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Sorry for not posting yet! Been a bit busy ^^'

Hopefully I can post later tho. I'm gonna be gone this weekend to go see family so I don't wanna build up too much of a posting gap.
@ReaptheMusic Let me know if I overdid it or if there's anything you want me to change. I tried talking to you on skype but you were AFK and I didn't wanna wait that long ^^'





Bonny tucked herself to the wall as her Semblance informed her of a massive presence hurtling down the Retrograde's gluttinous harvester-maw. Dirt? Maybe a boulder?

No.

Bonny felt the strange ruffle of black feathers lightly brushing against her as a whole Nevermore, a forty meter-long creature large enough to pick up and carry grown Hunters and Huntresses in its talons, slid down the wormy Grimm's gullet, its beady red eyes staring at her pitifully as the two of them just narrowly avoided being dragged down with it.

It eats its own kind?! Bonny thought to herself, shocked. Sunlight poked through the roof of the vertical tunnel. The creature's mouth was still open. Breaking its teeth would've been fun, but there was no arguing that this was the best time to go if there ever was one.

"All ashore who's goin' ashore, lass!" Bonny said with an urgent tone, knocking the box of red Dust out of Rowan's hands and pulling the trigger on her cannon. The resulting explosion was... magnificent.

Imagine every outrunning-the-fireball scene in every movie you've ever seen, times a hundred, and then imagine it inside a living thing, bursting like a fleshy balloon behind you as you rocket out of its mouth and into the atmosphere, propelled by the blast wave, with enough speed and force to peel the skin off your naked bones (if you didn't have Aura that is). The creature howled in earsplitting agony as its hide split apart but the sound never reached Bonny and Rowan as they climbed higher and higher into the sky, past even the clouds. At this point their flapping gums looked like a dog who'd stuck his head out a car window. Finally they came to a stop and they looked at the planet miles below them. Bonny's eyes widened.

"Well shiver me timbers," she said in a timid, disbelieving voice. "We're pretty blasted high, ain't we?"

Then they started to fall.

"Oohhhhhh shit! Oh shit oh shit oh shit!" she cursed as she grabbed Rowan tightly. "Batten down the hatches, girl! Batten down the bloody hatches!"

They came in hot. Way, way too hot. Doing everything she could to break their fall, Bonny started firing indiscriminately to slow them down, and to try and land back in the forest instead of crashing straight into Beacon. It didn't seem to work, at least not as quickly as they needed it too. As they rapidly approached their LZ, she caught sight of the Retrograde, still alive and thrashing despite its bottom half being peeled apart like a banana. That's when she got an idea.

"Hold me tight, Rowan!" she said. "We're gonna give this wormy son-of-a-whore his last heave-ho into Davy Jones' Locker."

After all, there was nothing softer to break their fall than a huge hunk of tenderized meat.

Gripping her cannon like a club, Bonny raised it above her head. She winced as she felt her muscles cry out in protest. Why? She shouldn't be tiring out this early! Had something in that worm's stomach depleted her Aura? Regardless, she swung it as hard as she could just as they fell on top of the Grimm's giant head, smashing it into the ground with the resulting momentum and finishing it off for good.

Bonny laid sprawled out on her back as the Dust cleared. She was covered in Grimm goo.

Oh well, it'll dry off once the big thing dissolves, she thought. Which, given its size, might take a while. She sat up, trying to find footing in the swampy puddle of mashed Grimm beneath their feet.

"You okay, Rowan?" she said as she tried to stand up and give her a hand. "Everything ship-shape?"

Instead she ended up tripping and landing facefirst in the goo. She felt so goddamned tired. What happened to her? She never wore herself out this quickly during practice. Her Aura was nearly depleted.

"You mind helping me up, lass?" she asked weakly. I think me old bones... me old cartilage took more of a beatin' than we thought."

Then the ground started shaking. The earth was quaking. Bonny's mind (and body) were achin'. But who was makin' it? Bonny groaned.

"Oh what now?"
That's why I asked lol
So is everyone okay with moving forward a bit after my next post, or are there still things we'd all like to do?
Also @Chickn, Bonny meant for Rowan to punch its teeth out once they were already rocketing out of there xD
Well, I'm all in for round two. I'll have my sheet up sometime today or tomorrow, just want a little bit of time to check back over the old one and fine-tune as necessary.

In the meantime, here's a little something special for whoever hasn't seen it.


I love you, Fish. Just thought you should know that.
Any more biker jackets and pompadours and I think we'll end up collapsing the RP into some sort of delinquent singularity.

Like at this point we have so many delinquents we're gonna start needing some sort of hierarchy (with Corey at the top of course) xD
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I'm certainly down for her bein' a member of the Bratva, but I feel like I should say that if that's the case, (i) I'll be playing her father (for later plot reasons) and (ii) She isn't necessarily in regular contact with The Zodiac Killers, either - they're daddy's toys. Is that alright? If so, we're grand.
Glad to see you back, though! Maybe we'll arrange Ram Jam to appear as an NPC, that'd be a fun little easter egg.

The character portion is approved, but I'm marginally concerned about the stand. Not because I think it'll be OP but because I'm vaguely worried it might be less powerful than you desire? Most of the story will follow The Rats so you might not find much in the way of opportunities to create the horde you might so desire. But once we've parsed that part out, we can add you to the CS tab.

NOTE: I feel as though I should mention I'm a fairly competent Russian speaker, if you ever want me to put things into Cyrillic for you (because anglicised Russian never does look quite right) I'm always happy to translate whatever ends up in my PMs.


Awesome! Glad to be back ^^

As for her Stand, I can also see that being a problem unless she's just like stealthily dropping hairs in everyone's food all the time lol. That being said, she already has a small group at school (who once again are not the B-Rats) "indoctrinated" by her Stand, and granting herself and the Rats superhuman Stand strength in addition to their own Stands is already a somewhat potent ability, just not an OP one. Maybe in order to beef it up I could add some kind of telepathy or something in addition to the brainwashing? The easiest buff of course would be to just remove the part about how the Stand gets weaker the more it splits up its power, but I'll leave that to your discretion.

Also that'd be great. I was thinking the same thing, honestly (the part about anglicized Russian never looking quite right I mean). Do all the phrases and insults I have listed in the sheet check out, btw?
Edited my above post with my draft. I hope it's okay if I play someone from the local mafia family. They kinda caught my interest ^^'

EDIT: Also woooow, the Boomtown Rats are so far like 99% delinquents xD
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