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8 yrs ago
Mom is out of the hospital so I might actually have time to rp but we'll see
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8 yrs ago
'yo sis we need a thot slayer there's too many thots want to join the thot police we're recruiting'
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8 yrs ago
should I return?
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8 yrs ago
If that ain’t a college mood
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8 yrs ago
“Hullabaloo, and howdy doo! Musty prawns, and Timbucktu! Yeltsy-by, and hibbety-hoo! Kick ’em in the dishpan! Hoo hoo hoo!!”
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Accepted

Here is my character. I had to rewrite this from scratch so I may have missed something the second time around. But I'd say this represents the character I have in mind about 98-99%


Accepted



So, there are a couple of things with this. One, she needs to have one more elective. Two, at SWI, there are no thestrals or carriages and I have not decided if there is going to be a hat for deciding the houses. Thirdly, she seems to be a bit of a special snowflake what with the having traits of every house, witnessing death, her mom going insane, her dad becoming distant, and showing signs at a young age. It's too much. Limit it, please. Also, for the choice of her being a Rain Bird, I feel as if she will either be a Nolka Nari or a Azeban, not even close to being a Rain bird. If you want her to be a rain bird, then you might want to make her less sly and focus more on loyalty - which I read that she doesn't have much towards others other than family - and hardworking.




So, I want to remind everyone that Salem Witches' Institute is not as medieval-esque as Hogwarts and all the other Eruopean wizarding schools. The wizarding community is still pretty new compared to the British Ministry of Magic or the French's community. They have only been around for a small amount of time, since America had been "found" by Columbus. The American wizarding community is also closer to their muggle counterparts and are more ready to accept new age technology. Carriages aren't used, there is no castle - it is more of a Victorian boarding school - and, so far, I'm debating about having a wizarding hat considering that it is more European witch than anything else. Also, the houses are named as such due to having Native American influences and so I'm debating how much influence the Native Americans should have. Considering, in America, today, Native American names can be found anywhere in every state.

Also, if you guys want to do something, you may submit to me politicians over PM if you want. If not, I'll make more. I am not finished with all of the information yet, there is still the transportation - which I'm debating on having it every-man-for-themselves, considering that is how most American boarding schools or having a bus like the Knight bus be transportation, which in that case, there will be several and it will cross-country. There are no carriages to and from the school due to it being near the street and not having to ascend a hill or anything.

If anyone has any suggestions, I'm all ears. I want to make this highly interactive. I plan to make it where you guys can sumbit news articles and such other things in order to get you guys really involved in the world. However, school has started up again for me, so I will be updating the OOC at a slow pace right now because of immediately having to write a paper after coming back from spring break (I hate school). But I swear, I will not let this die. I will continue to badger you guys, and if this dies, I will revive it or renew it over and over and over again. Because I stayed up for three days straight working on this information. So, I hope you guys are in this for the long haul (:

EDIT: Also, I forgot to add wands to the CS. Here is a resource for wands, but don't go over the top. You cannot have an extremely rare/special wand core AND a special wood as well as having it rigid. It has to have balance. And anything listed as extremely dangerous, not used much, only found in pureblood families, or illegal, cannot be used.




Both of your characters personalities are bland and one-dimensional, not thoroughly expanded. Also, the part where Aeron is named a “magical” name should be removed, as well. The whole mythology thing is not so much as a wizarding thing, but just an unspoken theme of J.K. Rowling. Hermione Granger, despite being a muggleborn, has a mythology name. I have my reserves with the whole mother-was-abused thing. If you are able to write it realistically and accurately, then it is allowed, but if you over-do it then I rather you not. And Artemis’s biography also needs to be more expanded on. Also, just for aesthetics, can you remove the things I have placed in parentheses, indent the listing in the electives and clubs on both, as well as fill out the second name section for Aeron and make the biography gray instead of white since it is easier on the eyes. Thanks!



Accepted! For visual aesthetics, though, can you indent the biography XD I like the look it has c:
It won't be hard, not for someone cute like you. ;)


X'D I missed you, Silly. You flirt.


Add one more elective and he will be accepted ^_^ I really love his bio, btw, good work!
Working on my CS, it will be up soon-ish.


Mmk ^_^
Alrighty. That's fine with me ^_^
|EDEN CARTER & ALFIE SAUNDERS|



Eden climbed onto the train, and walked down the corridor. She arrived to her favorite compartment, the compartment she always rode in every year. She opened the sliding door and scowled when she laid her eyes on someone in her compartment. It was a guy around her same age and she honestly didn't have the patience to deal with him.

"Scram, shithead." Eden hissed and guy grabbed his trunk with an annoyed sigh and pushed past her, his shoulder bumping against hers. "Hey! Watch the jacket." Annoyed, Eden brushed her leather jacket off and sat on a seat near the window.

A couple minutes later, the guy came back with an irritated expression on his face. "There are no open compartments." He muttered, sitting across from her.

Silence swathed the duo, Eden scowling at having company, and the mysterious guy thinking heavily of what to do in this situation. On one hand, he could ignore her and read in the thick tension, on the other hand he could introduce himself and become friends with her. The guy took in a deep breath and forced a smile, shoving his hand out into the open air.

"Hello, I'm Alfie Saunders!" He said with chipper. Eden glanced towards him from the window she was sulking at and she frowned at him. When she didn't answer, Alfie prompted, "What's your name?"

With a disgruntled frown, Eden muttered, "Eden Carter."
I added a couple of things to the CS skeleton. It is just electives, for third years and up, and clubs, with a maximum of three.

There is still information I want to add to this. I want to make this roleplay has interactive as possible, so be on the lookout for added additions.

I added Character rules. It's mostly common sense, but take a look at it if you can.
Hopefully not too many. The more people the more confusing :S


I agree. I like small groups the most.
Okay, I'll get one up in a minute

EDIT: POST IS UP!!
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