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It's an interesting start, though I do agree that the "Year One Genesis" as we could call it could use some revisions. I am fairly pleasantly surprised by most of the history though. I'd suggest leaving room for regular Hulk to exist and so forth instead of negating him completely.
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It's an interesting start, though I do agree that the "Year One Genesis" as we could call it could use some revisions. I am fairly pleasantly surprised by most of the history though. I'd suggest leaving room for regular Hulk to exist and so forth instead of negating him completely.


Yeah, I was planning on hulking out Banner and the rest of the crew later on. Or at least keeping that possibility on the table, in case someone else wants to give him a run.
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Shouldn't Banner be the OG Hulk, though, considering he's the parent character? Would there not be a way to leave it open and still get your Ross stuff in as well? Just a thought.
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Right, here's my application for the Immortal Iron Fist.
| Identity |
Daniel "Danny" Rand-Kai A.K.A. The Immortal Iron Fist




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Martial Arts-First and foremost Daniel Rand-Kai is one of the greatest martial artists on Earth, taught by masters with an immortal lifetime of experience with methods that would seem impossible to ordinary men. He is a master of all of the martial arts of K'un-Lun and many of the martial arts of Earth, including styles of fighting that have been unknown to most mortals for thousands of years. More mundanely he is a master of Ninjutsu, Jujitsu, Aikido, all forms of Shaolin Kung Fu, Karate, Judo, Boxing and even informal street-fighting techniques. He has complete mastery of nearly all martial arts weaponry and weapon styles, and is skilled enough at pressure point techniques to effectively use them against superhuman opponents and even beings whose physiology is completely inhuman.

Chi Manipulation and Augmentation-Thanks to his training in K'un-Lun, Danny is able to manipulate his chi to enhance his strength, speed, reflexes, durability, endurance, agility and senses to superhuman levels, although doing this usually takes some concentration and leaves him greatly drained afterward.

Chi of Shou-Lao-Thanks to plunging his fists into the molten heart of the legendary dragon Shou-Lao the Undying, Danny can call upon the dragon's immense and powerful chi and focus it into his fist. While this is primarily used for his signature Iron Fist ability, Danny has occasionally been able to utilize the Chi of Shou-Lao to heal himself and others in times of great desperation and it may have other functions as well, unknown to him. Danny's main usage is focusing the Chi of Shou Lao into his hands in order to make them practically invulnerable and capable of striking with massive concussive force. Although "Becoming like a thing of Iron" is how it was phrased in ancient K'un-Lun, the Iron Fist technique is capable of easily shattering or shredding through iron, steel and much harder and denser substances with relative ease. What's more, Danny can focus more of Shou-Lao's chi into his fists for stronger strikes and has yet to reach his maximum power with the Iron Fist.

Meditation and Body Control-Thanks to meditative exercises learned in K'un-Lun Danny is able to exercise complete mastery over his body, enabling him to control his breathing and heartbeat well enough to slow them to a state indistinguishable from death, deaden himself to all pain, greatly slow the effects of drugs and toxins on his body, go days without sleep and adapt himself to a wide variety of environments with relative ease.

Peak-Human conditioning-Danny's incredibly intensive training in K'un-Lun means that his body is trained and conditioned to the peak potential of an unassisted human, making him just short of a Steve Rogers-level of physically fit even without the use of his chi.

Acrobatics-As part of his training in K'un-Lun, Danny was honed into a highly skilled acrobat, enabling him to maneuver through environments as diverse as the mountainous slopes outside K'un-Lun, the twisted jungles of the H'ylthri and the urban sprawl of New York city with equal ease, speed and grace.

Stealth-Though not as skilled as some, Danny's mastery of ninjutsu includes training in the arts of concealment, deception and stealth.

Multi-Lingual-Danny is fluent in numerous languages and dialects used throughout China, as well as American English and Japanese.

Some Knowledge of the Occult-For someone who professes to totally lack any interest in or aptitude for magic Daniel Rand-Kai possesses a surprising amount of knowledge regarding the mystic arts, supernatural lore and arcane secrets mankind is typically not meant to know. However, Danny himself will swear-up-and-down that he's hardly an expert in such matters, instead insisting that growing up in the high society of K'un-Lun necessitates a basic understanding of such things.

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I want to successfully weave Iron Fist into the Maximum Comics universe while also drawing on his lore to create stories that are well-crafted and self-aware while staying true to the character's Wuxia and Kung-Fu B-Movie influences in a way that's fun to write and to read. Overall I want to collaborate with everyone to have a fun time, make something cool and expand the Maximum Comics universe for the better, especially where its' martial artists are concerned.

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@Gowi Hrm. Probably. I'd need to re-work the whole gamma bomb instance, as well as Banner's personality, though. Maybe he'd give his blood in willingly for testing, instead of going nuts and running off? Or both he AND Ross went to save Rick?

I'd like to avoid Ross' actual origin at all costs. That story was off-the-wall bonkers. Ross making a deal with MODOK to turn him into a hulk, as well as his daughter, for..some reason..I guess? It never sat well with me.
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@Gowi Hrm. Probably. I'd need to re-work the whole gamma bomb instance, as well as Banner's personality, though. Maybe he'd give his blood in willingly for testing, instead of going nuts and running off? Or both he AND Ross went to save Rick?

