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That sounds fine, I'll trust you to be forward when it comes to where things are too much. It's just that Prephlin quite literally feeds off the pain and suffering of sentient individuals under certain principles, often being physical. I'll just play it kind of slow and will avoid certain places/things should it be necessary.

I'll explain with the Earth thing. The species of Earth aren't bound to this planet by contract. When procreating with one such being, the offspring will only be 'half-bound' in certain respects. This is how Pahn allowed their birth as he wasn't someone to limit the freedom of lovers and possible children who would hardly have the same strength as their parents. They were less and less bound to Earth with each successive generation.

You probably said 'nearly', I'm guessing I just missed it and jumped a little too quickly on the word 'invulnerable'. This was my fault, but clarity never hurts as I'm sure we both understand lol.

And thanks! Haven't had a chance to respond to PM's, I will soon.
I'll talk more on it, but, I appreciate the suggestions and critiques like crazy! I very much so need lessons such as those. Thank you very much for taking time to write them out and thanks especially for being so specific. I'll definitely take it to heart in comfortably integrating it into my writings. :D

Also, I hardly mind whatever tense you write in. Just do whatever you're comfortable with, you're an excellent writer regardless.
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:-O Does it make me a terrible person that I think that’s a flippin’ awesome concept for an antagonist? xD

Okay, so the powers were bound to Earth, and only Earth, but by Pahn giving them a human form, they and their offspring were no longer bound to the Earth alone. Correct?

Eh, there’s nothing to be at fault for here. Either way, we’re on the same boat! :-) I do indeed quite understand.

No hurry. I always take forever, so it would be quite hypocritical of me to get upset about others taking a while to respond, be it to PMs or RPs!

You’re very much welcome! And thank you for being so open to all that. It’s annoying, to say the least, when you put time toward something like that, and have the person you did it for throw it to the wayside, no matter how much you enjoy doing it. So, thanks for the opportunity, and keep up the good work!

Thank you, thank you! :-)
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I know that was a ridiculous wait time, sorry about that. I'll try and make a post every 1-2 days from now on.
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Don't worry about it. I know how things can come up and keep people busy for a while. I've been rather unexpectedly busy myself as of late, so have been a bit slower than my usual with replies. Got a bit lucky this weekend with free time to work on them, though!
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I know it's been far too long, but, I hope you still want to continue this story. I hope I gave you an opportunity to get re-acquainted with your character with your next post since I'm about to really immerse you in the global implications of this story.
Pahn sealed away his magic since most of this worlds power came from his aura in the ages of myth. He's about to let that energy spill out again, and it'll do a lot more than give Anora a couple flashbacks and enhanced powers.

We'll be waking quite a few myths from their slumber here soon.
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Seriously, you don’t need to worry about me losing interest or not wanting to continue the story because of delays. I enjoy the story so far, so, in this case, it will take a lot more than waiting for replies to make me want to back out! Honestly, I get excited when I see there’s a reply from you here. I really only need to reread Anora’s CS to get “reacquainted” with her. Which, really, I should do occasionally anyway… I kind of forgot about her knife. And its description. And a couple other aspects. Sorry if it felt like I was off with her to you in my last post, or something, for that to be brought up!

Sweet. I’m really looking forward to the advancement of the story!

Also, like “a parent taking its unknowing child to get flu-shots.” That’s wonderful, there. xD
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Sorry for the consecutive post, but I realized something; Anora has not actually given Pahn her name, or had it said around him. Is his use of it, then, intentional (like a two-way knowledge thing), or accidental? Not a big deal or anything, I was just going to make a comment about her realizing that my next post of it was intentional.
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It's intentional, knowing her name without her speaking it is achieved nearly as second nature by him. Let's just say he see's and hears a lot more than the average human, especially from those without any magic defenses up.

I do imagine there's currently an ambiguous connection between them though. It's only just now forming but I believe he's beginning to naturally feel certain sensations to be communicated to him aside from him naturally sensing them. Their connection will possibly be more concrete in the future, I'll have him propose it to her and I'll run the idea by you on here when I've thought more on it.
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*Gives a thumbs-up to all of that, because I'm too lazy to give an actual response.*

Sorry for the wait. I've been making everyone wait as of late. Heh.

P.S. For some reason, words didn't want to come to me today. I had to drag them kicking, screaming, and throwing stuff (I'm still wondering where they got all the spoons and jam). So I apologize if my post isn't up to par with its usual.
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Youre fine! That last post was great! Im sorry of the wait on mine too, I'm working on my post lol.
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Sorry for that ridiculous wait, some work/family stuff took the wheel and I ended up being busy longer than expected.
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No worries. It kind of worked out well for me. Heh. I'm going to do my best to get to a reply here either later tonight (I suppose "this morning" might be a bit more accurate) or, as is more likely, Tuesday. Have not really gotten any replies out for the past almost three weeks because of being out of town.
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Thats totally understandeable. You were out of town? Hope youre having fun wherever you are! Im glad it all worked out, I didnt mean to put this so far to the wayside for so long.
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Yeah. It was only supposed to be for two weeks, but ended up getting extended for a third. Alas, it was more for business than for pleasure. I'm still trying to get back into the swing of things from being back, and get creative juices flowing again, so apologize for the wait while I do that! A reply for here is next on my "To-Do" list.
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