Nice there's a chance they work together lol, also I want your opinion on something, because i feel like if I added it it would be broken an I don't want that @Azure Bubbles so being able to enter shadow an move between shadows like a teleport, on a scale of 1-10 of how broken is it, 5 is a normal ability

Nice there's a chance they work together lol, also I want your opinion on something, because i feel like if I added it it would be broken an I don't want that @Azure Bubbles so being able to enter shadow an move between shadows like a teleport, on a scale of 1-10 of how broken is it, 5 is a normal ability

That’s up to @Eviledd1984 he’s the GM.

Personally, I’ve had bad experiences with teleport spam in RPs, So it depends on how it’s executed.

Honestly i mostly want it for the following reasons
1. Dramatic entrances and exits
2. Minor use in combat
3. A way to escape a situation (If needed)
5. Easier to move around and get to home base w/out being followed

Honestly though, emphasis on the Minor in reason 2 I don't really wanna use it combat that much because it would make the whole fight cheap and not fun, I would be fine if I just straight up not allowed to use it in combat due to 'Concentration' requirements

@Azure Bubbles possibly terrible idea, i just looked at spotlight and legit they would be a day and night themed duo, but if they partner and Saetans hero name instead of 'The Shadow' is 'Backstage'. Opinions?

@Azure Bubbles I'm guessing that the thumbs up is a yes, so we need to work on coordinating my chars backstory

Yes

@TruckKun

Let me see your character sheet and then we can go from there.

Personality: Despite his appearance, outfit and name Saetan is actually kinda shy (Especially around girls). People think that he doesn't stay long after a rescue because he is being dramatic, or he has another person to save, something like that. The real reason is that he doesn't want to risk staying too long and getting roped into an interview, or accidentally saying something wrong. He almost never has a smile on his face though, due to his childhood, but, if you can get him to smile, the shadows feel like a warm embrace

Biography; Part 1: A Cheerful Child When Saetan was young he lived on the 4th floor of a building. His parents (Who actually were pretty nice people despite being completely wasted when they named him) could describe him as 'A precocious child, though upon occasion particularly obstreperous. All in all a fairly inquisitive and happy child.' Even when he was young Saetan was good at reading,climbing and acrobatics. His parents would occasionally find him in places ranging from the overhang over their back door, to the roof of the neighbors covered patio and more. Saetans favorite books when he was young, was almos anything by Ann McCaffrey, H.P. Lovecraft, the chronicle of Narnia and Time Lord Fairytales. However that would change, when Saetan was 6, he was out, walking to the cornerstore a few blocks away when it happened.

Part 2: A Fire Starter What happened was this: a downstairs neighbor's kid was having an argument with their parents when they awakened their abilities, unfortunately for them an for everyone else inside the building, his ability was to make and control fire. The house went up like a match doused in gasoline. Herod arrived fairly quickly, and were able to stop the fire from spreading to the adjacent houses. By that time however, the house was a burned husk, and all that was left from the charred remains of the house was a single book, it was a book that his father had ordered custom made, it had all the fiction of HP Lovecraft (except for 'Sweet Ermengarde') and also had all of the 'Time Lord Fairytales' it had a TARDIS in space surrounded by tentacles on the cover, an on the back was his favorite Lovecraft quote 'That which is not dead can eternal lie and with strange aeons even death may die' The only reason that it survived is because it was wrapped in a fire blanket that Saetan had gotten as a gag gift the previous year, but it was only in the fire blanket because Bertram, his father had put it their. Bertram was found curled around the book, with his signature Gear necklace on a leather strap also stuffed inside the fire blanket.The kid who started the fire would've survived the flames, and almost did, but the house fell down around him, and as he was on his knees over his parents, a piece came down an snapped his neck.

