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The name of the planet is Ral.

Shaped like a massive ring, it experiences many phenomena different from our own. The outside of the planet, scorched by the unstable star it orbits, is an uninhabited desert. The inside is cast in eternal shadow, and plagued by ionic storms of terrifying nature. Humanity, however, is tenacious, and does anything to survive.

With the power of technology, the inhabitants of Ral harnessed the energy of the storms, and created a great civilization. Across the whole of the inner surface stretches a massive cityscape. Terminal.

Terminal became overpowered by corporations, great business intent on harnessing energy and intellect in new ways. At the forefront of these businesses are the technocrats, those who devote their lives and souls to electronic innovation. The cause is not as noble as it seems; tenacious as they are, humans are also greedy, and greed leads to violence. The corporations of Terminal began to use less and less savory methods to gain the upper hand, until only the most ruthless survived. Like mafiosi, these territorial industries held the inner torus in a cruel grasp.

This is the world in which you reside, a world of technological glory and criminal plenty. Justice systems have long since given up hope, leaving the rotting streets awash with pain and violence. In this world, the tortured poor watch from behind sheets of bulletproof glass as aristocrats dine on synthetic drugs. Billboards advertising useless products pierce through the thick smog, accompanied by blaring dialogue about how much you need it. Hookers call out raunchily to mob bosses flying by on their polished limousines. There is nothing good in a city of darkness. Not unless you make it.



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Name:

Age:

Description: (One paragraph if you can, please. Pictures are optional.)

Skills: (A list is fine.)

Equipment: (A list is fine here too.)

Backstory: (At least two paragraphs, please.)
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This sounds interesting...

I'm in, I'll start work on a character sheet.
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This sounds interesting...

I'm in, I'll start work on a character sheet.


Yay! Thankee! I'll work on some more info and some sheets of my own if a couple more show interest.
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The eye is watching.

Edit: If there's a spot I'm filling, discard me. Though it seems if I read correctly this roleplay's closed anyways.
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Interest here, working on a sheet now
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-Character Sheet-

Name: Gabanre Von Houten

Age: 25

Description: I do not know if this is acceptable, if not I have an 2nd one which will be it then.

1(Primairy):
After suffering a big accident in a plamsa storm, his family, which was really rich paid a lot of money to save Gabanre. Due to this he is half cyborg with his right leg and right arm being cyberbernetics. The other side of his body is normal human. Since he thinks it looks weird, he prefers to wear a long cape as good as always. He has short blonde hair and almost no facial hair. One of his eyes is a cybernetic and the other one is just normal.

2(Secondary, if first option not allowed):
Short blonde hair and blue eyes. He wears black clothes most of the time but is not gothic.

Skills:
1(Primairy):
He is agile but not really strong in the human part, but his cybernetics make those parts stronger then human.
His eye calculates the speed of plasma and makes him able to dodge them when he has vision on the bullet.
He prefers to use his sword over anything else
2(Secondary): He was trained for a special ops for one of the "Energy Providers". So he is capable using plasma guns and plasma swords, he prefers the last. Due to this he is quite agile but not really strong. He knows how to sneak and is capable of stealth.

Equipment:
1(Primairy): Cybernetic eye, cybernetic right arm and leg.
Plamsa sword
Black coat

2(Secondary): Plasma gun and Plamsa Sword
Black coat
Backstory:
1(primairy):
After suffering a big accident in a plamsa storm, his family, which was really rich paid a lot of money to save Gabanre. After that he has been in the hospital for around 1 and an half year. When he got out of the hospital most of the world was already corrupt, aswell as his family. This made him sad, thus he ran away from his family.

He never had a permanent home after that. He made money by being a mercenary for maffioso. And due to this has quite a good knowledge about that world. When the maffioso he worked for last tried to kill him, he wiped the entire family of the ground. When he noticed that he could do a lot on his own, he started to make justice on the planet. His nickname is "The Reaper of Souls" named after all the killing he does out of justice.

2(Secondary):

After a long training in a special academy he got to do his first mission, which was to assasinate one of the more powerfull maffioso leader. He impressed the maffioso by straight up killing the guy he was supossed to kill, and they invtited him to the maffioso. When he declined he got attacked by the Maffioso, forced to flee he ran up the streets and that was here he met someone special to him. A woman who thought about justice all the time called: Diana Moon. Whom decided to adopt him.

