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@Lugubrious Altered it so that she gets enhanced strength "for a badger's standards" but is still a rabid beast that's unlikely to dodge and can't strategize, keeping it more of a letdown than a powerup. That good?
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@Lugubrious Altered it so that she gets enhanced strength "for a badger's standards" but is still a rabid beast that's unlikely to dodge and can't strategize, keeping it more of a letdown than a powerup. That good?


I suppose.
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@ScreenAcne the characters tab is for things I've personally approved alone. Please remove whatever it is you just put there when you get the chance. If you require somewhere to put your ideas so that you want to remember them or to get them out of your system, I would recommend a word document. If you want to share them with someone, I'd recommend the characters subforum of the RP guild, or the SCP foundation website. I am not interested in any kind of expansions of the Crucible's universe beyond what I specifically ask for.
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@Lugubrious

Shit. Motherfucking. posted in the wrong thread, sorry, brother.
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@Lugubrious, Are you still accepting characters? Mine is expecting to talk her way through the Crucible, and win.

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@ColouredCyan

if your oratory skill and writing are up to snuff then this is gong to be a fascinating character to watch. Probably going to struggle to get anything done vs the few evil player characters though, so hopefully rng doesn't shut you down before you can show off.
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here's my NPC my dudes


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@ColouredCyan

if your oratory skill and writing are up to snuff then this is gong to be a fascinating character to watch. Probably going to struggle to get anything done vs the few evil player characters though, so hopefully rng doesn't shut you down before you can show off.


Thanks, I'm looking forward to trying to win a death match versus Dragons, Skeletons and Faze Clan members by conversation. I'm not actually that worried about evil characters, evil characters have to pay an attention to me, which won't end as they expect. The worst will be those that can kill without really interacting with me; trappers and snipers.
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@Lugubrious, Are you still accepting characters? Mine is expecting to talk her way through the Crucible, and win.



There are a couple problems. First off, the RP's status is 'full'. The two remaining player spots belong to @Indra and @Mira Yasaka. That means I'm actually not accepting, unless one were to give up the slot.

Second, the central premise of the character's backstory is misguided. The Crucible is something that, in terms of this story, just started to exist for the first time. This is the first official tournament, and it's not supposed to be some sort of recurring societal thing like the Hunger Games; it is a private event, with the participants spontaneously joining.

With these two things in mind, I must decline this concept, though I am sorry to put to waste all the work you did.

here's my NPC my dudes



Not quite done, but the abilities are fine as is, so just notify me when you complete the Frenzy and I'll give the okay.
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And finally, I made a second character. He's not an NPC, but I may make just one during the weekend (just one no more). I really had fun making this character though!


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LET'S MAKE WAY FOR OUR GENDER BENDING EXORCISTS!



There we go.
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There are a couple problems. First off, the RP's status is 'full'. The two remaining player spots belong to @Indra and @Mira Yasaka. That means I'm actually not accepting, unless one were to give up the slot.

Second, the central premise of the character's backstory is misguided. The Crucible is something that, in terms of this story, just started to exist for the first time. This is the first official tournament, and it's not supposed to be some sort of recurring societal thing like the Hunger Games; it is a private event, with the participants spontaneously joining.

With these two things in mind, I must decline this concept, though I am sorry to put to waste all the work you did.


Ah my bad, I hadn't noticed, my apologies.

Also my bad, I'll rewrite it in case the first problem resolves itself, wasn't particularly attached to her backstory really, don't know why I imagined the Crucible was a recurring thing. I'm glad the powers alright though.

Its alright, the characters recycled from an old Rp, only a few elements are new.

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@Indra So whose body is being used? Do they physically and visibly morph into him or her depending on whoevers in control at the moment, or do they just have one body with a mind that switches regularly?
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aye @Lugubrious scope this shit my G i finished it

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LET'S MAKE WAY FOR OUR GENDER BENDING EXORCISTS!



There we go.


Overall it's pretty good. The backstory interested me in particular; as a Christian myself, I am always intrigued by somewhat mythological takes on the whole tradition. There are only two things I would like to have some attention paid to. The first is that I'd like you to make an extra paragraph in the abilities section to discuss the genderbending and how it works. Right now, anyone who would be tasked with playing your character in a duel would undoubtedly be tripped up by its exact mechanics. The second is that the Echo is supposed to be a location, not whatever you have at the moment. Once those changes are done, you'll be able to join.

aye @Lugubrious scope this shit my G i finished it



Looks good to me. Go ahead and port it over.

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Ah my bad, I hadn't noticed, my apologies.

Also my bad, I'll rewrite it in case the first problem resolves itself, wasn't particularly attached to her backstory really, don't know why I imagined the Crucible was a recurring thing. I'm glad the powers alright though.

Its alright, the characters recycled from an old Rp, only a few elements are new.


Thank you for understanding. Once again, my apologies.
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@Lugubrious You forgot my second character Lug.
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@Lugubrious You forgot my second character Lug.


I didn't, but if it's not an NPC, there's nothing for me to do with it, right? Unless you're making a contingency plan way in advance to bring in a second character as a 'spectator' should Ghidorah die in the tournament.
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I didn't, but if it's not an NPC, there's nothing for me to do with it, right? Unless you're making a contingency plan way in advance to bring in a second character as a 'spectator' should Ghidorah die in the tournament.


Could've sworn a second character was playable... welp that was all for nothing then. I feel he's more of a playable character than an NPC. Disregard that character then.
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Man, looking at all the characters and character concepts has kept me oddly excited for this! Not gonna lie, usually I don't stay on hype trains for very long but I'm still really looking forward to this! I've been running through matchups in my head for like the last three days, and some of them are downright hilarious.

Speaking of hype-trains and obvious segues, anyone else excited for Shadow of War?
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same here, can't wait to fight a fucking kaiju using only the sheer power of an xxxtentacion song
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