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I can add more detail if you require.

Let me read through it. :D
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The detail is fine. If you wish to add more, do so at your own discretion.

I'll have to think about the inclusion of the Future Foundation (i.e. the Fantastic Four). I was thinking about throwing up another interest check to try to garner some more interest in this RP (we will remain in this thread, by the way). On one hand, I don't want to limit what characters potential players would want to use, but on the other hand, I don't want to handicap the creativity of the current people we have at the moment. While I am not against your idea, I just don't want to hamstring anyone who wants to play as a Fantastic Four character. Let me think about it over the next 24 hours.
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The detail is fine. If you wish to add more, do so at your own discretion.

I'll have to think about the inclusion of the Future Foundation (i.e. the Fantastic Four). I was thinking about throwing up another interest check to try to garner some more interest in this RP (we will remain in this thread, by the way). On one hand, I don't want to limit what characters potential players would want to use, but on the other hand, I don't want to handicap the creativity of the current people we have at the moment. While I am not against your idea, I just don't want to hamstring anyone who wants to play as a Fantastic Four character. Let me think about it over the next 24 hours.


Oh he doesn't get anywhere near there, I was just presuming it's existence as I wasn't quite sure what other organisations were out there. If someone wants to play as the Fantastic Four and maybe take out the concept of the Future Foundation I can easily have it that it's a case he's trying to get lost in the masses.

Unless (As the spider-man guy) You wouldn't mind me tying that he was trying to get to Oscorp previously before shit happened.

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^Updated that a bit. Though as said I can easily just have him chise new york solely for the vast population. Needle in a haystack kinda thing
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W.I.P - I will tweak quite a bit of the origin though I used quite a few of the power descriptions from the Wikia as they describe them better than I can. I have toned down several things however, and going to play a lot on the psychological aspect. If anything right now screams "Lolnope" now tell me and I'll change it now.



Player Name: Sep
Character You Wish To Play:Robert "Bruce" Banner / Hulk
Moral Alignment: Bruce Banner - Heroic, he holds to strong Heroic Ideals. Hulk - WTL. He isn't a hero he just wants to be left alone.
Affiliation: None, on the Run. Eventually S.H.I.E.L.D / Avengers
Character Origin & Backstory:


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Sample Story Arcs:
- Menace or Hero? Hulk/Banner need to find a way to co-exist.
- Agent of S.H.I.E.L.D - Currently reading these ones and I love the concept.
- Avenger? - That's if you do this Arc I'd like to get involved in it.
- Planet Hulk - Depending on if you plan to open up the cosmic realm this could be a possibility if he is cast out, and a way to tie in cosmic/earth based heroes together.

Sample Post:

Just keep it together Bruce. He let out a sigh, before breathing in again slowly. Opening his eyes. Cap low over his forehead he walked off the bus into the city. He was here to try and make his way towards the Future Foundation. They'd help surely, they had to help. He couldn't do this himself, that much was obvious and the military was hunting him. No the best option was to go to Oscorp. Norman Osborne was supposedly one of the smartest guys on the planet and had the resources to back him, yes he himself was smart but his expertise were limited largely to that off radiation everything else was... well. Not really his field.

This was at the point where he stopped really watching where he was going, jostled a bit to the left. To the right, someone was on front of him. Then he looked up and he was in an alley. Two people followed him in and he knew immediately this was bad. Breaking off at a run, keeping his breathing controlled. He stopped as he was facing a big guy, about six foot. Towering over him. One of them drew a knife. "Ooooh, somebody is wanting trouble." "No guys, I don't want any trouble. Why don't you just let me go and nobody will have to get hurt, all right?" He winced, he had said it. That was it, they'd see that as a challenge. "Oh, nobody will get hurt huh? Why don't we just waste this one? Thinks he's so big."

He screamed, part in fear part in pain as he felt the blade pierce his back. His heart rate elevated, and he fell to the ground screaming. Convulsing the thugs just looked upon him perplexed. They didn't hit him that hard did they? It was only a little blade, not meant to go very deep. That's when he looked up at one of them, his eyes turning green and his skin began to shift. "He's one of those mutant freaks! Get him!"

The kicking didn't help them, in fact it made things worse. All he could focus on, besides the pain was that he didn't want to kill these people. He couldn't lie, he didn't want to hurt them, but he didn't want them to be killed.

