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I have a character idea that I'd like to use for this rp, let me know if there's anything I have to change, I'm new to this forum so any advice is appreciated!


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Apologies for the delay, been quite busy. Not going to have much time tonight either as I have to prepare my apartment for inspection tomorrow.

Anyways, I'm having to consider some aspects of your character concept. Mostly with how the steam-based machines technology could change the setting I have. I'm going to have to think about whether or not I'd be comfortable with that sort of addition, in comparison to what tech I have already.
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I was planning on having the Kagune clan's inventions be on the smaller scale so that it wouldn't interfere with nation wide technology, seeing as the only people that can use the inventions are those with steam release. But I can change whatever is necessary to better fit your concept, just let me know.

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Apologies again for being so busy lately. I've got a job interview tomorrow as well so need to head to bed early. I've been going through various character skeletons as fast as I can.

@Dystopya Yours is next up :). Delays will not be much longer.
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@Dystopya Sorry for the delay, life has been kicking me in the ass lately. But should be calmed down now. Anyway, I went over the character sheet and it is quite well-written. There aren't a lot of specific issues, however there are multiple big-picture / overall concept concerns.

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@Dystopya Like the edits you did :3. Things look pretty much all good now.
Only thing is that in the bio there is some factors of him letting down his clan as a whole by becoming a shinobi, rather than just his immediate family. That can easily be altered though or explained, whichever route you'd want to go with.
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✖ ‖ N a m e
Kushina Uzumaki

✖ ‖ A g e / B i r t h d a y
12, July 10th

✖ ‖ G e n d e r
Female

✖ ‖ B o d y T y p e
Athletic, rather tall.

✖ ‖ V i l l a g e
Konohagakure

✖ ‖ C l a n
Uzumaki. A clan famed for its sealing jutsu. They are a rather enigmatic clan that many don't seem to know about, if people do it is usually only surface level at best. While possessing no obvious Kekkei Genkai, those of Uzumaki blood are typically hardier than most, slower to age and incredibly resilient. One final unique trait of the Uzumaki clan is a unique chakra that some of its members possess, suiting them to becoming Jinchuuriki.

✖ ‖ F a m i l y
Father: Heiyama Uzumaki
Mother: Ren Uzumaki (Deceased)
Siblings: Kei Uzumaki (Deceased)

✖ ‖ R a n k
Genin/Battalion 1

✖ ‖ T a i l e d B e a s t
Kurama: The nine tailed fox.

✖ ‖ T i t l e s / N i c k n a m e s
The Red Hot-blooded Habanero. Red. Fox-Child.

✖ ‖ P e r s o n a l i t y
Kushina is a kind soul with a lot to prove. She has a soft-hearted nature, being incredibly supportive and surprisingly nurturing. However it is hidden beneath a large amount of stubbornness and frustration. She has been victimized and berated by anyone she has ever met... Even her own father seems to have abandoned her to her loneliness. To hide that loneliness she channels it into a stubborn will, refusing to give up until she is accepted! She is an eccentric and impulsive girl, often acting without thinking or with little regard for the consequences. Her eccentricities often manifest themselves as a tomboyish attitude, as well as the tendency to use the phrase “Ya know” as something of a verbal tic. Kushina is a strong and capable girl who is devoted to helping her teammates and proving herself as a true Kunoichi. Maybe she’ll finally gain some of the acceptance she has been yearning for.

✖ ‖ L i k e s
- Ramen
- Genuine compliments
- The rain
- Nature
- Her heritage

✖ ‖ D i s l i k e s
- Kurama
- Isolation
- Her hair
- Fire
- Rejection

✖ ‖ N i n d o
"I don't care how many times I have to fight! I'll make them accept me no matter what!"

✖ ‖ B i o g r a p h y
The destruction of Uzushiogakure sent tremors throughout the Uzumaki clan, so many were dead or missing that it was widely regarded as the end of the clan as a whole. Luckily the survivors were given refuge in Konoha and what few remained of the Uzumaki bloodline sought solace with their longtime neighbors. The leaf village prospered for quite some time. The Uzumaki clan’s presence made the village leaders considerably less worried about matters concerning sealing...Such as the tailed beast they held within the village.

Either due to their overconfidence in keeping the beast sealed, or through sheer, dumb luck the Nine tailed fox broke free of it’s jar. Erupting within the middle of Konoha the Fox began to spread destruction and death across the village, there was no discrimination, no strategy there was just pure and unbridled fury and contempt for all of humanity. The destruction continued and the leaf threw everything they had at the seemingly unstoppable force. That was when the Uzumaki clansmen proposed a plan to the Hokage...A way to seal the beast for good.

The plan was put into action, there were no other options. The Shinobi drew the beast as far out from the village as they could, and that’s when the trap was sprung. The Uzumaki members placed a sealing barrier around the fox binding it into one location and preventing further damage to the village. After the barrier was erected they tightened the barrier and managed to seal it within one of the ninjas present: Ren Uzumaki. The battle was over and Ren became the bearer of the Nine-Tailed fox.

It was only for a short time however. Ren only bore the spirit inside of her for a little under a week, the beast’s voice began to ring out in her mind, clouding her thoughts and causing her to feel it’s undying rage. It was clear that Ren’s older body wasn’t capable of holding the beast, like before it was slowly seeping out..They needed a younger body, someone to grow and adapt to the power of the Nine Tailed Fox. The decision was eventually reached to seal Kurama within a child, it was their best hope for keeping this destructive force under control.