(Will do the third paragraph shortly, there might be 4 paras total, just easier n for me to do it a little piecemeal)

Part 3: A not so flowery place with a very flowery name After the fire the police couldn't find any living family. And it's not like heroes are going to take in a random kid, who appears to have no powers. After all, training a replacement is one thing, becoming a parent is another. So Saetan was sent to 'The Peter Pan Orphanage for the Lost, the Forgotten and the Displaced. Unofficially it was named 'The Lost Boy's orphanage' or just 'Lost Boy'. With that name you would think that it was a wonderful place, run by nice people, where there is enough to eat, and everyone is treated fairly. If you thought that then here's your wake-up call to reality. The orphanage ha been around for a hundred years or more, it might've been like that once, but once in an act of 'charity' a rich person 'redesigned and refurbished' the orphanage, making it a testament to dystopian architecture . The design of the building was such that it almost reminded you of a prison, an instead if bright cheery colors, and wood paneling, or anything that made parts of it look like an actual home, the whole thing was brick. That was the only thing about it that wa nice. Even the proprietors weren't nice. They would drink with the money that was supposed to go towards blankets and clothes and other such things for the children, then beat them when they complained. TLDR: abusive owners of orphanage dead, Saetans shadow abilities awakened.

@Eviledd1984 What is Weeping Willow's position in the Atrium? Would Sarah have a line of sight to go in on her?

@Eviledd1984 What is Weeping Willow's position in the Atrium? Would Sarah have a line of sight to go in on her?

Not at the moment. But as soon as she gets inside she will see her.

Part 4: Consequences Almost immediately after Iranon realized what he had done, he ran to their office and called 911 and told them what had happened. Soon the police arrived and took him into custody and questioned him about exactly what had happened. The police had a person there who's ability is to tell if someone is being honest. They verified the story, and the other kids corroborated his story. Due to the fact that Iranon was fairly young, and that it was self-defense nothing really came of it. However, one good thing came out of it though, the new people who were running the orphanage were genuinely good people. It also had another unintended effect. It got him on the radar of the heroes. One of which took him in and trained him in martial arts, but despite his mentor/master's best efforts, while Iranon got skilled in armed combat (especially with bladed weapons) he was useless in a unarmed match. His masters exact words were: 'Its the Damnedest thing. If i give you a dagger, or a sword, or that damned kusarigama you love so damn much you are excellent. But in a fisticuffs match your about as good as a kitten with no claws'

Posting what I have of my char sheet and background so it's easier to look at
Not done with backstory yet though

Name: Iranon Valerius Sigismund

Alias: The Shadow

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Appearance: Iranon Clark is short, 4 ft 11in. He has black hair and sapphire blue eyes. He has a very pale complexion, almost vamperic. His face has a soft chin lie and could almost be described as slight effeminate. He has a more slender, athletic build. His Superhero outfit consists of a Black (suprise!) trenchcoat, with a waist coat that has silver accents. He also wears a large pair of almost steam punk sunglasses (during th day, at night he doesn't wear them, but they are in his waistcoat pocket) and a black detectives hat, he wears dress shoes, and dress pants. When he dresses as a civilian his outfit doesn't change as much as it probably should, the main differences is that the trenchcoat doesn't have an oversized collar just hanging out, he has less ostentatious sunglasses, and he wears a pure black baseball cap

Superpower: He can control shadows/darkness an also make them solid, as well as being able to see perfectly in darkness, the trade-off is that he is sensitive to light and depending on the brightness of it affects him about as much as hitting daredevil with a sonic attack

Skills: he is skilled in armed combat, swords, kusarigamas and a few other bladed weapons. He is also good at acrobatics. He is completely hopeless in unarmed combat though. Also he is a good cook, one of the few things he enjoys doing

Equipment: Bullet proof waist-coat, a Lovecraft inspired pocket watch, a wrist watch, that has a cover on it (he prefers using the pocket watch but he likes to have as many enclosed things as possible so that he always has shadows to control)

Personality: Despite his appearance, outfit and name Iranon is actually kinda shy (Especially around girls). People think that he doesn't stay long after a rescue because he is being dramatic, or he has another person to save, something like that. The real reason is that he doesn't want to risk staying too long and getting roped into an interview, or accidentally saying something wrong. He almost never has a smile on his face though, due to his childhood, but, if you can get him to smile, the shadows feel like a warm embrace

Biography; Part 1: A Cheerful Child When Iranon was young he lived on the 4th floor of a building. His parents (Who actually were pretty nice people despite being completely wasted when they named him) could describe him as 'A precocious child, though upon occasion particularly obstreperous. All in all a fairly inquisitive and happy child.' Even when he was young Iranon was good at reading,climbing and acrobatics. His parents would occasionally find him in places ranging from the overhang over their back door, to the roof of the neighbors covered patio and more. Iranon's favorite books when he was young, was almos anything by Ann McCaffrey, H.P. Lovecraft, the chronicle of Narnia and Time Lord Fairytales. However that would change, when Iranon was 6, he was out, walking to the cornerstore a few blocks away when it happened.