Bones snapped and moved, grinding against one another. Muscle mass grew as if out of nowhere as the thugs began to step back. The Hulk stood, the knife falling broken out of his back. He just breathed heavily, one of the thugs moved first. Pulling out a gun and shot Hulk in the back. He just turned absorbing the shot. Throwing a dustbin in their direction knocking two of them into a nearby wall, when the other three began to run he jumped, pulling himself via the building (and removing a chunk of wall) to get on front of them. There he stomped, the ground cracking enough that they fell into it...

[[If this is acceptable, this is where I'll start the IC.]]


The Incredible Hulk is now accepted. You may move the application into the character tab and you may start posting in the IC! :D
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Great, will likely work on a post at Lunch.

As I said to Dedonus if anyone at any points wants interaction (Especially if he is Hulk'd out) feel free to contact me. I quite like people interfering with my own story lines, makes them interesting :P
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Great, will likely work on a post at Lunch.

As I said to Dedonus if anyone at any points wants interaction (Especially if he is Hulk'd out) feel free to contact me. I quite like people interfering with my own story lines, makes them interesting :P


Or not, will have to do it once I'm home.
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Sorry about the delay, I was just finding my feet with the new character.

Post is up now.
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I need to make sure I am looking at the interest checks I put up. lol :D
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I need to make sure I am looking at the interest checks I put up. lol :D

Also, please post any potential character sheets in the OOC. The character tab is only for accepted characters.


Who is that too? As you accepted Hulk if that is too me...
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Who is that too? As you accepted Hulk if that is too me...


I meant to put that in the interest check. >.< Sorry.
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Maybe you could put the Interest Check up in the actual IC forum instead of the Advanced RP section, and just state it to be an advanced RP?

Then again there are some new faces browsing this thread so it might not be needed.
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Maybe you could put the Interest Check up in the actual IC forum instead of the Advanced RP section, and just state it to be an advanced RP?

Then again there are some new faces browsing this thread so it might not be needed.


Do you mean the general interest check forum?
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Do you mean the general interest check forum?


Aye, though I have also seen you put one up in Casual as well which is where the attention is coming from.
Ignore me.
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Aye, though I have also seen you put one up in Casual as well which is where the attention is coming from.
Ignore me.


I tried putting one in the general IC thread one of the other times I tried to get more interest, but no one bit that time. That's why I haven't put one up in there.
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Will get to work on a sample post if this is ok!


Looks fine so far (sample post needed). For the multiverse jumping, I would prefer if you would lean towards staying in the RP's universe, but we can cross that bridge when we get to it.

Also, we are Earth-76031 (this thread's number).
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Looks fine so far (sample post needed). For the multiverse jumping, I would prefer if you would lean towards staying in the RP's universe, but we can cross that bridge when we get to it.

Also, we are Earth-76031 (this thread's number).


Yeah that was the plan, multiverse-wise!

Shall work on the sample post tomorrow when I have more time.

Also quick question about quality of writing. I found this in the Casual Interest Check section yet this is an advanced RP. I was just wondering whether this was actually an Avanced, High-Casual or Casual RP. I don't mind regardless, but I was just wondering!
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Will get to work on a sample post if this is ok!


Perhaps I remember differently - but wasn't the Teen Brigade a group where Rick Jones and his friends talked to each other via radios?
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Yeah that was the plan, multiverse-wise!

Shall work on the sample post tomorrow when I have more time.

Also quick question about quality of writing. I found this in the Casual Interest Check section yet this is an advanced RP. I was just wondering whether this was actually an Avanced, High-Casual or Casual RP. I don't mind regardless, but I was just wondering!


While this is in the Advanced section, I will accept Casual-level posts (high-casual would be welcomed, but do whatever you are comfortable). Just know that this is supposed to be a friendly environment for people to grow as writers (and roleplayers). Maybe if you begin writing at a casual level. Maybe you can only write a paragraph or two. You can use this environment to build yourself up (i.e. if you can write 2 paragraphs, try writing one additional one). No one here expects you to write a novella-sized posts in this RP.

I think the "Advanced" label in this thread covers the post rate more than post length. This roleplay might move slower than other ones (especially in casual).
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