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Rookery said
Naaaah, ain't touching that :P I'm loyal to the bone Dota 2 :)) Boboclown89, you have some typos and spacing errors, you should fix it up, posting standards :)AND ALSO: I already see some potential plot directions coming up :D


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Also, I play LoL and Dota, and used to play Smite, but I don't play that anymore. I play Dota more because you can play with all the heroes without having to use in-game currency, but in LoL it's refreshing to play a game with it's art style, and it's different heroes. I haven't bought any heroes yet, but my favorite one is Annie :3

my favorite Dota character would have to be Earthshaker, Night Stalker, and that voodoo guy I can't remember the name of but he heals people and lolz
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alright, editedAlso, I play LoL and Dota, and used to play Smite, but I don't play that anymore. I play Dota more because you can play with all the heroes without having to use in-game currency, but in LoL it's refreshing to play a game with it's art style, and it's different heroes. I haven't bought any heroes yet, but my favorite one is Annie :3my favorite Dota character would have to be Earthshaker, Night Stalker, and that voodoo guy I can't remember the name of but he heals people and lolz


You still have one spacing problem. Add a gap here (there are also typos, edited in the quote below):

Dan Evary laid back in the fields outside of town. He often did this, as it was far away from the crowds and the people. His friend was also there, and they were talking. Talking about what? Anything that came to mind, really. He liked having long conversations about anything with friends and other close people he trusted, it was calming and relieved his nerves. When they were talking, his friend got a call on his phone. He answered it and responded to the person's questions.

"I have to go, bye Dan." he said finally as he put away his phone and began getting up.
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"Bye." he said simply, nothing else needed to be said. As his friend left, he packed up his things and headed back to town, as well. He caught a bus and sat on it, when he got a text on his phone. He was sitting at the back of the bus where no one else was sitting. "Murdered girl found outside of Academy." the text read, surprising Dan. He got off at the crime scene instead of his apartment.

When he saw it, his reaction was shock and surprise. To think someone had been murdered at the Academy... unthinkable, but it was true. He hoped to play a role in helping out, he'd been told by his friends that he was observant, and he hoped that would come true.


The name of the hero is Witch Doctor, love that hero. You can troll other players so hard with him :))
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Better now?

And yeah, throwing the stun orb and two heroes try to run away but they both end up getting stunned every second, then you summon a ward and they die :)
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Better now?And yeah, throwing the stun orb and two heroes try to run away but they both end up getting stunned every second, then you summon a ward and they die :)


Yeah, it's better now. Everybody should try to keep cleans neat :D

Yeah, heroes who can summon always get the full blown effect of the stun :P Also the ward now has increase cast range.
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The first time I tried LoL people got really REALLY mad in the chat cuz I had no idea how to play. Never touched it again
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The first time I tried LoL people got really REALLY mad in the chat cuz I had no idea how to play. Never touched it again


That's normal in MOBA. Everybody calls anybody a noob. It's MOBA culture, trashtalking.
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That's normal in MOBA. Everybody calls anybody a noob. It's MOBA culture, trashtalking.


I'm not sure why that even happens, considering how many heroes there are, it doesn't matter if you have 1000 hours, you find a new hero you never played a play it, you will mess up something when playing them
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I'm not sure why that even happens, considering how many heroes there are, it doesn't matter if you have 1000 hours, you find a new hero you never played a play it, you mess up something when playing them


It's only the casual players who do that. The pros don't act like total dicks (asides from a few). Also, it is possible to be decent in all the heroes in D2, I've been playing dota for 8 years now, so I know the ins and outs of all the heroes, but I've only mastered a handful :P
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That's normal in MOBA. Everybody calls anybody a noob. It's MOBA culture, trashtalking.


I have no problem with trash talk, I've played plenty of CoD and Halo. But this was a whole new level of anger. The game looks fun and I wanna play, but I don't want to deal with a crappy community.
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I have no problem with trash talk, I've played plenty of CoD and Halo. But this was a whole new level of anger. The game looks fun and I wanna play, but I don't want to deal with a crappy community.


Yup, I guess I just have a thicker skin and more patience :)) Then again, it's part of my job description to deal with a-holes.
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I have no problem with trash talk, I've played plenty of CoD and Halo. But this was a whole new level of anger. The game looks fun and I wanna play, but I don't want to deal with a crappy community.


Konica the league community does have some absolutely atrocious people, but if you press tab, you can mute specific players on your team, or the opposing team and just simply say. "(Insert rage players name here) I'm going to mute you, if you want to communicate use pings." and mute immediately. There will be times where you absolutely hate the game, and other times where you absolutely love it. It's a very bitter sweet game lol. Just play it. If you haven't gotten to level 30 yet, I really recommend you do. :P
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Okay guys, important. I've updated the OOC and added a more detailed explanation (with examples). Please inform me if you have read it, so that I know we're all in the same page.
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I've read the new stuff and posted. Excuse the messy quality ;w;
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I've read the new stuff and posted. Excuse the messy quality ;w;


Nah, the formatting is good :) So that leaves Polyphemus and BlackCat. Guys, feel free to post your character intro, then we have to wait for Mr Allen J to provide a scenario.
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I've read it :D
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Konica the league community does have some absolutely atrocious people, but if you press tab, you can mute specific players on your team, or the opposing team and just simply say. "(Insert rage players name here) I'm going to mute you, if you want to communicate use pings." and mute immediately. There will be times where you absolutely hate the game, and other times where you absolutely love it. It's a very bitter sweet game lol. Just play it. If you haven't gotten to level 30 yet, I really recommend you do. :P


I wish I knew about muting sooner

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Okay guys, important. I've updated the and added a more detailed explanation (with examples). Please inform me if you have read it, so that I know we're all in the same page.


read it
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I forgot to include Mysteries and Plot Penalties:

Mysteries - Mysteries are important plot points that require answers else a plot loophole is generated. They may be answered by the players. The GM will naturally fill in plot loopholes.

Suspicion and Plot Penalties – Suspicion is an abstract concept within the RPverse hence it can’t be track. If character generates suspicion they incur a plot penalty. Plot Penalties shouldn’t be considered as suspicion points since one can incur them multiple ways (conflicting scenarios). They function more like credibility trackers. If a character incurs more and more plot penalties, the least credible they become.

Plot Penalties will never prevent a player from posting. They can however force truths, change or add statements, provide character traits (such as boy/girlfriend of the victim, having an affair with the victim’s boy/girlfriend, hospitalized, etc.). Plot Penalties highly depend on the scenario from which it was generated.
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I sense a plot point for my character >:)
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I sense a plot point for my character >:)


Oh reallllllllly? *laughs*
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