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Your gross overreaction has been duly noted. That being said, you did agree that it is a bit jarring to see it at first, hence I stand by Natsu's evaluation. However, should she care to continue to use it, I'm not stopping her.

Speaking of styles, you folks don't mind if my posting style is more often composed in overtly purple writing, and generally string together a stream of run-ons as I will abuse the hell out of commas, subjecting you all as the colon and semicolon sit unused on my keyboard along with the lonely period button of which shall at most glean some attention once-in-a-while for moments where I decide to terminate my thoughts to which until then only the commas shall suffice and sate my needs in constructing the sentences that extend unto the upper echelons of the bearable limits in sustaining syntax to the point of nearly being mere length optimization for the scaffolding of filler material that shall give my writing the appearance of grandeur despite the lack of anything meaningful to be extracted from the pretentious use, or perhaps rather disuse, or misuse of punctuation proper.


Nope, I don't mind. This is basically me too.
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Tattooed girl's writing style, while different than ours, is in no way or form "wrong". This RP is posted in casual. Assuming her conent and writing is up to par with the guidelines I set, her POV makes no difference to me. @A Tattooed Girl if you cannot control your friend and keep him off this thread, youll be out of the RP. I wont tolerate another post from him whatsoever. There is not room in this RP or my schedule for people who act like that.

Also, ive already PM'ed one person about one liners. This RP isnt the place for them. Expand on your ideas and advance the scene. I allowed more than I planned to into this RP because I was nice. Dont make me regret it and have to kick people due to lazyness. If you feel you cant come up with more than once sentence, this is probably not the RP for you. I wont touch on this anymore. The next time it happens ill ask you to leave.

This isnt what I want to see so soon in a RP. Dont test me, I will gladly kick people. The nonsense stops here. Go back, reread my guidelines, and abide by them.
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@The Grey Dust My writing isnt perfect either. If I saw a problem with your writing, you would have known it after the first post. Those not up to par so far have been informed and are being given a single chance to improve. Feel free to continue writing as you wish. I rather enjoyed your entry, personally.
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@The Grey Dust My writing isnt perfect either. If I saw a problem with your writing, you would have known it after the first post. Those not up to par so far have been informed and are being given a single chance to improve. Feel free to continue writing as you wish. I rather enjoyed your entry, personally.


Oh my last post was a tongue-in-cheek jab at my own style. But yes, if it does get too purple, do tell me. I tend to mix in terse, choppy lines with flowing ones to give it a mix of styles.
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There are currently three simultaneous "plots" occurring. Two in the woods outside of NYC, and one inside the city at Jethro's residence. The first group on me will enter the city separately from the other forest group. Once the last people post their entries, @Ganelon being one of them I believe (no rush), indicating where they are beginning, the first major event in the plot will be occuring. Best of luck!
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@DarthSeverus394 How is that fair, to have to "control" someone? He, @LoneSilverWolf, is his own person, and respectfully, I'm not his keeper. I asked that he be nice when he stand up for me which obviously didn't happen, and hadn't realized he planned to post into the thread.. I thought he'd do it in a PM, considering he knew Natsu in the past from previous run-ins. It's not like I condoned it! I simply told him about how @Bigg Slamm had made my day, he asked why, so I explained the entire situation to him and he reacted the way he did. I'm sorry that, in a round-about-way the way I write brought so much drama into this RP. Why am I to be punished for something I literally had no control over?
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Everyone needs to take some time to calm down. If you've got drama, take it to PM. I don't want to read all of this hate in the OOC thread anymore. We're supposed to get along, not snap at each other; our RP will suffer otherwise.
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@Whimsley That's the thing. I'm not snapping at all, I'm honestly kind of hurt that I'm being blamed for this, and being threatened to be kicked out because of said issue. :/
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Any more posts in this OOC not pertaining to the RP will result in the poster being asked to leave the RP. Show maturity, do as I ask. Ill speak no more on the subject.
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Ill be on tomorrow, that is when the first major plot development will occur. Be sure of your character! You will be directly asked to choose a place in the coming day or so (by my character, not literally by me). Whether that be Rebel, Regime, or neutral. Have no fear, the decision will not be permanant. This is purely where your character CURRENTLY considers themselves. You will have freedom to switch allegiances following this plot development. All will make sense I assure you!
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I've almost got... well, a CS. It took me like an hour to get an image. I'm not asking for more time, though, just letting you know what's holding me up. I'll skip meeting up with Jethro right now, particularly because it would be pretty contrived to have three different people show up at his place on the same night, past curfew, with no direct association to one another.

