[OOC] Nexus Of Worlds Multiverse

[yoshua171]

Thinking about my other 2-3 characters (if 3, it'll be 1 of each level--low, intermediate, and high--and if 2 it'll be low and intermediate). Also wondering if anyone would be willing to face my current character, Arkaeis aka Zume.

You can really call him either *shrugs*

[bushidoxisamu2]

What's the voting for? And plus almost done with some major changes

[LeeRoy]

An increase in the strength of characters who are purely physical.

[bushidoxisamu2]

Well it all depends for me. Like if weights were added to hold back ones full strength until the weights are dropped, many example could be made with that. Or is it just a strong guy that just even stronger with given time in combat?

[LeeRoy]

No, it's just a strength limit increase.

Currently, 100 tons lifting force is the max.
The redo was going to be 500 tons lifting force.

There are currently

2 votes for yes on the increase
8 votes for no on the increase

[bushidoxisamu2]

500 is definitely an overkill, 100tons is good enough so I vote no

[LeeRoy]

Yes: 2 Votes
No: 9 Votes

I think we can call it now, that's 11 people voting out of like, 14-ish? And 9 of them say no. So I think it's decided, the vote for No exceeds the votes for Yes.

[bushidoxisamu2]

Ok done with changes and ready for the second review

[LeeRoy]

Give me like, ten minutes or so.

[Alphakoka]

bushidoxisamu2 said
Ok done with changes and ready for the second review

No cerberus summoning scythe and cerberus' sheet?

[bushidoxisamu2]

Nope I got rid of them since I'll be mostly focus on shadow based and melee. I don't need a weapon when I can create them so I got rid of the scythe and cerburus

[LeeRoy]

Aside from a good number of spelling and grammar errors this is a remarkable reevaluation of the sheet. Complete turn around.

• Hades Fury: Totally acceptable now, good job.


• Demonic Presence: Limit the range it allows you to extend it to about five feet, nothing like 100 yards as they did in the fight you're referencing.


• Shadow Puppets: So these just work as mouths and cannons and the strings for the puppets? Wow, I would not have gathered that from the way you described it earlier. Yeah, this is acceptable.


• Hell's Bounds: Acceptable as is.


• Black Plague: This is acceptable, the killing thing is still up for debate. Change it so it says: "Kills normal humans in three days. More powerful beings can resist the poison."


• Demon Wings: Acceptable as is, since flight is only specific to a few characters. And almost all of them can fly up to sonic speeds.


• Regeneration: You limited this well, as is, acceptable.


• Bats of the Night: Perfect limitation.


• Prowess of a demon: The only thing you should watch is the incremental strength increase. These effects are required to have a prep behind them, one turn prep for each increment. And these effects only last one attack, and then have to be prepped again. Other than that, it's acceptable.


• Shadow Puppet Defense: As long as you don't just say "The puppets are spontaneously in the way of the attack." Them blocking it has to make sense, otherwise that would start an argument or two.


• Masochism is the love of pain, not Sadism.


• Power of the Underworld: You should also add that he can see in the dark. Otherwise both parties will be blind.

[bushidoxisamu2]

The minor changes are done ^w^

[LeeRoy]

Alright, when Green comes online and reviews it we'll see if he gets in.

[LeeRoy]

I'm going to be job hunting more proactively over the course of the next couple days, so my posting speed will be. . .Probably non-existent.

[Green]

Mornin'.. Err, I mean, g'day-.. Err, I mean, Good evening.

[LeeRoy]

Howdy Green, came it at just the right time. I'm probably going to be heading out within the next 2-4 hours, forewarning.

Bushido's sheet needs your say on it, so if you could skim over it and my reviews that'd be radical.

[Green]

Will do.

Edit; Le done. Looks good to me. The things LeeRoy pointed out is spot on. The only thing I would like to add, is that on the "Power of the underworld" - you specify the size of the darkness. As "Darkening the battlefield" is a bit too vague, seeing as every battle location is of varying size and shape.

As for it being magical darkness, and allowing only people who specifically see through magical darkness to see through it; I was uncertain if I wanted to allow such a powerful ability, but seeing as it takes you three preps to get there, and that the ability strongly hints your opponent way ahead of time as to what it does, I'm gonna give it the go-ahead. Once the size of it is specified, that is.

[LeeRoy]

Alright, add in like a range on the dark battlefield thing and we can add him to the list of accepted characters.

Also, Schradinger, when you come online. The vote came in as;

2 votes yes
9 votes no

That's 11 votes out of like, 14-ish people, so I'd say the vote carries.

[Green]

Yupp. No pushing the limits.