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9 yrs ago
What a sick, masochistic lion.
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9 yrs ago
Seventeen.
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9 yrs ago
This is the skin of a killer, Bella.
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9 yrs ago
I can stop changing my avatar whenever I want, it's not an addiction!
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10 yrs ago
Consider this a placeholder until I come up with a punchy, pithy status.
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Bloody robots Ben thought, scowling at ANDI's interface. Who gave that thing the right to keep me here? He'd never been one to move before he knew what was what, however, and decided to check the rest of the ship out before drawing any conclusion. As he was about to leave the room, Rain started talking. The best? Bah, I've seen pilots who could fly circles around her, I don't doubt. Still, it's good to be confident. When she was done, he gave a shrug. "I wouldnae want to make any claims so bold as being the best pilot there ever was but I'd say I'm fair good to have in a scrap, so long as I'm on your side. Yon computer says we'll be docking in three hours, so I suggest everyone acquaint themselves with the ship then suit up and warm up."

With that, he walked out and made for what was 'his' room. Arriving in it was... strange. Ben had a sense that he'd been here before but couldn't place any of the details. The little cabin was spartan, with no more comforts than a bed, a desk and a chair. The rest of the room was taken up with exercise machines; dumbbells, a chin-up bar, a balance board. All were serviceable and well used though Ben didn't recognise them. On the desk sat a stylus and some paper, alongside a set of tools Ben definitely remembered. The box contained his maintenance gear, a collection of tools, specialised and otherwise, for repairing and maintaining everything he owned. There were needles, thread, polish, brushes, screws, tweezers, sprays and an array of clothes for a myriad of different uses. With this kit he could keep his guns in pristine condition, his boots sealed and tough, his clothes thick and warm and his mind in good shape. Nothing helped soothe the agitation of purposelessness than caring for something he owned. Even looking at the kit now, he could feel some of his frustration at the mysteriousness of his current situation melting away.

Can't stand around doing nothing all the live long day he thought with a sigh. First things first, he reclaimed all the small holdout weapons he liked to have concealed on his person, all of which had been carefully laid out in one of the desk drawers. Knife, pistol, knife, flashbang, knife, grenade, knife. All slotted away into different places in his suit and boots. With them equipped, he felt considerably more self assured. Anyone attempting to put him away in cryo-sleep again would have another thing coming. Secondly, he decided to make a few... precautions. Selecting a suitable blade, he went back to the cryo chamber and concealed it within his pod, near the floor. It wasn't immediately obvious to the naked eye but a quick search of the pod would reveal it. He'd have to hope they were less thorough about searching the pods than they would be about his searching his clothes.

Next stop, the armoury. Despite living his entire life surrounded by them and using them constantly to great effect, Ben wasn't particularly fond of guns. People thought of them as symbols of power and might, as things that instantly made your problems smaller. In old Ben's experience, guns mostly just brought a whole new world of problems with them. Still, he wasn't going to let some silly self examination stop him from examining the contents of the armoury. Stepping inside, he immediately knew one thing; whoever paid for this ship was loaded. There was everything; breaching charges, assault shotguns, laceration mines, sniper rifles, tear gas, rail guns. And in the corner, leaning against a wall, Ben's constant companion; Nessie. A treasured assault rifle, Nessie was one of the few guns still in common use to fire solid slugs rather than lasers or plasma. Of course, she didn't just shoot lead, her bullets were hollow-points containing small explosive packages that could blow the head of a rhino. Still, Ben always felt a twinge of superiority when laser guns fizzled and failed but Nessie kept on blazing away.

Quickly moving through a few routine checks, such as snapping back the slide and adjusting the sights, Ben spoke aloud to the ship computer. "ANDI, you there? I want to know a wee bit more about this 'research station' and who will be on it. I'm no going to go into a firefight blind, d'ya ken?"
I have already given @Yennefer's additions a look, they're good by me.

And it's worth reminding everyone that all those of us who thought our legion sheets were complete need to add two more categories, one small, one big; Legion strength (just a couple of words) and Dramatis Personae (a whole lot of words). Every legion needs a least a handful of named important NPCs, like company captains and veteran astartes. The details are in the legion sheet template on the first post in the OOC.
@BCTheEntity
It has happened in the cannon but they're always weaker than your average space marines. I think several of the Dark Angel senior command around the time of the Heresy were old friends of the Lion from his childhood. I may be wrong though...
Grevious actually wasn't force sensitive, I believe. He was just so heavily modified, so angry and so skilled he could compete with Jedi at their own game.
@Overlord24
I'd also advise making him either older or bumping him from Knight. Being a Knight before roughly 25 years of age is pretty exceptional, given the amount of training and ordeals that a prospective Jedi has to go through. Being an apprentice is a different character in some ways but gives a nice angle for interaction with another character.
@Overlord24
@Zeroth
I agree with pretty much everything here, couldn't have said any of it better myself. No one wants to discourage characters but this one feels both underdone and like it needs a bit of work to be less gary stu.









Welcome to my collection! Here you can see my addiction to hiders, gifs, Fontmeme.com, British faceclaims and DRAMA. Maybe One day I'll get my act together and create a table of contents...

It's worth noting that these aren't all the character sheets I've ever used on this site, just the ones I'm most proud of.
@Ceta de Cloyes
To be honest, I'm probably in too many RPs as it is. So if you PM me when the part reaches Du Weldenvarden, that would be great.
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