I'm confident I can have this and the makings of an introduction ready tomorrow. Since I'll probably be best off not getting involved with the other characters before the first plot point drops, you might be doing me a favor by giving me at least some kind of hint as to where I should start so I can jump right in. Regardless, I can tell you for sure that my character is going to be chasing down these same rumors of a resistance gathering when he shows up to make his debut.
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@Overlord24 My character isn't Grimm :/
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Cue the ominous thunder, ladies and gentlemen, because IT! IS! ALLIIIIIIIVE!

Name: Dr. Nicholas Jenner

Appearance: Wiry and somewhat gaunt for such a well-off citizen, Dr. Jenner rarely takes as much care of himself as he honestly should. It is not uncommon for him to sport rings under his eyes from many a sleepless night of work, and his thin frame speaks of a habit of skipping meals in favor of other time-consuming pursuits. While not overly burdened by stress, the lack of attention he pays his body has nonetheless caused his age to start showing, and it is obvious at a glance that he is too weak to put up much of a fight should the need arise. He wears simple dress shirts and ties even when off duty, but as this is a rare enough occasion in its own right, few people have ever seen him in any outfit without a long, white, and frequently unbuttoned labcoat draped over his shoulders, which he often neglects to take off even when leaving the workplace.



(He's older than this and doesn't smoke, but believe me, finding a mostly appropriate image of someone in a labcoat was already nigh impossible)

Age: 37

Personality: Dr. Jenner is a sly, opportunistic man with few loyalties to anyone or anything other than himself. Often coming across as manipulative and condescending in his interactions with others, he tends to believe that he is the most intelligent person in the room and is eager to offer his opinions on most subjects even if they are neither requested nor appreciated. As he values efficiency over ethical conduct, these opinions are rarely popular outside of the Regime's most devoted circles, but he makes little effort to hold his tongue even in the company of people who find his ideology disagreeable; to him, hurt feelings are an insignificant price to pay for the sake of progress, and he expects to be judged for the results of his work rather than the methods used to achieve them. Pride is a great weakness of his, and he is easily agitated by anyone who expresses doubt in his abilities or finds his accomplishments less than impressive.

Background: From as early as his youth, Nicholas Jenner was recognized by the academic world as a talented and brilliant mind. After graduating MIT with a doctorate of science and a very promising thesis on the evolutionary processes of Pokemon, he was quickly snatched up by the Regime and put to work in one of its many research divisions, developing seemingly innocuous new technologies as a means of determining just where he belonged in the organization's vast power structure. Far from naive, the young Dr. Jenner understood that he was being tested almost immediately and rose to the challenge by drawing his peers into intense competitions over the recognition of their superiors. He quickly advanced through the ranks in this way, gaining a reputation for his diligence and willingness to exploit others - human and Pokemon alike - to achieve his goals.

The Regime was delighted by Jenner's initiative, and wasted no time in opening its gates to a number of secret projects deemed too disturbing for the public eye. For over a decade and a half, he worked as part of a team responsible for developing new methods of exerting control over Pokemon, streamlining the process of breeding and mass-manufacturing ideal servants, and as the head of one project which earned him a great deal of his present fame within the Regime's inner circles, creating a safe treatment to force evolutionary changes in otherwise immature Pokemon with only minimal risk of them developing complications further down the line. Throughout it all, Dr. Jenner was lauded as a model citizen and a flawless example of the qualities that the Regime sought in its most loyal supporters. He became the head of his own research division, and was given access to staff and resources that would have made his former peers seethe with envy. He had everything he could have possibly wanted from atop the pedestal they had placed him upon.