Ren’s heart was heavy the day she offered up her daughter to be the Jinchuriki of Kurama. The girl had a special chakra that would allow her to host the beast with minimal complications, Her brother vehemently denied this and begged to be put in Kushina’s place despite Ren’s better judgement she allowed it. Kurama’s seal was transferred into her eldest son, consuming her life in the process. The sacrifice was in vain once Kurama’s chakra enshrouded the boy and started to destroy his body from the inside. The boy rampaged briefly across the village, before Kushina’s father and the remaining Uzumaki clansmen once again erected a sealing barrier and tore the beast from the son’s body. Finally the original plan was put into motion and Kurama was sealed within the baby Kushina where he remains to this day.

Kushina’s early years were filled with questions and sadness...Each time she asked her father about why she didn’t have a mother, or about the brother she supposedly had, her father refused to speak, in fact her father had all but shut down entirely. Kushina and her father’s relationship was strained from the very beginning, her father unable to look upon her, considering Kushina to be a reminder of everything he had lost to that beast that rested inside of her...And he wasn’t the only one to treat Kushina so terribly, the village itself seemed to despise her, rocks were thrown, horrible insults hurled at her, comments about her hair, about her worthlessness and something about a fox? Kushina was constantly isolated and picked on and while it hurt her, It also pushed her, it pushed her to try her hardest in everything she did. She became a kunoichi of her own accord, desiring respect and hopefully admiration from her peers. While the bullying never ceased Kushina became stronger, more resilient and turned her sadness into rage to fight back against those who sought to victimize her. Earning her the nickname: “The red hot-blooded Habanero” for her fits of rage. While Kushina comes across as tough, angry and willful she truly just desires friendship and acceptance, even going so far as to declare that she will become the next hokage...Becoming Hokage would surely mean she would be admired and respected right?

Her ninja training went well, she excelled when it came to Taijustsu however her ninjutsu was always lacking something, something that Kushina was never able to place. Now a part of the elite battalion she is thrilled to be able to finally gain the respect she so desperately wants, but also wonders why she was picked.

✖ ‖ N a t u r e s
Wind and Water

✖ ‖ T a l e n t s
-Quite talented at cooking, she's a natural at it.
-Above average sense of hearing.
-Excellent at writing/drawing.

✖ ‖ J u t s u
Water Trumpet: Kushina builds up chakra inside of her mouth, and unleashes it in the form of a highly pressurized shot of water. The blast is capable of knocking targets back with pure concussive force, while not to the point of breaking bones, it is a potent and quick technique and the easiest for Kushina to perform.

Shadow Clone jutsu: The ability to create autonomous clones. As of now Kushina can make up to two separate clones that can join her in combat. The clones can only withstand a small number of attacks before dissipating but are capable of anything Kushina, herself is capable of while present.

Water Prison: This jutsu is capable of entrapping a target within a solid construct of water, trapping them inside until the user’s chakra runs out or it is willingly dropped by the user of the technique. It takes concentration to maintain the prison.

Body-Flicker technique: The ability to move incredibly quick along the battle-field, something almost every ninja is capable of. The body flicker is incredibly versatile, allowing set up for ambushes, quick retreats or even just re-positioning.

Habanero’s Rage: Kushina funnels chakra into her fist, reinforcing her strike with a great deal of power, it’s something she’s rather well known for. It’s sheer concussive force almost outdoes her water trumpet.

Habanero’s Explosive Rage: A variant on her simple chakra infused technique. Kushina inscribes a seal upon her hand and punches her opponent once the fist makes contact the seal explodes violently. While not the smartest technique to utilize it’s something only an Uzumaki can reliably use within the field thanks to their bloodline’s durability, ensuring she can use it a few times and still remain standing.

Ninja Tool Assault: Another usage of her Fuinjutsu. Kushina places multiple ninja tools inside of a sealed scroll that she keeps on her person at all times, once the scroll is opened and the seal is activated...Ninja tools fly out of it, several kunai and shuriken rain from the scroll and attack indiscriminately in the direction Kushina points the scroll. A powerful secret weapon.

Sealing Barriers: By inscribing markings in the surrounding area, Kushina is capable of creating a barrier within said space. Sealing a small area and trapping combatants inside, or placing the markings upon an individual and trapping them inside a personal barrier. The larger the area that Kushina wishes to cover with her barrier? The more chakra is required to keep the barrier up. As of now larger barriers are difficult for her to pull off but smaller ones are quite feasible.

Adamantine Chains: A technique that Kushina still doesn’t entirely understand. Utilizing special seals placed upon her body, presumably by her parents, Kushina is able to manifest chains from these seals. The chains are capable of being manipulated by Kushina, she is able to use them defensively or offensively, however their primary use is for binding her opponents in place and leaving them vulnerable for attack.

✖ ‖ W e a p o n s A n d T o o l s
-A pouch of Kunai
-A pouch of Shuriken.
-Several blank scrolls.
-Scroll tubes.
-Several scrolls with active seals.

✖ ‖ F i g h t i n g S t y l e
Kushina is very much an up close and personal kind of fighter. Taijutsu is her strength and she utilizes it quite well. She engages the enemy with relentless pursuit and thanks to her bloodline, she is able to take a large amount of punishment and stay in the fight. Her jutsu helps her stay in a head to head battle, allowing her to reinforce her strikes, or create shadow clones to take the pressure off of her and add it to the opponent. While not the most graceful or agile, she is incredibly tough and strong and willing to take as many hits for her teammates as she needs to. She is capable of ranged combat, thanks to a few techniques she knows, but her main method of attack will always be dependent on her Taijutsu.

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