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"I feel like I could eat the whole world raw."
10 yrs ago
When one of us goes to war. We all go to war.
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10 yrs ago
Here's a limmerick There once was a team out of Haven with an outlook as black as a raven they were meant to fight BANK but our hearts all but sank WHEN WE HEARD THAT THEY'D RUN HOME AND TURNED CRAVEN
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10 yrs ago
When you realize you gotta make an IC intro post and just '...'
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10 yrs ago
Big things are coming! Stay tuned ~
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Definitely interested, please keep me posted, hopefully an OOC comes up in a couple days or sooner!
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Yuen listened to her cousin describe the target. They were given the go ahead to use extreme force if necessary. Permission to kill this man who lusted after her families eyes. She saw no problem with that, in fact for her at this injunction it was a preferred outcome. He couldn’t come after anymore Uchiha as long as they put him out of business. But she didn’t voice this thought, she had no clue what Saburo would say she had only just met him, and she knew Daiki even less so. Saburo described the others that they would need to seek out after apprehending their target, it made sense. Anyone who allowed this monstrosity to continue his actions deserved punishment, perhaps not as severe, but punishment all the same.

The three Uchiha clan members leapt from the tops of the buildings in the distance she could see the towering architectural buildings that were common for that part of the town. It was only once she was glancing off into the distance that she realized it had been raining for quite some time, she couldn't remember the last time it hadn't been raining. She glanced over at Saburo and Daiki, they didn’t seem to be phased. Good, she would think, the rain only benefited this mission. Before long their nighttime promenade ceased and Yuen found herself encroaching a large apartment complex.

Daiki was told to go across the way into an adjacent building and Yuen to stay with Saburo, because she was a Chunin. She was the weak link in this mission. Increasingly powerful waves of doubt shot forth from Yuen, she was a liability, why was she even there? But before she could question herself further she received her instructions. She knocked on the door and as she did Saburo’s hands quickly melded into multiple handseals. Before she could blink he had taken the form as two attractive women she was flanked by them.

She felt a presence approaching the door and looked outwards towards Daiki’s entry point. All seemed well for his flank. All that would be needed was for their distraction to go off without a hitch, judging by Yuen’s new company. She was pretty sure it would be fine.

And then the door opened.


Before Yuen’s second glass had arrived, her cousin did. She was greeted by a younger man, perhaps around her age, though Yuen had never been the best at estimating the amount of time one had spent on this world. Especially with Shinobi, some who had seen loss and had received scars that would last a lifetime had yet to even graduate the academy. Then every once in a while a happy go lucky Jonin would be spotted, as if nothing in his or her life had ever failed to meet their expectations. It was a strange world they lived in.

“Hello, cousin.” Saburo let himself underneath the curtain that acted as a door. Yuen didn’t turn to greet him while it was true they were most certainly cousins, she hadn’t truly met any of the other members of the Uchiha clan. His significance lay with the fact that his Gunbai, firmly kept within his grasp was undeniably one that Madara Uchiha had used in one lifetime. A relic, a treasured artifact in Uchiha culture. It was clear to anyone who knew the history of their clan that he was important. And what did Yuen have to show of her importance? An underdeveloped Sharingan and half-baked Bukijutsu.

“I knew that the Uchiha had fallen deep.. But as low to visit places like these, I never had imagined.” Most may have felt shame, dishonor or anger at these words, but they spurred a chuckle from Yuen’s dark sense of humor.

“Yes cousin, you’re not mistaken. It is good to finally meet you, I’m sure you’ve heard and seen very little of me, you’ll have to forgive my mother’s training regimen is hardly allowing of free time.” Yuen said as Saburo scanned her. She did the same to him, he most certainly had the physique of a shinobi and it seemed he was wearing the guise of an 11th corps as well. Certainly impressive, if she could one day achieve that perhaps her mother would see more of Yuen.

Without another word spoken between the two of them Saburo exited the bar and Yuen followed suit, placing some Ryo on the counter before departing. A cold breeze followed her out of the warm bar and Yuen felt her skin come alive with the sensation, but she simply kept pace behind Saburo, waiting for him to speak once more.

“The 11th corps had been chasing this man for a while, but we never got the okay to take him down. Zeno Hakarasu considered it a danger to the public, disregarding the harm that might befall the world if the Yakuza get their hands on even more Sharingan. It's a powerful tool we have, one that shouldn't be in the hands of those with bad intentions, and more over, those that lack the self control to use our tool.” Yuen listened intently, nodding to show as much. However at the mention of their eyes, their power as a tool, Yuen found herself glaring at the ground.

“Perhaps your eyes cousin, however mine have barely developed since I was only thirteen years old.” She said, shame flowing up through her body and escaping with each word. But she was snapped out of it as a hand was placed on her shoulder.

“Tell me cousin, what kind of gifts do you like?”

”I want nothing more than to bring honor to our family. For my eyes to surpass any of those who would fight us, for my mother to be proud and rest. I want to become a worthy kunoichi and Uchiha.” Yuen spoke, each word sending a greater wave of confidence out towards her cousin.

But it seemed there was another young man who had joined them. He held with him a sword attached to a black harness, the sword hung around his side.