Part 2: A Fire Starter What happened was this: a downstairs neighbor's kid was having an argument with their parents when they awakened their abilities, unfortunately for them an for everyone else inside the building, his ability was to make and control fire. The house went up like a match doused in gasoline. Herod arrived fairly quickly, and were able to stop the fire from spreading to the adjacent houses. By that time however, the house was a burned husk, and all that was left from the charred remains of the house was a single book, it was a book that his father had ordered custom made, it had all the fiction of HP Lovecraft (except for 'Sweet Ermengarde') and also had all of the 'Time Lord Fairytales' it had a TARDIS in space surrounded by tentacles on the cover, an on the back was his favorite Lovecraft quote 'That which is not dead can eternal lie and with strange aeons even death may die' The only reason that it survived is because it was wrapped in a fire blanket that Iranon had gotten as a gag gift the previous year, but it was only in the fire blanket because Bertram, his father had put it their. Bertram was found curled around the book, with his signature Gear necklace on a leather strap also stuffed inside the fire blanket.The kid who started the fire would've survived the flames, and almost did, but the house fell down around him, and as he was on his knees over his parents, a piece came down an snapped his neck.

Part 3: A not so flowery place with a very flowery name After the fire the police couldn't find any living family. And it's not like heroes are going to take in a random kid, who appears to have no powers. After all, training a replacement is one thing, becoming a parent is another. So Iranon was sent to 'The Peter Pan Orphanage for the Lost, the Forgotten and the Displaced. Unofficially it was named 'The Lost Boy's orphanage' or just 'Lost Boy'. With that name you would think that it was a wonderful place, run by nice people, where there is enough to eat, and everyone is treated fairly. If you thought that then here's your wake-up call to reality. The orphanage ha been around for a hundred years or more, it might've been like that once, but once in an act of 'charity' a rich person 'redesigned and refurbished' the orphanage, making it a testament to dystopian architecture . The design of the building was such that it almost reminded you of a prison, an instead if bright cheery colors, and wood paneling, or anything that made parts of it look like an actual home, the whole thing was brick. That was the only thing about it that wa nice. Even the proprietors weren't nice. They would drink with the money that was supposed to go towards blankets and clothes and other such things for the children, then beat them when they complained. TLDR: abusive owners of orphanage dead, Iranon's shadow abilities awakened.
Part 4: Consequences Almost immediately after Iranon realized what he had done, he ran to their office and called 911 and told them what had happened. Soon the police arrived and took him into custody and questioned him about exactly what had happened. The police had a person there who's ability is to tell if someone is being honest. They verified the story, and the other kids corroborated his story. Due to the fact that Iranon was fairly young, and that it was self-defense nothing really came of it. However, one good thing came out of it though, the new people who were running the orphanage were genuinely good people. It also had another unintended effect. It got him on the radar of the heroes. One of which took him in and trained him in martial arts, but despite his mentor/master's best efforts, while Iranon got skilled in armed combat (especially with bladed weapons) he was useless in a unarmed match. His masters exact words were: 'Its the Damnedest thing. If i give you a dagger, or a sword, or that damned kusarigama you love so damn much you are excellent. But in a fisticuffs match your about as good as a kitten with no claws'

@Azure Bubbles just wanted your opinion on my char sheet so far. I'm sorry if I'm bugging you it's just when I work on a character, my brain shifts into overdrive and presses the turbo-boost button on the 'Ask opinions of others, make it as polished as possible before submitting, and STRESS!'. So if I'm bugging you then please just tell me and I will stop.

The looks super intimidating but is actually shy is the best part. But there’s a lot going on. Between the name, the outfit, the weapons, and the traumatic backstory, he can come off a little too edgy. I think you should dial it down a little bit so his personality stands out a little more.

@Azure Bubbles ok, makes sense, anything specifically that I should edit?

And yeah changing the name might be a good idea. I only typed it out because it was the only name I could think of tbh, I'm terrible with names. The only other 2 names in my mind are Olliver and Jareth

@Azure Bubbles any name ideas?

im really bad with names currently i have Iranon Valerius Sigismund. which i dont know how i feel about it