After his adoption he got a lot of missions to kill wrongdo-ers. After a lot of succes he got caught by one of his instructors. And thus a period of captivity started. It was a hard time and he had to under go a lot of experiments on his body. One of the was the infusion of plasma, which left him with one special power to create force fields with his mind. After around a year Diana got him free, but died in the process. Her last words were: "GO, GO for your self.... You can get this planet good again." after that she died.
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If only my characters had such a successful career at the ripe age of 17.
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Yeah i was thinking about the age, or to simply put it in another way
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It would probably strike as more realistic given another decade or so - reputations for teenages might grow that fast in some movies, but otherwise...
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It would probably strike as more realistic given another decade or so - reputations for teenages might grow that fast in some movies, but otherwise...


Thx, he is 25 now
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Well shit. I missed writing and decided to crawl back to this place for a few casual posts. Saw this title and was intrigued. Read the description and was very intrigued.

And then I went and looked at who it was made by. :P

So yeah, I'm in. Gonna lurk and see some other CSs before I make my own.
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Glad to see you all here! Especially the Moosen, whom I missed and was wondering where the frack did you go we missed you. ;-;

I plan to get some information together over the weekend; We'll see how CS progress goes by then. For now, will everyone who's made a post expressing interest please verify that you're definitely in?
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-Character Sheet-

Name: Gabanre Von Houten

Age: 25

Description: I do not know if this is acceptable, if not i have an 2nd one which will be it then.

1(Primairy):
After suffering an big accident in a plamsa storm, his family, which was really rich paid a lot of money to save Gabanre. Due to this he is half cyborg with his right leg and arm being cyberbernetics. The otherside is normal huma. Since he thinks it looks weird, he prefers to wear a long cape as good as always. He has short blonde hair and has almost no facial hair. One of his eyes is a cybernetic and the other one is pure red due to fusion with plasma.

During the storm his body fused with the plasma, this is an explanation of his skills.

2(Secondary, if first option not allowed):
Short blonde hair and blue eyes. He wears black clothes most of the time but is not gothic.

Skills:
1(Primairy):
Due to fusion with plasma, he is cabale of making forcefields and plasma without any other sources then himself. He is agile but not really strong in the human part, but his cybernetics make those parts stronger then human.
His eye calculates the speed of plasma and makes him able to dodge them when he has vision on the bullet.
He prefers to never use his sword, but when he is forced to he can use it quite good.
2(Secondary): He was trained for a special ops for one of the "Energy Providers". So he is capable using plasma guns and plasma swords, he prefers the last. Due to this he is quite agile but not really strong. He knows how to sneak and is capable of stealth.

Equipment:
1(Primairy): Cybernetic eye, cybernetic right arm and leg.
Plamsa sword
Black coat

2(Secondary): Plasma gun and Plamsa Sword
Black coat
Capable of making forcefields with his mind
Backstory:
1(primairy):
After suffering an big accident in a plamsa storm, his family, which was really rich paid a lot of money to save Gabanre. AFfter that he has been in the hospital for around 1 and an half year. When he got out of the hospital most of the world was already corrupt aswell as his family. This made him sad, and he ran away from his family.

He never had a permanent home after that. He made money by being a mercenary for maffioso. And due to this has quite a good knowledge about that world. When the maffioso he worked for last tried to kill him, he wiped the enitre family of the ground, atleast that is what he thought. When he noticed that he could do a lot on his own he started to make justice on the planet. His nickname is "The Reaper of Souls" named after all the killing he does out of justice.

2(Secondary):

After a long training in a special academy he got to do his first mission, which was to assasinate one of the more powerfull maffioso leader. He impressed the maffioso by straight up killing the guy he was supossed to kill, and they invtited him to the maffioso. When he declined he got attacked by the Maffioso, forced to flee he ran up the streets and that was here he met someone special to him. A woman who thought about justice all the time called: Diana Moon. Whom decided to adopt him.

After his adoption he got a lot of missions to kill wrongdo-ers. After a lot of succes he got caught by one of his instructors. And thus a period of captivity started. It was a hard time and he had to under go a lot of experiments on his body. One of the was the infusion of plasma, which left him with one special power to create force fields with his mind. After around a year Diana got him free, but died in the process. Her last words were: "GO, GO for your self.... You can get this planet good again." after that she died.


Thank you for providing an alternate. The first is fine as long as you leave out the "fusing with plasma" and the special powers associated; the cybernetics is acceptable. If this is undesirable to you, option two is fine to me. My only request is that you read your entire character sheet out loud to yourself and fix any spelling or grammar errors that you find. Once you complete this request, I will revisit for judgement.
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Ow i see now, forgot to tell that i'm not english native, also made this on ipad so autocorrection made some mistakes, i will do and keep the fused with plasma out

EDIT: want me to do grammar on 2nd char as well?
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@twannyman

Yes, please.
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I do have a CS in progress...was hoping to finish it this week, but there's delays. I gotta study, I'm training between 2-5 hours daily for track, and I'm going to the states this weekend.

So it might have to wait until next week >.<
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