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Wait wait wait. QT, you did mention the league right? You mentioned it in between some " ", so I thought you said something about that.

Also Light Clones will be weird. They'll have extremely short lifespans due to having Light's Atrophy ability, but not being void creatures themselves, so thus not being immune to it. I'd think anyway. Up to you really.
Chibi, what kind of hero do you want? super powers aren't hard to think up. And you can always go with the basic Super Strength, Super Speed stuff. Light has Super Strength, Super Speed*, and Regeneration for example, with her own unique Atrophy and Fusion Punch abilities which play off her other abilities.

* Her super speed needs build up and fades quickly though to make her balanced.

Or you can always choose Batman for your super power. Batman > All
Slums Alleyways

Light listened as the cowboy talked, first berating her about how she handled the mugger, then his explanation as to how dull this area actually was, and finally requesting that she follow him to a hide out to avoid some gangsters. Light didn't care much about gangsters, after all, what were they going to do, shoot her? Shrugging to herself, she entered the building and sat at a chair adjacent from the cowboy, who introduced himself as Tiger.

"Hello Tiger, my name is Light." she said giving a small bow. "And to be fair, I'm not scared of gangsters, I'd probably take a bunch of them out before they got me down, and even then, good luck killing me." she aid with a smirk, taking off her mask since it was just the two of them, and he didn't look like one of the usual fragile minded people that roamed the city. Her appearance without her mask was somewhat close, but more alien looking with pure white skin, a pencil neck, a large ball like head with similarly large black and orange eyes, pointed fin ears, short blue hair, large forearms/hands that ended with 4 spiked fingers, a blue tanktop,, pointed legs, and now her dress looked to be attached to her instead of part of her attire like before, as well as having a different style with an open front and a pointed tabard section.

"As you can see, if I don't wear my illusion mask, I'm pretty sure I'd scare half of them with my... as some people say... demonic appearance. I'm no demon, but I've been alled as such sometimes thanks to my hands and eyes. But hey, now you can sorta guess why I have Super Strength." Light said, standing up and gesturing at herself to prove her point, sitting back down afterwords. "And as long as you don't panic I don't think we'll have any problems. I get tired of people panicing..." Light said with a sigh.

"anyway, I can see your a crack shot, I'm more of a melee fighter myself. Super Strength, faster attacks as I attack, and of course my favorite ability." Light said, skewering her own thigh with her sharp fingers. After a short grunt, she pulled out her now bloody fingers, and gestured for Tiger to stay where he was. Remarkably little blood came out form the wound, and after a few seconds it began to shrink, sealing closed after half a minute. "See? Injuries hurt, but its not like they can cause permanent damage to me. Regeneration is so nifty. I get tagged with a stray bullet, I stay in the fight, while most heroes go down to the ground." She said with a wink.

"Now what was this about a league?" Light asked, hearing mention of a justice league, but not fully grasping at what it was besides a syndicate of heroes.
Hey Phil, wanna draw a quick rough sketch of how you think Light looks like and PM me it? I can also show you how far I'm at with her model, though I am procastinating like crazy since I can't figure out what tool to use to finish her dress. lol.

Also if you want to work on a really nice concept art pic, I'll commission it from ya, assuming I like the sketch.
Speaking of, phil, do you know anything about digital artwork?
Kangutso said
That's awesome drawing man. Think you could do one for each time another joins the crew?


I third this, I'll have to get my model done before that though I'd think. Why does sculpting a dress have to be so difficult? :(.
Light was ready to move to the next area, bored and a little weary of the commotion she caused, not expecting this much for a mugger attack, until she heard someone cock a gun behind her and a voice she heard before, though she couldn't place it. She turned around to see the cowboy from earlier, and gave him a friendly wave. "OH hi! I remember you from earlier today. You were the one who irritated that 'I can take a punch' guy with eye shots. That was pretty funny." Light said giving him a smile, unafraid of his gun.

Seeing him uneasy with her having tossed a mugger into a dumpster a block away, she said."Well what would you do? Shoot him in the kneecap? After all, he did stab me with a knife. a 6 inch switchblade if I remember right, I dunno, check that garbage can." Light said, pointing out the garbage can she threw the knife with one hand while scratching the area she was recently stabbed with the other, the wound having already been completely healed by now.. "But of course everyone here seems to think the noise of someone being thrown in a dumpster is worthy gossip. Must be very boring here for that to be the case." She continued, looking around at the people attempting to look down at her and the cowboy, but were unable to locate the pair very easily due to them being in an alley.

"What are you doing here anyway? I thought you'd live in a saloon or something. I dunno, I'm not that knowledgeable on cowboys yet." She said, still smiling.
I can't really post til you get to my character, so meh. :P. Still keeping an eye out though.
lol. Its hard typign up a long post without other character interactions, lol.

Does my writing feel off to anyone else? I'm just not sure why it feels off.
"I guess the party is over." Light said as she noticed everyone was splitting up, butterfly girl apparently going with glowing boy and angel girl nowhere to be seen. Same with the cowboy and masked hero who's name she didn't know but apparently everyone else did. with nothing better to do, Light decided to continue to her walk through the city, taking in some more interesting sights. She had already seen the tourist attractions of New York like the statue of liberty and the like, and was looking more at the lesser known parts of the city in hopes of finding something to entertain her, much like the fight earlier had done.

Nothing nearly as interesting was happening as day turned to twilight, at least from what Light could see. besides the panic that the previous fight had caused, for the most part people seemed to be living their normal lives. When Light passed by a TV stand, she couldn't help but watch the news of the fight that had happened just a little while ago. Apparently there was no footage of the fight, but a reward was being offered for some, followed by the news caster labeling off a bunch of defense departments and ending with how the local army seems to have it out for the 'metahumans', which Light could only guess were people with superpowers. She couldn't help but laugh at this statement. "Thats so silly. Why not just offer those metahumans a steady reliable job as a super soldier or something? Besides, its not like the military can do anything to the evil metahumans anyway, otherwise they wouldn't be around would they?" Light said, a few bystanders looking at her oddly while a few nodded their heads in agreement. With the news changing to sports, Light walked off, looking for something else to do.

After a little while she found herself in the slums of New York, one of the areas she hadn't visited due to how it smelled like sewage most of the time. "Well I've been mostly everywhere else, might as well look around here..." Light said as she walked through the dank alleyways and poorly lit streets, noticing the poor rundown apartments and the homeless on the street. Things didn't get interesting until she walked beside an alley way, where a mugger jumped out brandishing a knife. "Well I suppose this is interesting. Wonder how cliche he'll be." she thought to herself as she matched the mugger word for word with the standard "give me your money" line, confusing and infuriating him. He was in for a surprise though when he went to stab her, as while the knife did go into Light's shoulder, he found himself being tossed into the air like a ragdoll, landing in a nearby dumpster and being knocked out by the landing. "Yep, shame when the most interesting thing to happen to you in the past hour is a knife in your shoulder". Light said as she pulled the knife out and tossed it into a nearby trashcan, her wound disappearing after a few moments. Of course this did cause quite a commotion, and people from the nearby apartments looked out their windows to see what was going on.
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