're mind. But they were strong willed and said they were going to get that bounty. Zolar remembers the Jedi sighing and activating his lightsaber, which screeched to life, glowing green. The Jedi swiped his hand and sent Zolar flying into the forest, smashing against a tree and dazing him. He struggled to his feet and heard the stomach dropping sound of lightsaber slicing through flesh and the follow up of a dull thud. Zolar's legs were shaking as he made his way towards the noise and he gazed upon his father's body with horror and rage. The Jedi turned towards him, a sympathetic look on his face. Zolar roared in rage, activating his own lightsaber. The Jedi's eyes widened in surprise, possibly in surprise at the color of the lightsaber, or at the fact Zolar had a lightsaber at all. In any case, he was too slow to block Zolar's sudden ferocious attack and he sliced the Jedi's sword arm off. Zolar slammed him to the ground and raised the lightsaber high in the air, preparing to deliver the final blow. Then he felt an explosive pain slam into his shoulder and he was thrown over the Jedi into the woods, falling down a steep incline.

He landed in a shallow creek, and he lie there for a second, taking in all that had happened. His father, dead. Just like that. His shoulder was searing with pain and was no doubt broken, along with some other bones from the combination of being thrown into a tree and tossed down a steep hill. He saw the lightsaber on the bank a few feet away. Zolar painfully crawled towards it, grabbing it and struggling to his feet. He knew he couldn't take on the Jedi and the rebel by himself. So he fled, making it back to his ship and fleeing Kashyyyk.

He continued the family business, learning more about wielding a lightsaber and completing jobs. When he was 23 he returned to Coruscant and made his way into the underworld. There he impressed Gorro the Hutt with his skills was hired his bodyguard and personal Assassin. He's been at Gorro's side ever since.

Jonas Tullonev

Name - Jonas Tullonev
Species - Human (Alderaan)
Gender - Male
Age - 26
Occupation - Smuggler

Appearance -


Apparel - Jonas's Outfit as seen above
Weapons - Dual DL-18 Blaster pistols, Frag Grenades, Combat Knife.
Equipment - Datapad, Grappling hook attachment, Code Cracker (For all advanced hacking needs), R3-D6 Droid 'Rex', The Star-Skipper (Currently in Hangar), Small tool kit

Skills
- Exceptional Pilot: Having spent time aboard ships all his life and needing to do some fast flying on more than a couple occasions, Jonas is a very skilled pilot.

-Silver Tongue: Jonas, being a 'legitimate business man' knows how to talk to people and if he can talk his way out of a situation rather than shooting his way out, he prefers the former.

-Droid technician: Jonas has been around droids all his life and knows how to repair and program them and ever since he got Rex, he needed to do that twice as much.

-Decent Shot: While he would like to talk his way out of all of his situations, he can't, so Jonas has learned to handle a gun, both big and small.

-Navigation Expert: Navigating and piloting go hand in hand, it was a necessity for Jonas to learn this and he did it as early as 10.

Flaws

-Money Driven: Jonas just wants to sell his cargo and get out, he doesn't care about anything else.

-Morally Gray: While Jonas is by no means an 'evil' person, when it comes to getting the job done, he may turn a blind eye to another person's suffering.

-Overly Cautious: Jonas isn't willing to take some risks that might endanger him or his cargo.

-Traumatized: After witnessing the slaughter of his Father's entire trade tycoon and barely escaping death himself, Jonas has constant nightmares and flashbacks.

-Distant: After the massacre of everybody he knew, the only thing he cares about is getting the job done. And maybe Rex. If anyone tries to get close to him, he'll simply disappear.

Personality - Jonas is a smuggler, driven by money and survival. He knows he won't make a decent salary to live off of working an honest living and after the destruction of the family business, he turned to illegal means of payment. He's not a good person or a bad one, but he'll turn a blind eye to other's suffering to help himself. He's wary at the best of times and paranoid at the worst, he has PTSD from witnessing the slaughter of hundreds at the hands of the empire. He hates both rebels and the empire equally and he just wants to live his life. He's distant with other people, hoping to keep most relationships strictly professional, his only true friend being his droid, Rex. If someone tries to get close to him, he'll just disappear one day, not likely to return for a long time.

Goals - Get paid for this cargo shipment and get the hell off Coruscant.

Backstory -

Jonas was born on Alderaan in 36 BBY. After giving birth, his mother left his father and they never saw her again. Feeling betrayed, Jonas's father left Alderaan with Jonas, as it was his mother's home planet. He started a trade goods service with a small freighter. So Jonas grew up on starships, traveling from planet to planet all over the galaxy. He was never told about his mother as when he brought it up, his father simply said "Don't worry about it." Jonas's father taught him how to pilot and navigate, how to fire a blaster and a turret, how to trade and barter. He taught Jonas everything he knew. Jonas first met the Jedi in 25 BBY, 3 years before the start of the clone wars. Their freighter and other ships in their growing trade fleet had been hijacked by pirates. Sending out a distress signal, a Jedi Master and her padawan came to save them. Jonas was amazed by their power and their laser swords (Or lightsabers, as he found out later). As the war approached, business ramped up, but so did the danger.

