[OOC] Persona: Forget the Night

[Dogematix]

New NPC
Captain Sparrow

@Raddum I made one tiiiiiiny change.

@Fury Panda

What a waifu.

[Todd Howard]

@Fury Panda

I had the thought but I didn't go with it. We shall never speak of the change...

What a waifu.

@Dogematix

Yes. What a waifu indeed.

[Dogematix]

And the prologue's done! Taking a formatting leaf out of everyone else's book too XD

[Todd Howard]

@Dogematix

Two things I've learned after reading that:

1. Itaki needs to underhandedly get some booze for the guys eventually

2. Sam's family almost seems ripped straight out of Oklahoma

[Dogematix]

I don't know enough about American states to get that so I'll assume they seem like characters from the musical... which I've also never seen.

[Gummy1295]

And the prologue's done! Taking a formatting leaf out of everyone else's book too XD

@Dogematix

O.M.G. I have never been so excited to read any post before yours just now. And it only told me 231 clicks on the Refresh button. And no, it's not really due to the fact that you were the only member who had to post his prologue...

Okay, not entirely. I found your prologue better-written than mine. Whether that means something to you or not is up to your personal interpretation :)

[Dogematix]

@Gummy1295 Aw thanks man, always nice to hear my posts have generated some hype XD I thought yours was well written too. I always end up doing essays in the early points of an RP as I try and get to grips with a character and find my feet with them.

I'm looking forward to later on when the secrets start to come out with Jeff and Sam. One can afford to live all fancy and acts like he can't while the other's dirt broke and fronts like he's fancy. #trading places bros for life

[Gummy1295]

We've collected all 6 of the Dragon Prologues, guys! We can finally use their combined powers to summon the Drago--I mean, Panda, and wish for the story to progress!

Will our heroes manage to actually get in that damn train? Find out on the next exciting episode of Persona: Forget the Night!

[OUTRO MUSIC]

[Gummy1295]

@Gummy1295 Aw thanks man, always nice to hear my posts have generated some hype XD I thought yours was well written too. I always end up doing essays in the early points of an RP as I try and get to grips with a character and find my feet with them.

I'm looking forward to later on when the secrets start to come out with Jeff and Sam. One can afford to live all fancy and acts like he can't while the other's dirt broke and fronts like he's fancy. #trading places bros for life

@Dogematix

Also, bestie confirmed :D

EDIT: One of the biggest issues I have when writing IC posts is keeping the writing format uniform. Everything I've written, homework or otherwise, was written almost entirely in the first person, present tense. (In contrast to third person, past tense, which has become a sort of unspoken rule for most RPs) I try my hardest to write in the same format as everyone else, but when I get inspired, I tend to forget to follow this format, and as a result, I end up with a mess of verb tenses. I've been chastised on many occasions for this, since I'm accidentally jumping to and from different tenses throughout the post.

[Todd Howard]

We've collected all 6 of the Dragon Prologues, guys! We can finally use their combined powers to summon the Drago--I mean, Panda, and wish for the story to progress!

Will our heroes manage to actually get in that damn train? Find out on the next exciting episode of Persona: Forget the Night!

[OUTRO MUSIC]

@Gummy1295

Does this mean that all along, Panda's 1st super informative IC post was the 7th dragon ball

[Gummy1295]

@Raddum You should lay low, the Illuminati are looking for you

[Todd Howard]

@Gummy1295

shit

[Todd Howard]

EDIT: One of the biggest issues I have when writing IC posts is keeping the writing format uniform. Everything I've written, homework or otherwise, was written almost entirely in the first person, present tense. (In contrast to third person, past tense, which has become a sort of unspoken rule for most RPs) I try my hardest to write in the same format as everyone else, but when I get inspired, I tend to forget to follow this format, and as a result, I end up with a mess of verb tenses. I've been chastised on many occasions for this, since I'm accidentally jumping to and from different tenses throughout the post.

@Gummy1295

Yeah, that tends to get people when starting out. After awhile though you'll get used to it. I did! :P

Personally? I don't spellcheck my posts, lol. So there's always a mistake or two crammed inside every one of 'em. I haven't re-read over Itaki's even, it was just a second draft after I made a post that didn't feel as good to me as the one I posted. I bet there's some mistakes in there somewhere! And if not? Well, I got really damn lucky.

[Fury Panda]

Really feel like I should have just wrote "You guys have a great time at your new school. The end."

[Todd Howard]

but there’s at least one dark haired boy with glasses who has been sniffling throughout the ride, likely already homesick, or simply terrified of heights.

@Fury Panda

you bastard, the poor kid is probably just sick like Itaki!

Pretty scary being high up like that though. At least it's not a Plane!

[Gummy1295]

...I'm just gonna leave this here.

[Todd Howard]

So are we going with the order we posted the prologues? If that's the case then it's time for El Jefe' to panic

*cough@Gummy1295cough*

[Fury Panda]

So are we going with the order we posted the prologues? If that's the case then it's time for El Jefe' to panic

*cough@Gummy1295cough*

@Raddum

I just posted a posting order in the OOC and first post in IC.

[Gummy1295]

So are we going with the order we posted the prologues? If that's the case then it's time for El Jefe' to panic

*cough@Gummy1295cough*

@Raddum

"As flattered as I am, that's not really my name."



EDIT: Turns out I am going first, after all. @Fury Panda, you got my back? You know, just in case I write something stupid.

[Todd Howard]

EDIT: Turns out I am going first, after all. @Fury Panda, you got my back? You know, just in case I write something stupid.

@Gummy1295

/Inb4 Jeff jumps out of the train