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@Lord Szall: I mean... I guess it would depend what you have planned.
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Good to know, then I hope this is acceptable. Forgive me if there is lack of details in the background, I had to shorten it for the sake of keeping it brief...

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@Lord Szall: Okay one big problem here is the way demons work has been extensively discussed and that's not really how they work. ^^;
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Oh, then that is not an entirely unsolvable issue. The demon is their as the dark master to which the warlock drew his dark magics, meaning his existence can be replaced with that of a dark spirit or false god.

@VitaVitaARWould you be able to suggest a suitable being?
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Oh, then that is not an entirely unsolvable issue. The demon is their as the dark master to which the warlock drew his dark magics, meaning his existence can be replaced with that of a dark spirit or false god.

@VitaVitaARWould you be able to suggest a suitable being?


Replace dark with Light, demon with spirit, and warlock with gentle mage understudy. To be fair, your character is more likely to appear as enemy than as proper character, and this is high fantasy.

Pardon my bluntness but today I'm not in the mood of mincing things. Also pardon my intrusion.
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<Snipped quote by Lord Szall>

Replace dark with Light, demon with spirit, and warlock with gentle mage understudy. To be fair, your character is more likely to appear as enemy than as proper character, and this is high fantasy.

Pardon my bluntness but today I'm not in the mood of mincing things. Also pardon my intrusion.


Even in high fantasy, the hero's allies can consist of a scoundrel, and that is exactly how I've written him to be. Avoiding any kind of dark backstory is the same as pretending there isn't anything dark in this world at all. What if the scoundrel, as a knight of the Kingdom, begins to see the error of his ways and aim to make amends for his past sins? I have left it open to interpretation, that doesn't automatically mean he is evil.
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I'll be honest, when someone says "scoundrel" I think more of the Han Solo type then someone who murdered their mentor and ally just because an evil object asked them to and felt no remorse afterwards.

This is the bigger problem I had with the character: It's a (formerly, still has religious ties)holy knight order. Darker backstory is one thing, remorseless murder is another.
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I'll be honest, when someone says "scoundrel" I think more of the Han Solo type then someone who murdered their mentor and ally just because an evil object asked them to and felt no remorse afterwards.

This is the bigger problem I had with the character: It's a (formerly, still has religious ties)holy knight order. Darker backstory is one thing, remorseless murder is another.


That is fair. Even if the act is hidden behind a lie, it still means the Iron Rose knights now harbor somebody who has killed without remorse. It's shame because I cannot really change that factor, for I wrote him to have no quarrel throwing away the lives of the knights who took him in just to heighten his own position. He is clearly someone, at the time of if he were to started, who would do such a thing even if he hadn't killed the old knight.

I'm not going to be stubborn about the character. I wrote him in the purpose of being someone scorned among the other knights, even if he slowly learned to do what is right. Infact, even if I made a fresh character, they would probably be written with a similar background, just so their personality and goals would hold up. If he is unacceptable, then I won't chase the issue further.
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I'll try to get a post by the weekend latest.
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Just need two more people to post before I can make a new one.
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Let me get right to that. Though I'm not sure what Jarde should say.
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Not going to bother posting for Indrau, he'll just stand around and look mildly irritated with things.
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Caught a cold, will be a bit late for my post ~~
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@Noodles: Phoran Cal is very dead. ^^;
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Hi there! I don't really know any of you, but I've had a real bad itch to get into a high fantasy roleplay of late, and it looks to me that this one fits the bill very nicely. If you're still willing to accept new players, I'd love to make a submission.
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We're still accepting.
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Sounds good, I'll take a look at the kind of characters that are already present and get to cooking up a CS!
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@Saltwater Thief: Alright, looking forward to it!
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@VitaVitaAR Noted, tweaked the post a bit :X ~~

Also, are the rest of the Cal Family still alive? Or is Veileena the only one left? o.o ~
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Veileena, Haelstadt, and her maids are the only ones living in the Cal mansion as of now.
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