Hidden 3 mos ago Post by MordecaiThe 1st
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Tic, tock, punch that clock. Make sure you can buy that estate block
With a white picket fence of the finest stock
Be good and complacent, your perception needs to stay faded, Find your place in line with the rest of the flock
Climb and fall and tumble down, just look happy, don't dare frown
"take it easy, it aint a race"
But it is, i'm rushing. Struggling. I dont wander enough so I'm lusting
Craving, thirsting, and to slate my thirst im crushing
All that I can, and things that I shouldn't
Tried to stay steady on my own but i couldn't
The tremors start to throw me off, my balance is a joke
The life I live is too much to swallow, I'm starving but with each bite taken I can't help but choke
Home is non-existant, The ones closest to me feel so distant
I miss the feeling, but some ambiguous force has gone heart-stealing, and mines in a freezer somewhere gone, like a testament that its best left off my sleeve
I ain't bitchin, just now listenin to the things that I've touted, but didn't live by, I'm a walking lie
Fuck this rhyme scheme, I want to live in my old day dreams
Sleep was once an escape, but now it escapes me
Dreams once sweet have turned to ash, as everything I touch seems to do
Its the common theme
my existance is intangible, caught in gnashing mandibles of some grotesque sphinx
Is this shit all it eats? Cause its breath stinks.
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I would like to, if you are willing to allow, write some poetry alongside you in this thread. I hope that's not a strange question!
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Hidden 11 days ago Post by MordecaiThe 1st
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That would be great! Just don't put me to shame too terribly! :)
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You didn't hear me, I'll say it louder
Impatient, I'll say it fouler
I've always got something poor to say because I'm too proud to admit that I was wrong today
Feeling unwell
I know I'm sick
I'm thinking too fast
I take the hit
To slow me down
I hear the drip
Of the last shot from the bottle
The brake that'll take my foot off the throttle
It's Gasoline
Make believe
This isn't me
Its just a dream
Heavy air
On a dare
I'll say that I don't care
And for once, I'll believe it.
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Hidden 8 days ago Post by LordofthePies
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Just wanted to say that you're pretty good and what you do. Keep it up c:

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@LordofthePies Hey, thanks! I really appreciate it.
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