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@Dead Cruiser Ok well Sphinx looks good, I'll accept him into the roleplay, put him in the character tab as soon as you like. As soon as four players in total have an accepted character we will start, but applications are always open.

Feel free to have some rest but I do get the impression you made Sekhem much too powerful. He pretty much outclasses every other character that's in development right now so that's a problem obviously. And as much as I like a good egomaniac it seems like his whole biography would make him much better suited to be one of the antagonists. As it is right now, it doesn't make any sense for the other heroes and villains to accept him into their ranks, he's the same kind of threat they were trying to save everyone from in the first place. Plus if he's trying to conquer the world he has no reason to be tied down to a colony that's half a world away.

I'm not saying its unworkable but he does need some revisions which we can discuss later.
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I should hopefully have McKenzie & her sister McKayla finished tonight. McKayla will be the offensive one.
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I'm going to move our discussion to PMs, but I'll get back to you shortly @MrDidact.
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@MrDidact updated eveything besides backstory and personality, but have given general ideas to it in his skills, equipment, and weaknesses. As besides being mortal his weaknesses mostly are his personality/emotional/mental problems.

EDIT: added personality stuffs
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Sheet looks good so far jason.

And it should be good to see what you come up with Leviathan.
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Working on the CS now.
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@MrDidact I was thinking of a character who can manipulate metal (actually just steel really) on a molecular level I guess, re-shaping it into whatever he wants. So long as he's touching it with his bare hands it flows like liquid into whatever form he wants (just solid objects though - blades yes, guns no).

That said, I've just come across a picture of a black girl wielding fire, so I now have an African-American girl with pyrokinesis powers taking shape in my mind and I may well have to go with her as she's such a strong idea. I'll get a character sheet up in the next 24 hours.
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@shaitarn Isaac would so want to use those powers. Heres the schematic for a pistol. make this part. now this part. now this part. Then he jsut assembles it.

@MrDidact crazy news I think I've completed Isaac, and mentioned the name of my next guy too.
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@Athinar She's looking good right now nothing I think needs major revision. Except that we do have supplies so she shouldn't be that short on ammo.

@shaitarn Sounds good to me. I'll be eager to see those when you're working on them.

@jasonwolf Looks great, he's accepted. Put him in the character tab.

Two more and we're ago.
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@Athinar She's looking good right now nothing I think needs major revision. Except that we do have supplies so she shouldn't be that short on ammo.


Well, alright, thanks!
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Is this RP still open?
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Yup it's always open
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Alright, I kinda redid my guy but here's the final CS

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@ClocktowerEchos It's not a bad sheet but there's two big problems. One is that the apocalypse took a long time, it was over a year of decline. And the compound wasn't even around until the end of it. There were no casual ceremonies during this, everything was in shut down. So he needed to be actually doing something during all of this.

Secondly it's ok that he has no powers but the point of the roleplay is that the characters were all involved in the super powered world somehow. That's why they have positions of power in the society they created. Your PCs are supposed to be the movers and shakers not the average joes of the story. So he needs some editing in that respect. Not all pcs are leaders but the way it's set up is that every former super has a say. So he needs that as well as something special that sets him apart from normal people. Everyone on the team has something special
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@ClocktowerEchosNot to back seat GM, but Isaac, for example, may be human, but even then he's massively more intelligent than people, and then he has super powerful equipment. His arm could let him flip a car. He totes around a ballistic shield like its nothing. I'd vouch that davinci is a good base for a character, but needs to prove that he's more than a normal man.
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Jason is right, that is part of what I'm saying. This isn't a discouragement simply some advice on how to change it up a bit. I mean the dudes old money. Money is a pretty good superpower too.
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Alright, redid some stuff, how does it look now?

I'm not actually used to making super powered chars so that's whyI have some issues with making Hayden right XD
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@Dead Cruiser Ok Sekhem looks good now, I'll accept him. Post him in the tab

@ClocktowerEchos Ok it looks good but his powers seem metahuman in nature and I'd like finite descriptions. Is he like Captain America tier?
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@MrDidactThink Teddy Roosevelt if he had a love child with Captain America and Machiavelli got chucked in there somewhere and that's Hayden. So yeah, he's Cap teir
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