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He may secondary in Aether so he can elongate his life span. Strictly that, he doesn't want to heal his wounds or anything, all he wants is to live longer so more things can have fist casted upon them.
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@Banana: I mean... Might want motivations better than that, tbh.
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@Banana: Okay, first things first: I meant you could assimilate some of the tropes, but not adapt the persona entirely. You still need something like... An actual name, for starters.

Next... Okay, explosion-on-punch would require at least a fire secondary, and even then, there should be a logical limit on that.

Right, no shutter shades. Those shouldn't exist. Look for clothing that would look logical in an early East Asian-style setting and go with something like that.

More explanation on the style of combat would also help, since, well... Pressurizing air for that sort of damage shouldn't be anywhere near easy to accomplish.

Expand on personality.

History is... Too comedic for the purposes of the RP, honestly.

So, uh... Yeah. You took this in a different direction than I was expecting, honestly. This RP is meant to be a bit more serious compared to what you're proposing, so... Pure 'muscle wizard' won't work. I was expecting something more like... A really strong older martial artist who just so happens to be able to have the ability to use qi to fly around or something. Yeah.
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I understand where you're coming from. I'll work on a better application and retry.

Edit: Actually, upon second thought this one may not be for me. Sorry for the inconvenience, but I'm gonna pass on this one.
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Alright added some small changes and the backstory ^_^


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@rivaan: Looks fine to me. Accepted.

So... Yeah. People need to come in.
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@PKMNB0Y Yay, tomorrow I will format it better and put it in teh CS tab then ^_^
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Well, that's been done.

@dndragons, @RumikoOhara: Any progress on your end of things?
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Wow! I thought this had closed down
My CS is halfway done though I put it on the back burner
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So little faith.

An RP never dies unless everyone involved gives up on it.
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Not wrong at all.

Well, if nobody else plans on putting forms forward, I'll get an OP up sometime tomorrow. It'll still be open, but new entries will just have to figure out how to integrate themselves.

Look forward to it!
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So im planning on sorta doing a "sorcerer" character who is an alchemist good at very precise manipulation of qi to perform complex tasks while using very little raw power. Is it possible to have like "Inner Balance" Qi? also would Heaven allow me to impart limited intelligence to objects or something? so I can make swords that talk and stuff.
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@Lucidnonsense: No granting objects any degree of either sentience or sapience without usage of more... Expensive methods. That, y'know, require a large degree of skill to pull off in the first place. So.
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@Lucidnonsense: No granting objects any degree of either sentience or sapience without usage of more... Expensive methods. That, y'know, require a large degree of skill to pull off in the first place. So.


Darn, I wanted be a wise old man who lives in a floating boat or something...hrm...And I didnt necessarily mean sapience, more like...can perform basic tasks like a broom that can sweep or something. sapience would be like for very special occasions.

If that doesnt work, Might I be able to play a ninja-ish character? I would think dark would be the most fitting, but thats not available. So what do you think would be the best for "supernaturally good at not being spotted" Would heaven work? if heaven covers mental effects.
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@Lucidnonsense: Light manipulation with either water or aether works, but tends more towards water because of refractive properties and all that jazz. Mental attacks... Well, recovery is aether-based, I guess.
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@Lucidnonsense: Light manipulation with either water or aether works, but tends more towards water because of refractive properties and all that jazz. Mental attacks... Well, recovery is aether-based, I guess.


Oh, sorry for asking so many questions, but would fog be more Air or water? also how metaphorical can my abilities be, if Im going with water Im thinking of having a Water based power "Droplet in the ocean" that allows blending in with crowds.
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Oh, sorry for asking so many questions, but would fog be more Air or water? also how metaphorical can my abilities be, if Im going with water Im thinking of having a Water based power "Droplet in the ocean" that allows blending in with crowds.


Fog is water.

And, uh... They can be pretty conceptual. Though, uh... An ability like that would be gated by things like crowd size or equipment or whatnot.
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@Didos, @BurningDaisies, @rivaan: As promised, an OP!
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Full disclosure: I'm out of town for a convention. So I'll be scarce until Monday.

Thanks for the update though; I'll piece together a post when I have some spare time.
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