He took one hand from his pocket and waved at Yuen and Saburo. “Sorry about the wait. Or not. I’m not sure how long you two’ve been here. Let’s get this Fuyushi guy. I’m still not comfortable with being called an Uchiha, but I don’t like the thought of someone stealing other people eyes. It sickening really. Especially from my ... r-relatives.”
Yuen turned back to Saburo ready to begin her mission. She deftly made sure both of her Fuma shuriken on her sides were harnessed in.

“What’s our first move cousin?”

It Runs in the Family


”Again Yuen.” Her mother ordered.

Yuen’s heart was pounding in her ears and she could feel sweat moving down her rapidly expanding and compressing chest. She reached to her side and withdrew two shuriken and a kunai, each with some metal string attached to them. She inhaled deeply before beginning her assault.

She opened her eyes, the Sharingan whirling as it obtained its target. Yuen launched a shuriken and kunai to the right and left of her mother who did not even blink. As Yuen threw her second shuriken she pulled on the kunai’s cord propelling the second shuriken faster than ever but it was deflected by her mother.

”Your form is weak, pitiful for a woman your age.” Her mother lectured, untangling the kunai and shuriken from the trees they were latched onto and handing them back to her daughter. ”You’re done for today, go see if you can’t figure out what’s going on.” She spat with a disgusted tone ringing clearly through her voice.

Yuen just nodded, placing her tools back in her pouch.

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Having changing into more comfortable clothing Yuen walked into her dining room about three hours later, the sun was setting beautifully illuminating the room in an orange-red bask.

“Sit down Yuen.” Her mother said sitting at the table, a half drank bottle of sake beside a letter that had just been opened. Yuen’s name was clearly visible on it.

“Yes mother?” Yuen asked softly, but with a certain readiness. The letter could only mean one thing.

“You have a mission it seems. An opportunity to make life here in Konoha better for everyone who bears our eyes.” Yuen’s face hardened, she knew that this mission meant more to her mother than her own daughter being born. This was an opportunity for the world to see what she had transformed her daughter into. No longer was she a weak cowardly girl from the Uchiha clan. She was a machine, one meant to preserve their honor, and protect the clan completely.

“You will meet tonight with two other young men who share our eyes. They will be able to find you, I’m sure; a drunken lecher could find you dressed as you are.” Her mother said cruelly. This roused Yuen to readjust her loose fitting clothes.

“I’ll change mother, don’t worry.” Yuen spoke, her voice was calm and she showed no signs of anxiety or fear. But her mother knew her tell. Yuen's fingers tightly wrapped themselves over her knees, gripping at something, not even Yuen was sure of what.

“We will debrief as soon as you finish this mission. Do not disappoint me Yuen.”

Yuen found herself shrugging off her baggy clothes and wrapping herself in bandages. Not because she was hurt, but just so that she had the freedom of movement a kunoichi needed on a mission without worrying about what she was wearing. Every bandage that wrapped itself around her form found itself covering a scar of a fight. Yuen had only truly fought a few combatants, there was the Chunin exams and a few missions that got complicated while she was a Genin. However she had fought her mother at least 300 times.

Some in the village found themselves disgusted by their attitude towards training. It was that one had to be prepared to end the other’s life otherwise nothing would be learned from the engagement. It would simply be wasted time.

As soon as Yuen had dressed herself she headed out, the sun setting as she exited the Uchiha compound. She had directions to wait for her soon to be teammates, thusly she went to her usual pre-mission spot. Surely, they’d be able to find her there.

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She walked into the small Sake bar and gave a small nod to the server there, taking a spot at the bar. He left a small cup of Sake and left her to be by herself while she began to mentally review her teammates.

"Thank you Kentou" Yuen said smiling warmly to the barkeep; wrapping her scarred and calloused hands around the cup. Both were said to sport the Sharingan, there’s was probably more advanced than hers. She had a notably weaker Sharingan than most other Uchiha at her age. She hadn’t yet developed her third tomoe in either eye. It was something she desperately wanted to achieve.

The Sake bar was interesting because it wasn’t typical in that it didn’t require a certain age from its trusted customers. Yuen had first stumbled in after her first failed mission. She was only sixteen years old, had just taken on a mission as a Chunin. It was a solo mission, a trader required escort from one side of the Land of Fire to another. He passed around the time they should’ve been passing Konoha. It was something that she had feared happening ever since her mother had begun her tutelage.

When Yuen was on her way back from her debriefing from said mission she stumbled into the bar. Dreading returning home weeks early and seeing her mother. A drink was left on the bar for her that was replaced by another until she woke up the next day with a warm towel on her head. She and her mother never had the conversation about that failed mission, something Yuen is incredibly grateful for.

Ever since that day she has returned before every mission, gotten a drink before the mission and collected herself. She hadn’t failed a mission since. But it felt less like a streak and more like she was hanging on to a cliff, the only difference was that her grip showed no signs of letting up.
That sounds alright to me, thanks!
I'll do that soon! So me making a second character should be alright then?
Must've just forgotten to delete it, I did in my word document :P
Changes were made I believe!
It should also be noted that the shadow shuriken technique isn't actually a shadow clone technique. It's the tactic of hiding on Fuma Shuriken in the other's shadow, still gotta use two to use it however. At least that was my understanding of it.
I'll make the necessary changes and replace the Jutsu that have been denied. Thanks for your time!
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