I'd like to avoid Ross' actual origin at all costs. That story was off-the-wall bonkers. Ross making a deal with MODOK to turn him into a hulk, as well as his daughter, for..some reason..I guess? It never sat well with me.


Agree that the traditional origin for what you want to do isn't really palpable or cohesive. Though I imagine there could be a lot of "gamma radiation funtime" origins you could come up with, I'm rather half-awake at the moment so I can't exactly give great consul but given how well the app came out outside of the year one genesis stuff I think you can revise it fairly well so it doesn't seem like Red Hulk came first and yadda yadda.
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Added some more stuff to my Cap CS. My sample will be done tomorrow.
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Oh, Henry, I might run Wade Wilson (Ravager) as a support or a main; he was on the first incarnation with the Suicide Squad with Copycat. Is there anyway you can amend that into your early history stuff?
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All right, thumbs up, let's do this.



| Identity |
Clark Kent/Kal-El of Krypton/Superman

| Origin & Backstory |

Strange Visitor (1978-1987)



Powers and Abilities (1987-1993)



Valiant and Courageous (1993-2001)



Up in the Sky! (2001-2002)



Speeding Bullets (2002-2004)



The World's Finest (2004-2005)



Truth and Justice (2006-2008)



Never-Ending Battle (2008-Present)



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I plan on bringing Superman to a higher standard of storytelling, telling unique and interesting stories that could only be done with a character as wonderfully insane as Superman. That said, I don't plan on making fluffy 'love-letter' pieces that go on and on about how great and important the character is because, to be honest, those get boring very quickly. I want Superman's world to be dangerous, action-packed, energetic, and fun.

I have a few ideas that I've been dying to try with an older, more experienced Superman, that we rarely ever get to see considering how many Year One/early days interpretations we usually get in this kind of game. So the opportunity to play a Superman that knows his way around things is the kind of thing that makes my mouth water, so to speak.

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"Lois! Are you all right?"

The sky is on fire, and seven billion people are screaming.

Hours ago, a psychotic and tortured soul who went by the name 'Ruin' enacted a suicidal plan to bring about the apocalypse. Creating a massive gravitational tether, Ruin used it to grab hold of Earth's moon and set it on a collision course with the planet.

"I'm fine, what the hell is going on out there?" Lois says, standing up from her desk.

"The moon is about to crash into the Earth," I let her know. "I stopped the machine that was generating the gravity well, but the damage has been done."

"But, I mean.....you've got this, right?" she asks, with a hopeful nod.

"I think so," I say, looking up at the blackened scorched sky as the continent-sized satellite bears down on us. "Firestorm and Red Tornado are doing everything in their power to mitigate the damage to the planet's atmosphere. Aquaman is working with Captain Atom to keep the tidal forces from drowning everyone, and a few of the Green Lanterns are constructing braces to keep the tectonic plates from shaking apart. Meanwhile, Reed Richards has gotten a Mother Box operational and is ready to open a Boom Tube if things go south, and Flash will evacuate everyone through the Tube to safety."

"Everyone in Metropolis?"

"Everyone on Earth."

Lois seems sufficiently impressed.

"That seems to cover the collateral damage," she says. "But what about, you know, the moon about to slam into the Earth and destroy the world?!"

"That's my job."

"What exactly are you going to do, Smallville?"

I look up at the crashing moon, and I crack my knuckles.

"The moon is falling, and I'm Superman." I say, turning back to her with a smile. "What do you think I'm going to do?"

"....you're seriously going to try and--"

"All in a day's work," I say with a wink, and take to the skies, to take the cataclysm head-on.....
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Awesomeness, Andy. That's the only sheet I've seen rivaling Batgowi's depth for the game.
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Awesomeness, Andy. That's the only sheet I've seen rivaling Batgowi's depth for the game.


I'll just.....be over here......crying.
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@Gowi@HenryJonesJr I was wondering: in your app, Henry, you mentioned Zola cracking the code to the Super Soldier Serum used on Steve Rogers. I'd like to use the SSS as a sort of bonding agent for the Hulk's gamma irradiated blood and the immune systems of a number of test subjects for Project Eternal Warrior, which will see the creation of a number of Ross' rogues gallery, and allies. Is that alright with you?

Lovin' that Superman app, btw. Sweet formatting.
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@Gowi@HenryJonesJr I was wondering: in your app, Henry, you mentioned Zola cracking the code to the Super Soldier Serum used on Steve Rogers. I'd like to use the SSS as a sort of bonding agent for the Hulk's gamma irradiated blood and the immune systems of a number of test subjects for Project Eternal Warrior, which will see the creation of a number of Ross' rogues gallery, and allies. Is that alright with you?

Lovin' that Superman app, btw. Sweet formatting.


Given that's top secret SHIELD territory, I don't think they'd be privy to share unless PROJECT GAMMA was a SHIELD/CADMUS project.
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Given that's top secret SHIELD territory, I don't think they'd be privy to share unless PROJECT GAMMA was a SHIELD/CADMUS project.


Gotcha. Something else, then. Back to the drawing board.
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In the meantime, I see no contesting apps for Supes so Andy can you know... do the thing. I'll have my character for Supergirl up eventually, but I got a inspiration wave for this tonight:

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Finished the history section, will start to work on wrapping everything else up tomorrow.
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Awesome work, Gowi. DD may be up today.
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I'll just.....be over here......crying.


Finish your sheet and you can be on the same tier.
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