Time crept on, however, and while Jenner continued to make good use of his resources, his employers within the Regime began to grow complacent. Their brilliant scientist's value had been quantified at last, and believing that his loyalty to their cause was beyond questioning, their attention slowly drifted elsewhere. His work was put to use without its creator being recognized, with news circulating through the Regime's academic culture trending ever more strongly towards young talent and the promising changes that it could bring to their society as a whole. Dr. Jenner began to grow disgruntled as his own accomplishments went ignored, and as his budgets grew stricter and his staff grew smaller, his opinion of the Regime swiftly diminished alongside them.

Things came to a head when the details of his reassignment came down from above. A young man of nearly half his years was sent to assume control of his facilities, and with them, ownership of his staff and all ongoing projects that they were responsible for. Dr. Jenner himself was given the choice of being involved in a number of other projects throughout the country as an assistant director, but opted instead to take a long and much-needed vacation touring the country - in no small part to avoid violently losing his temper in front of his new superiors.

In truth, Jenner's tour throughout America was a cover for him to begin seeking members of the rebellion. Through bribery, anonymous inquiries, and the abuse of his access to Regime databases, he has spent the last four months chasing rumors of rebel activity outside of the attention of his employers and his would-be allies alike. Despite a great many close calls and frustrating setbacks, this search has ultimately brought him to New York city in the hopes of making direct contact with a rebel cell that the Regime has yet to discover, so that his revenge might begin in earnest.

Pokemon Name and Species: Sabi, Seviper

Pokemon Background: Sabi is a rejected member of a breeding program intended to supply Regime VIPs with Pokemon fit to protect them from unexpected attack by rebel forces and other civilian threats. As part of one of the program's later generations, her performance during the initial combat trials fell comfortably within acceptable limits, but she responded unexpectedly poorly to attempts at psychological conditioning and was eventually retired from active training due to the perceived risk of her acting out against her owner or failing to respond to commands during a crucial situation. When she was later discovered to be infertile, she was forced out of the program completely and entered the "open market" of Regime officials who lacked the status to be assigned high-grade, fully obedient Pokemon, but who still had enough pull within the system to lay claim to capable defects for their own personal use. At the time, Dr. Jenner was just such an official.

While Dr. Jenner originally intended to use Sabi as a tool purely for his own protection, he soon became intrigued by her independent tendencies and took her on as a subject of study as well. He would leave her outside of her Pokeball for extended periods of time without instruction purely to observe how she reacted, even going so far as to have her oversee his discussions with fellow researchers throughout the day. Later, he began to experiment with providing positive and negative reinforcement to shape her behavior in more subtle ways than the traumatic conditioning processes she had undergone in the past, and found that they were far more effective on her than even he could have anticipated; given enough agency to make decisions on her own, the seviper began to take an active role in protecting her owner, taking advantage of instincts and a reaction time that far exceeded his own in the process.

Having become undeniably invested in Sabi's development, and knowing there was only one thing left to do, Dr. Jenner took to exploring the limits of her intelligence in his spare time. At present, this remains a personal project that has been kept indefinitely on hold due to the already heavy scrutiny he has attracted from his colleagues for thinking to foster independence in what they consider a dangerous living weapon. Were it not for the proven success of his efforts so far and the lenience afforded by his status, it is likely that Sabi would have been confiscated and executed long ago - but in defiance of the Regime's close-minded prejudice, Jenner still insists upon calling her by name and treats her like a pet, if unaffectionately, in private.
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Guess I will do what I always do and wing it!
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I apologize for not having something to help bring you in. This subplot Natsu's been talking about wasn't something we really discussed in great detail, and with the actual plot moving forwards, there may not be enough time for me to become involved in it anyways (We'll see - I'll have more time to talk this over in about 4 hours). Right now I have to focus on just getting my introduction post up at all, so uh... sorry, and good luck with your own.
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@Ganelon
Its all good. I can handle myself. :) Good luck to you as well.
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@Ganelon Great CS! Feel free to post it up and post in IC when youre ready!
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I'll attempt to get a post in tonight. Hopefully, if not tomorrow.
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Mother effer. I just erased four paragraphs worth of an entry. Pissed off doesnt begin to describe my hatred for this damned laptop! I dont even know where to begin to rewrite all of that. Damnit.
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