... Oooh. Nice twist. I didn't see it coming. Haha.
In hindsight, this was basically a cold, dead scaffolding of a short story raised entirely around the twist at the end.
Short, sweet, got the point across well. Excellent twist. It's essentially just you telling about the world as-is, but it's still sweet, and the twist in the end is sweeter still. You've got quite the aura built here. Very, very well done. A perfect little snack of a read. Can I ask for seconds? XD
"It's essentially just you telling about the world as-is..."
You've got me there.
Thanks for the use of the morpheme "sweet" three times. I think that implies some sort of satisfaction. I'll see what I can do about seconds!