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oh it's definitely interesting but people do it wrong so often. they breed pokemon that can't breed as well as doing finale stages with first stages it's a mess.


I can see where you're coming from. Also, is a stun baton too much for the time period? Inaya is basically done just need to know if the weapon is too much.
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@Liriiaif we're talking about one that uses electricity yes. there are no batteries or anything of that sort. all electricity now is either A big power plants, or powered by pokemon teams.
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@jasonwolf Alright, fixed! She should be set for now then.

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@LiriiaI have one more question before I do my final read through. Are you certain you only want one pokemon. you can have up to 2.
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@jasonwolf Hmm, I may add one more critter. Hang on a moment then~

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@sMoKe read your background I like it though two notes. running a dock for airships would put your character's family in the upper half of society. only the military and the rediculously wealthy own airships. Average businesses still use the seas.

secondly Air piracy does not exist as I mentioned only the military would ever have an airship fit for combat, what you would have is Privateering AKA legalized piracy. There is a distinction though. These are soldiers hired by another nation to take out/plunder rival nation's ships. The other regions that Entrin rivals are Kalos (france), Nion (spain) and Ausan (Holland). just change it to privateers and you are set.

@Liriia also as I expected you're accepted.
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@MelancholyMellie I do hope you plan on updating soon with the additions I've suggested
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Alright. Done with CS.
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@sMoKe ok I'm waiting for all the rest to finish entirely so I can decide on everyone. theres 3 people and 2 slots left. I might allow all 3, but I was planning on 4 people with me myself as 1 of the 4
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@MelancholyMellie I do hope you plan on updating soon with the additions I've suggested


Working on it, been busy with work.

Edit: I think its pretty much done let me know if you want me to add or clarify anything else. Also just going to stick to one Pokemon for the time being. Might try and catch one IG.
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<Snipped quote by jasonwolf>

Working on it, been busy with work.

Edit: I think its pretty much done let me know if you want me to add or clarify anything else. Also just going to stick to one Pokemon for the time being. Might try and catch one IG.


Hey i understand. Just excited and hoping to get back to everyone on who has made it. I think I'll have decided for everyone by tomorrow.
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Ok cool
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@Liriia@sMoKe@MelancholyMellie@Galgarion

Just reminding you all I am doing the final reviews right now of characters. You've all produced good characters, and now it's down to two core aspects:

What you bring to the narrative, and the possibilities when interacting with the other characters. From the X-criminal soldier, to the scarred heroine, and the sky-gazing engineer you've all provided a great aspect of what I want covered in this story: social struggle, ethical debate, and political upheaval. Only two of you will be making it in though. The remaining person may read along, and if I find the story will be better with a 5th I will incorporate them, but I am not certain that is going to be the case.
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@Galgarion@MelancholyMellie

I'm happy to announce that I have decided who has made it into this RP. Having taken the plot into account I see Vincent and Robin providing the most to the group. With vincent's history there's plenty of space for it creeping up on him, and Robin has enough baggage to fill the airship you will be arriving on. There is so much I can do with these characters as a GM and I hope to work with them.

@sMoKe

As happy as I am to start I am sad to say Tane has not made it. As much as he's a solid character I'm not entirely sure what I could provide for him in this story as though there will be airships and big machinery for him I don't know that it's enough to drive a character. Though the privateers were an interesting thought privateering in this era was in the west while the plot is in the east. Despite having more than Galgarion for content it all felt like things that wouldn't add to the group. There was another character with a major tragedy in their life, all of these characters have built themselves up from humble starts, and so on. Perhaps later I may find a place that he can fit in, but until then I can't see this Rp providing a meaningful experience for you.

@Liriia

Now for those accepted i have begun work on the IC, and hope to have it up by friday. I'm really busy tomorrow so I can't do too much.
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Friday will be good for me too, this weekend I will be mostly free then at the start of the week I go throw a hell ish schedule so I'll be tied up until Wednesday as a heads up.
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WIP - almost finished

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the hider tags don't work for me and I don't know why.
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@Xan the G Well fair warning the RP is currently full. I have been debating letting a fifth person in in which case you'd be competing with sMoKe. I'm also posting the OOC today, so you'll be joining in later if I do decide to include you. Basically I'd recommend that Marcus is already on philitri and that he's been there a while so then we can have a nice continuity. I already have a backup plan if I let sMoKe in late, but for your character being on Philitri seems like the best option.

As for my current review of your work heres what I got:

stun rod (induces temporary paralysis on a pokemon)Pokegear. Neither of these devices would exist. Electricity is not common place and requires massive power plants or directly hooking up the device to an electric pokemon for the duration of its use as there is no chargeable battery. A pokegear is FAR too advanced for the 1830-60s anyway.

the trade is very interesting though I'm somewhat confused by it. basically from what I'm reading Marcus is like the crocodile hunter of pokemon literally running in and messing around with them, but then actually catching them. I think you'll end up butting heads or at least rivaling Robin the resident primordial pokemon ranger.

Also points for the zubat sprite yours or not points..
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@jasonwolf would it be okay to say that Inaya has received some of the crews medical history? If allowed a brief synopsis of it for each character would be handy <3
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