The Clone Wars was a time of prosperity and peril for Jonas and his father. They carried all kinds of cargo and goods through the galaxy and the danger of wartime made sure they were paid double. But it wasn't just the separatists they had to worry about. Pirates and specifically Hondo's Infamous Pirate fleet. And while most of their trading was done on the inner rim and core worlds, occasionally they had to make a trip to the outer rim. But everything changed when the Jedi were labeled as traitors by the Chancellor and hunted to extinction. Now it wasn't the pirates that were the problem, it was the growing restrictions and regulations. The republic changed to the empire, freedom to oppression. Jonas's father was an idealist and when he heard rumors about rebel cells, he sought them out. And so, they began supplying rebels all over the galaxy, getting paid for their supplies while also making their standard routes, they made the best of the new galaxy. But it didn't last.

In 17 BBY, Jonas was 19. His father's trade business had become a fleet, with more than 30 freighters working for him. His own small freighter had been replaced with a large cargo vessel with just over 100 workers on it, including Jonas as second in command. But The Empire found out about their dealings with rebels cells and they attacked. They boarded the ship, stormtroopers gunning down employees left and right. Jonas and his father made it down to the escape pods, none had been jettisoned. No one else had made it. They prepared a pod for deployment, but they were too slow. The troopers burst in, gunning down Jonas's father. On his fall, his father hit the launch button, sending Jonas into space. He drifted for a few days, miserable, before crash landing on a planet called Tatooine. There is where he met R3-D6 or as he nicknamed him after he bought him. He worked on tatooine for a year before he had enough to buy a trip to Alderaan on a freighter called the Star-Skipper. Halfway through the flight, he learned that his pilot was one of the pirates that hijacked their ship years ago. After a brief fight, Jonas threw the pirate out of the airlock and claimed the ship for himself, which he imagined had been stolen anyway. After that he took on the occupation of smuggling, traveling the galaxy selling and transporting illegal cargo.

Jonas ended up in 3030 on business, as always, but he would soon find he would be staying loner than anticipated....

Blood Act I~ Ghosts of the Past

I'm sorry to say this, but I'm gonna have to push back my post...just found my hamster dead in his cage an hour ago and I just can't write right now. I know it seems silly 'cause a lot of people don't think of hamsters as family like they do dogs or cats, but he was really special to me.

@Apokalipse

Take your time.

Star Wars: Coruscant Underworld [Always accepting!]

Name - Zolar Lindemann
Species - Gank
Gender - Male
Age - 25
Occupation - Independent Contractor, currently working as Gorro the Hutt's bodyguard and personal assassin.

Appearance -


Under his armor he is covered in yellow fur, with green eyes and an angular face. While considered not very good looking by his own species, he would be one of the most attractive to other species. He's rather tall for a Gank, 6 feet even. Her has broad shoulders and muscular physique.

Apparel - He wears yellow armor that comes with Night-Vision, thermal vision, has a lot of storage. It can withstand at least two blaster shots, Though the shots would knock him back and bruise whatever's underneath.
Weapons -
DC-19 "Stealth" Carbine
DD6 Blaster Pistol
IQA-11 Blaster Rifle

Equipment -
Datapad, for all your data organizing needs. Also has GPS and radio.
Grappling hook attached to his blaster pistol.
Cybernetic augments that enhances reflexes, endurance, and agility. Common with most Ganks.
Utility belt with some useful odds and ends.

Skills -
Excellent Marksman- Zolar is an excellent shot with any gun.
Skilled Navigator and Pilot- Zolar can fly and read star charts and maps fairly well.
Assassin Training- Zolar's mentor taught him everything he knows about the art of killing, and he's become very good at it.
Linguistic- Due to his profession, Zolar has learned to speak many languages.

Flaws -
Ruthless- Zolar doesn't have mercy for anyone he fights.
Proud- If Zolar's pride is in peril, he will do anything to save it.
Arrogant- More often than not, Zolar underestimates his enemies.
Greedy- Zolar is loyal to only one person. Himself. If someone offered more money to kill Gorro, he would do it in a second.
Tobacco Addict- Zolar often enjoys a smoke.

Personality - Though Zolar is an assassin, he has a moral code. No women and children. Everything else is fair game. He is arrogant and proud and would most likely get into a fight with anyone who says otherwise. Zolar only loves one person, himself. He is in this business for the money and will kill anyone to get there. He loved someone once and they died a horrible death. And he hasn't loved anyone since. He doesn't want power. He just wants to fight and get paid and one day retire.

