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I'm away from my computer for the next week. I'll post when I get back.
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Yea I'll start working on a reply now!

Also except my replies to not be as lengthy as everyone else's I'm not the best at long post.

EDIT: Something I just realized. Robinpaw doesn't have a mentor...


We are a casual role play so I do expect a minimum of two paragraphs. Otherwise we degenerate in a storyless piece of crap free role play.
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*cringes* Oh god then I'm screwed.

I probably should mention I'm just going into high school, hence the reason it's hard for me to write decent paragraphs...
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*cringes* Oh god then I'm screwed.

I probably should mention I'm just going into high school, hence the reason it's hard for me to write decent paragraphs...


Even a middle schooler could do it! It's not so difficult, once you get over the mental block. You doubt your own abilities

What you want to do, is capitalise on your character's personality during the post. You want each sentence to tell the reader something new - either about your character, the environment, or the plot line. In fact, go for all three in one, that definitely going to nail you down a few paragraphs

(I could post now, but I'd rather wait for Jaggedstar's reply.)
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I'll be posting today hopefully guys. No worries. I'll probably make a cat or two for Ashclan as well, and Moonflower lol.

and @booksmusicanime, I agree with @Memoir. That's exactly how I manage to get really long posts. A little bit of background, some memories, imagery and some actions and you've got yourself a post. I'm sure if you push yourself you'll be perfect. You're like what, fifteen right? Almost? You'll be fine with some practice and challeng. So get those paragraphs friend.
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Fourteen and 1/2 and I'm a writer (and according to my friends a pretty good one at that) but this is the sort of stuff I cannot manage. I may be in Honors English this starting school year but it's hard for me to write for characters because normally all my characters I've built up in my head (for example Wildfire is my oldest and most built up character for Warrior Cats).

I'm seriously considering dropping out cause this is actually pretty hard for me. And especially with how much of my mind focuses on other things besides roleplaying.
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Anyone post?
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I'm still waiting for everyone to continue.
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Okay
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@booksmusicanime To be truthfully honest, in an rp of this nature it's unreasonable to expect 2 paragraphs of writing each post. Personally, I don't care about the length as long as the quality is there. A one liner is better than posting nothing at all

And it's a little difficult moving forward when the people controlling the key cats seemed to have dropped off the face of the earth.
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I dropped off the face of the earth because I do have a real life to handle. Work and family are a bit more important to me than a role play about cats.

And I have no idea where our Ashclan leader went either.
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I dropped off the face of the earth because I do have a real life to handle. Work and family are a bit more important to me than a role play about cats.

And I have no idea where our Ashclan leader went either.


Of course, we can all relate to family issues, we all have them. It's just that you seem to be very active in your other RPs, that's all.
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I haven't posted something in another rp for days. Yesterday was the first post I was able to get up. Spam chats, messages and reply to questions is really easy between stuff. And when it syas I'm online I might not be. I never actually close Guild lol
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I need a mentor for Skypaw in Ashclan...
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Amberdust, Palestar and Silentclaw are all open. Pick one and send them a message.
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Great! Thanks. Also, will you be updating the first post? My cats aren't on there quite yet.
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I don't think I've put anyone on there in a while lol. I'll have to do that today before I play Skyrim.
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*coughs*
I've been busy this weekend and will be until probably beginning of August and even that will be for a short time frame.
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Who needs to post
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*raises hand* I will soon - either today or tomorrow - just been a bit busy.
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