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No TES game I know of lets you get a prosthetic or smoke a skooma pipe. I don't even play the games themselves that much anyway.


There's a character who has a prosthetic? Or was that just an example of 'something that can't be done in the game'?

If there's not a character with a prosthetic, then... well, there should be. :V Maybe one of those old-school metallic arms.

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There's a character who has a prosthetic? Or was that just an example of 'something that can't be done in the game'?

If there's not a character with a prosthetic, then... well, there should be. :V Maybe one of those old-school metallic arms.


The only character with a prosthetic that comes to mind is Yagrum Bagarn, and he's a Dwemer (hell, he's not even a person by game standards but a creature) so he's bound to be unique than everything else.
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@Leidenschaft

You guys still going over CS's or?
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@Leidenschaft

You guys still going over CS's or?


Things are fine with your CS, more or less, just the weaknesses seem a little more like kooky quirks.
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@LeidenschaftHow does Lucex look?
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@LeidenschaftHow does Lucex look?


A few things rubbed my pedantry the wrong way. He's a solid character and I like him being far from the ideal hero. I'll go in depth when I get the chance.

@Shetland, good work on your CS, I like it.

The both of you, wait a bit for Gcold's input and then you'll hear if you're accepted.
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Thanks for the kind words, I tried to make him as "realistic" as I could.
Can I ask what's wrong with him tho? I'm more than willing to edit things if its reasonable.
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Here be my CS. Hopefully you get a kick out of him. I did, actually. I like all of your characters so far.



I didn't find anything glaring, really. I'll just leave this here for Gcold to see me quoting and read it and tell you what he thinks.

@Leidenschaft
Thanks for the kind words, I tried to make him as "realistic" as I could.
Can I ask what's wrong with him tho? I'm more than willing to edit things if its reasonable.


See above. There's nothing, really, I think I either left misremembered another person's sheet or something or you already changed it. So, there you have it, I like your character so he gets my half of the stamp of approval.
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@LeidenschaftThanks, but can I ask what you mean by all my characters? I've only posted one here .-.
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@LeidenschaftThanks, but can I ask what you mean by all my characters? I've only posted one here .-.


Well, obviously s/he has seen some of your other characters in other RPs. I would agree with him/her from what I've seen. Remember... what was his name... that Chinese neo-Communist bloke from that Fallout RP? He kicked arse.

Also, thank you very much for the approval, @Leidenschaft. I'm kinda surprised, actually, I thought it might have been considered a bit over-the-top or something. :V
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Well, obviously s/he has seen some of your other characters in other RPs. I would agree with him/her from what I've seen. Remember... what was his name... that Chinese neo-Communist bloke from that Fallout RP? He kicked arse.


*blushes and feels awkwardly flattered*

That was Zhang. Thanks for the compliment I guess...
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@Leidenschaft, I've updated my CS, sorry for annoying you!
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*blushes and feels awkwardly flattered*

That was Zhang. Thanks for the compliment I guess...


I meant everyone's characters in the thread, but I do love yours. I love all of your characters equally, you rapscallions. Anyways, yea, everyone gets to play the waiting game for their characters approval.

@Leidenschaft, I've updated my CS, sorry for annoying you!


YOURE ANNOYING ME AGAAAAAAAAAIN

Cool, I'll have a look-see once I can.
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I wish you could delete posts on here all willy nilly. It'd make life generally easier on here.
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@HHShetland The gist of your character is good, but it is over the top at certain parts.

-Master skills are no longer allowed, in addition, putting in weaknesses also does not automatically grant you skill points. Plus, lack of weapon and armor can be easily sidestepped by Tennant. You must reduce hand-to-hand to expert (at least), and choose one of the following. A; bust both athletics and unarmored to adept. B; lower one of them, but change woodworking and acrobatics to apprentice.
-You said Do'Zaddha couldn't even remember Tennant's name but still saw him as more than a ticket to fame. What exactly do you mean here? How much did Do'Zaddha value Tennant?
-Beating a troll with his bare hands in kind of a stretch, even for a expert. It's like killing a gorilla in a fist fight. I don't care if you're Hulk Hogan, Mike Tyson or Kim Jung-il, it's not gonna happen. He must need some kind of edge over the troll, whether that be the troll was injured, poisoned, or Tennant sneaked up on it.

@ClocktowerEchosThere are some issues, I can't accept it at this state.

-Half-Orc is not gonna cut it, especially when it's his father's half. If he doesn't know exactly, put the race he looks like the most, or the one people associate him with the most.
-Crossbows are rare tech on Tamriel. A band of "merry hunters" are not likely to have one, and even if they do, ammo is gonna be another problem. I advise switching to bow, or downgrading it to a semi-functional piece with less than 10 bolts.
-Personality seems to be very brief and lacking, please expand with more details.
-Please mind you writing, words and phrases like "sniper", "CQC" and "mountain climbing pick" do not fit the setting. For the the pick in particular, ice picks aren't invented until the 18th century. Before that, people used Alpenstocks.
-What is his hood really enchanted with? If you don't want to reveal to everyone else, at least PM Leiden and I.

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@gcold I'll get on it

I'll admit I took some liberties with the writing but that won't be much of an issue to fix.

As for the hood, its really just enchanted to glow purple, there is no real effects of it.
Its actually Planetside reference >.<
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@gcold Okey-doke; I made some alterations. Now he snuck up on the Troll after the initial encounter (I replaced Light Armour with Sneak in his skills to reflect this, too), and his other skills have also been modified accordingly. I suppose it makes sense that he's not a Master, because if he was, he would never have lost that tournament. :V

Also, in the bio, I meant that Do'Zaddha couldn't remember the name of his old rival who challenged him to train a human. That was my fault, it was poorly worded; I've changed that as well to be more specific.
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@gcoldMade the edits, hopefully the personality is fixed since I'm not quite sure how to do it. Skills updated as well.
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Okay! Here is my CS! Let me know if anything is not to your liking, or if I need to explain anything else in further detail.
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-Crossbows are rare tech on Tamriel. A band of "merry hunters" are not likely to have one, and even if they do, ammo is gonna be another problem. I advise switching to bow, or downgrading it to a semi-functional piece with less than 10 bolts.


They used to be pretty commonplace in Morrowind. But I guess being chronologically 200 years in the past doesn't help.

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