Goals - Gather enough money to retire on a scenic planet to live out the rest of his days.

Backstory - Zolar Lindemann was born in 34 BBY on Nar Shadaa to a bounty hunter and a doctor. His Father, the bounty hunter, was Osra Lindemann and had fallen in love with a free clinic doctor, a human as well, which would explain Zolar's more gentle facial features than most Gank. But Osra didn't stay with Zolar's mother and left Nar Shadaa to continue his business of hunting sinners and saints alike. When Zolar was 6, his father began to pass on his knowledge. He taught him how to fire a blaster, how to fight hand to hand, how to fly a ship, everything he knew. And he finally let Zolar come with him on missions when Zolar was 13. Up until that point, he had been the supply man, support on his father's missions. But now they were partners and Zolar loved it.

When Zolar was 15, His father and him were hired by an anonymous client to set charges on the foundations of the Jedi temple. Osra accepted, which surprised Zolar. The pay must have been good. After weeks and weeks of planning and brainstorming, they set out for the Jedi temple. The plan went off without a hitch. They infiltrated the temple and set the charges. After narrowly avoiding security they exited and made their way to the rendezvous point, which was the Senate building. After meeting with a hooded agent who claimed the detonator and gave them their payment, they headed out. A few hours later, they were staying in an inn. It was just below the senate building, as Osra wanted some time to make sure he had everything to make it off world. Zolar went out to see the lights of courscant at night. He always thought they were amazing. He then heard a dull thud off of the dumpster down an alley. Zolar's hand immediately went to his blaster pistol. Other bounty hunters had come after them before and he knew they weren't above gunning down a teenager. He made his way down the alley cautiously and saw a severed robed arm and... a Jedi lightsaber! Zolar made sure the area was secure before he went to inspect the arm. It was that of a black human, possibly male. He grabbed the lightsaber out of the arm's hand and inspected it.

Zolar had never seen one before, though he had seen a Jedi or two throughout his travels. He fumbled with it for a minute before he managed to ignite it. A purple glowing blade screeched out of the hilt and illuminated the dark alley. He waved it around for a moment for slicing down on the dumpster, cutting it in half. He grinned as he deactivated it and went to show his father what he had found. When his father saw the lightsaber he said "You can keep it, but we're leaving tonight." And so they did, an hour before the clone army turned on the Jedi. They were traveling through space when it happened, to an outer rim planet for a job. Soon enough they started to hear that the Jedi sought to overthrow the republic and the Supreme Chancellor had ordered the Clone Army to exterminate all of them. Zolar then knew they had played some part in the defeat of the Jedi. His father said nothing, only that "I will be repaid for my efforts in more than just credits some day."

That day was 4 years later, on Kashyyyk in 15 BBY, when Osra and Zolar encountered a Jedi in hiding while perusing a suspected Rebel, who had made friends with the Jedi. The Jedi had walked out from the bushes and told them to go back and even attempted to manipulate they're mind. But they were strong willed and said they were going to get that bounty. Zolar remembers the Jedi sighing and activating his lightsaber, which screeched to life, glowing green. The Jedi swiped his hand and sent Zolar flying into the forest, smashing against a tree and dazing him. He struggled to his feet and heard the stomach dropping sound of lightsaber slicing through flesh and the follow up of a dull thud. Zolar's legs were shaking as he made his way towards the noise and he gazed upon his father's body with horror and rage. The Jedi turned towards him, a sympathetic look on his face. Zolar roared in rage, activating his own lightsaber. The Jedi's eyes widened in surprise, possibly in surprise at the color of the lightsaber, or at the fact Zolar had a lightsaber at all. In any case, he was too slow to block Zolar's sudden ferocious attack and he sliced the Jedi's sword arm off. Zolar slammed him to the ground and raised the lightsaber high in the air, preparing to deliver the final blow. Then he felt an explosive pain slam into his shoulder and he was thrown over the Jedi into the woods, falling down a steep incline.

He landed in a shallow creek, and he lie there for a second, taking in all that had happened. His father, dead. Just like that. His shoulder was searing with pain and was no doubt broken, along with some other bones from the combination of being thrown into a tree and tossed down a steep hill. He saw the lightsaber on the bank a few feet away. Zolar painfully crawled towards it, grabbing it and struggling to his feet. He knew he couldn't take on the Jedi and the rebel by himself. So he fled, making it back to his ship and fleeing Kashyyyk.

He continued the family business, learning more about wielding a lightsaber and completing jobs. When he was 23 he returned to Coruscant and made his way into the underworld. There he impressed Gorro the Hutt with his skills was hired his bodyguard and personal Assassin. He's been at Gorro's side ever since.

Blood Act I~ Ghosts of the Past

@ApokalipseI addressed your character, Cosima I believe, at the carousel.