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Thank you.
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Name: Kamiyama Monshiro
Age: 17
Appearance: "I don't think you realize who you're fucking with."
Personality: A rather different sort of character than one would expect from a banchou, Monshiro is a more cunning and calculating person, as likely to outsmart his opponent as to beat them down. His demeanor is generally cool, though not stoic, and aloof, but not unapproachable. Not exactly a person of great moral character, he's by no means evil, as he has his own strongly-held values. While he's slow to anger, god help you if you ever manage to piss him off
Clubs: While not a club, he is the founder and leader of the White Sun Tribe street gang.
Brief Backstory: The bastard son of a yakuza leg-breaker and a club hostess, Monshiro grew up in the meaner streets of Tokyo, where one had to get tough quick just to survive. The great size and strength he inherited from his father, combined with the sharp cunning he cultivated on his own gave Monshiro great advantages in his environment. By the time he was fourteen, he had been in a gang to half of his life, and had been the leader of one for two years.

Upon becoming a contractor and transferring to Covenant Academy, one of Monshiro's first actions was to start his own gang of contractors. The sheer power of his contract and his prowess as a banchou resulted in this White Sun Tribe quickly swelling in size and scope, before long becoming the largest and strongest gang in Covenant Academy. This has actually resulted in a general decrease in not only gang-related crime (as very little competition now exists between contractor gangs) but also a variety of street crime, as Monshiro keeps his underlings well in hand.
Contract(s): Surya (Asura)

Name: Surya
Type: Asura
Personality: Surya is in many ways the archetypal Asura: hot-blooded, violent, and easily provoked. His fists are his first answer to any problem, and he's all too willing to lend his power to Monshiro when faces need caving in. Despite his temper, he's surprisingly affable, and earthly delights like food and women are generally enough to placate him.
Powers: Monshiro is both absurdly strong and durable; to the point that some of the feats of strength he can pull off don't even make entirely logical sense. Monshiro can also channel his anger into manifesting as literal fire, over which he has a limited degree of control.
Fusion: When fused with Surya, Monshiro's eyes blaze with inner fire, his hair bleaches white, and an additional two pairs of arms erupt from his back. While his strength increases to legendary proportions, he also gains Surya's divine rage, which can easily overwhelm Monshiro and send him into a blind fury.
Summon: "I'm gonna fuckin' bury you."
Surya, a lesser god of Hindu, Buddhist, and Persian legend, has strength that is rarely matched, even by other gods. Even so, his power only increases as his rage builds. His white-hot fury is also a literal one, as his six fists are infused with all of the heat and intensity of the sun.
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Im pretty hyped for this roleplay! It actually looks really really really cool. Anyhow, if anything is too extreme or i needa fix somethin up. Ill do so straight away!

Humans:
Name: Avo Cassandra
Age:17

Personality: Avo, although gives off the image of a kind young man, he is really a bit of a hesitant coward who wishes to step his foot into the dark.. He was raised to be that of a everyday hero. Treats others with respect, go out of their way to be nice and help out, those kinds of things. These are things that Avos knows he should try to embody and spread. However Avo also wishes to see what it is like to do the opposite, he has some very strong urges to do so, but due to the morals hammered into him he just can't bring himself to the plate. His curiosity, hidden desires, and moral background clash. Its as if invisible shackles given to him by his previous society keep his actions in check.
Clubs: Isn't a part of any, but visits and eavesdrops on random clubs when he is in need of something to do
Brief Backstory: Grimdark? More like Grimbark like a treedog hahahahahahaha.

Contract
Name: Kuk
Type: Egyption God of Darkness and Chaos
Personality: Kuk tries to spread obscurity and hate through Avos, but is often frustrated by his choices. However Kuk is obedient to Avo and is eager to see how the partnership will end up as the contractor ages. Kuk is also always willing to participate in trouble-making and doesn't usually take anything too seriously. The God is a bit less talkative than other contracted, but is quick to mock Avo and those around him.
Powers: Is able to manipulate and create 'Chaos' infested shadows can be used a bit like basic and advanced TK.

Fusion
His Chaos Shadows potency is doubled.

Summon
Potency is boosted tenfold.

There ya go! How is it?
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@Dead Cruiser: Okay, let's see...

There are two issues I see here. Firstly I think he's a bit too powerful honestly? Not that there can't be a gang leader who helps keep actual crime from happening, but it comes off as organized crime almost, eh-heh.

As for the power levels of the actual contract, um... if you're going for the level of Asura in Asura's Wrath, that is waaaay over-the-top for this.

@Tyrant: I don't think this RP is set up for player villains, though I could be wrong.

In addition, I'm kind of surprised you took a chaos god and gave them what's basically telekinesis.
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@vita, well if his personality will be a problem i can probably put together another character later.

And im sorry if it sounds kinda dumb, but yeah 8D I was gonna add in some actual darkness darkness but idk if that would work out. Cause i know i wanted the TK part for sure, and i was thinking it might already have been overboard. So umbrakinesis might be bad. Also don't really know any real chaos powers that wouldn't be gm so....yeah =/

But idk i think its pretty neat!
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I think his personality is a problem for this. Not necessarily in other RP's(kind of reminds me of Kotomine Kirei really), this one in particular though. ^^;

Thank you for your cooperation.
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So Im a bit new to this, but could you give me a few pointers on things I should change up a bit ? Thanks in advance
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Um, just finish up your bio really. ^^; It looked fine to me but it wasn't finished.
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Alright, Ill get to work on that asap!
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Regarding Monshiro's "power," let's say that 40% of the gang-affiliated delinquents in Covenant Academy are under his command. For whatever that's worth.

Regarding his actual power, Asura was just used as an appearance. I'd put him somewhere around Star Platinum or Akira Kongou for his baseline power. Once he hits his fusion and summon though, we're liable to see something at home in a Hideki Kamiya game.
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I'm still here!

What would you consider unfinished regarding my bio, Tachi and/or Vita? The accepted list is yet to be updated and I'm curious.
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@Dead Cruiser: I don't quite know everything you're referencing.

@Spoo: I need to remind Tachi to update the list, can I get a link to your bio? I don't remember seeing it.
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I'm interested in this, are you still accepting? If you are, I will write one tomorrow.
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We are still accepting.
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VitaVitaAR said
@Dead Cruiser: I don't quite know everything you're referencing.


my internet service isn't the best. Really all I can say is "try Google."
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Sorry I haven't exactly been active recently, I've...kind of been distracted by other things. I'll have the IC up by the end of the week.

@Spoo: Mainly, the fact that you haven't mentioned any abilities for the fused form or summon.
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Tachi said
Sorry I haven't exactly been active recently, I've...kind of been distracted by other things. I'll have the IC up by the end of the week.@Spoo: Mainly, the fact that you haven't mentioned any abilities for the fused form or summon.


Don't you mean the OCC?
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Both. Although I might just throw something together now for the OOC. Edit: Done.

...Why did they make the IC an OOC which should then lead to the OOC being made and then the IC?

...What I'm saying is that IC and IC should not have the same acronym, it's confusing. D:
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Shit, gotta get my stuff together and fix my cs fast :l Im sorry this is taking a long time, I had a great idea for a character but i lost a few of my sources for pics and im trying to find what I lost.
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It's fine. Also, I'm not exactly planning on closing signups when the IC (...in-character) goes up, so you can take your time if you want.
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