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HenryJonesJr said
...about the use of Montoya...

My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die!

...sorry, couldn't help myself there.

No one's picked up Wondy yet, correct? Anyone have any objection, general or specific, to my making use of the character of Donna Troy as I continue to damn all of Asgard?

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The fields in the mists were the dark places where souls were lost, wandering aimlessly in death as many had in life, an eternity without end, without purpose. On the sides of the twisting, winding, roads which looped back upon themselves, crows feasted on the flesh of the damned, devouring the eyes of those who had committed perjury. The valkyrie was there, the familiar form of the raven-haired girl bound, hand and foot, at the braided warrior's feet. For an honorable sister of the valorous dead, it seemed a rather cowardly thing. Indecent at best. Which was not at all behavior to be expected from the valkyr.

Freya's influence then? Or the Lady Loki? Just how deep did Ikol's web of deception descend?

The braided, blonde, buxom warrior looked up as the blue-skinned child appeared from out of the shadows, walking through the mists in a manner quite unlike the souls passing aimlessly. He walked with a purpose. He walked with his head held high. He walked as though he were someone. Bristling, the woman flexed her grip on the pommel of the twin blades sheathed at her hip. "On your way, little ant," the Viking war-mistress commanded harshly, waving the young frost giant off.

"I'm afraid I cannot do that."

The woman balked at being spoken back to, her shock quickly evaporating into an anger that seethed through her grimacing smirk as she slapped the handle of one of her swords. "Be gone, jotun," the woman uttered, spitting on the ground as she said the ancient name of the Frost Giant race. "Before I make you gone."

The boy stopped just a few feet from where the woman towered, though his gaze never once lifted to her eyes. Instead, he seemed focused on the waif at the valkyrie's feet. When he did, finally, lift his eyes, the woman was startled at the fire they held within the blood-red irises. "If my presence disturbs you, you are free to leave," the boy stated in a matter-of-fact tone which seemed to beg no question. "I am not here for you."

The warrior drew the outer most of the two sword, driving the point down into the dirt, and placing her hands atop the counterweight at the pommel as she glared down at the boy and warned, ominously, "You will address me with the proper respect."

Pausing, the boy seemed to consider her words. But none of the spite in his eyes ever once wavered, so she knew he considered them not as she intended. "A thousand apologies. Allow me to introduce myself, honored lady of Valhalla," the young frost giant intoned, each word more biting than the one before it, as the boy bowed slightly in a way that made the gesture more mocking than sincere. As he straightened up, his head still held high and proud, he said. "I am the Odinson, king of Asgard, and lord of your Valhalla." As he finished, the valkyr pulled the sword from out of the earth, holding it at the ready as he stood there, staring up at her with a mixture of contempt and arrogance. "You will address me with the proper respect."

Holding her sword level with the child's head, the valkyr seemed to be weighing the option to strike or not. Then she laughed. A mirthless, hollow sound. "The sight, or smell, of you makes me want to vomit, jotun. But you have made me laugh," the woman barked hoarsely, waving him off with the point of her blade. "On your way."

"As my lady commands," the boy answered dully, genuflecting in same, mocking, motion as he added, "When the girl is free to leave as well."

The point of the blade returned, just an inch from his head, aimed precisely between his crimson eyes. "Who are you?" the valkyr demanded.

The blood-red eyes of the young giant traveled up the length of the sword, traversing the distance of her arm until, at last, they stared up at her. And in those eyes, she saw only hate. "I am Loki."

"Loki is Aesir," the valkyr stated, as the sword crept closer, even while he did not so much as flinch or pull away from it. The tip pressed against the flesh atop the bridge of his nose, but he did not waver. That was to his credit. "Aesir and king of Asgard."

"And Thor is said to be a thousand feet tall," the young giant retorted caustically, reaching up with one hand to take hold of the point of her blade and direct it away from his face. "He wields the great hammer Mjolnir and shoots bolts of lightning from out of his arse."

The valkyr hissed at the jest taken in the name of the Aesir. "When I have taken you by the throat and squeezed the breath from your lungs, your last breath will be to give me your name."

"You have had it," the boy intoned flatly, holding out his arms as he stared upward, as though addressing an unseen audience. "If Heimdall's eye be everywhere, then let him look down now. If he has ear, let him hear," the youth stated, far more eloquently than the warrior had expected. Particularly for a frost giant. As his arms fell back by his side, the young giant looked at her again. "For I am Loki, begotten of Laufey and son of Odin."

"Do not speak the name of Odin, jotun," the valkyr scoffed angrily, again leveling her blade toward his head. "Profane my liege again and I will remove your liar's tongue."

"Only a fool mistakes that which offends as a lie, accepting instead that which is preferable to an inconvenient truth."

"I grow tired of your voice, worm," the warrior barked, her voice resonating in the mists, as she again pointed with the sword to indicate that he should depart her company. "Leave now, whilst I permit it."

And yet he was unmoved. "I will leave with the girl," the boy stated simply.

"She is of Asgard, filth," the valkyr snapped, drawing in a breath and then demonstrating her malfeasance by spitting on the young frost giant.

Not at. On.

The mixture of mucus and saliva hit him just below his left eye, causing him to wince involuntarily. Then, calmly, he raised a hand to wipe away the offending, sticky, wetness from his face. If she had hoped to dim his spirits, then it appeared that she had failed, for when he had looked back up at her -- her spit upon his face, her snot running from between his fingers -- she saw spite in all its purest form. "She is Leah, daughter of Roman, handmaiden to Sif, and servant to the Halls of Volstagg," the boy stated politely, almost reverently, as though cherishing each word. "...and beloved of the king."

Scoffing again, the valkyr planted her sword into the dirt again. "Of what king do you speak, jotun?"

"I am he for whom you wait," the child answered cryptically, as his red eyes lit upon hers once more. "I am Loki."

"A strange wish you have, jotun," the valkyr uttered grimly, plucking her sword from out of the earth and holding it upright. Then she tossed it down at the boy's feet, drawing instead the other blade at her hip, as she took a step back and readied as though for a duel. "But if you desire to die this day, I shall give you the death you seek."

The small giant's eyes glanced briefly down at the sword, the toe of his foot propping it up slightly. "Any idiot can raise a blade," the child noted wryly, pausing as he took a moment to admire her form. "You make that point for me in fact," the youth boasted sarcastically, drawing her ire before adding quickly, "But there is no need for this. What harm has the girl done to you? Let her go."

"A coward I see," the valkyr noted somberly, as though disappointed yet not surprised. Leveling the point of her blade toward his head, she made her own jest. "Too stupid to lift a sword? Or too weak?"

The woman's words made the boy crack a smile. Not a sardonic smile. Not a smirk. But a smile of genuine amusement. "You mistake unwillingness for ignorance. Reluctance for ineptitude," the young giant noted placidly, as though he had already emerged victorious. Locking his eyes on hers, he said only, "I assure you. I am neither."

The valkyr thrust her weight back. "The fight is begun. You are unwise not to raise your sword!" With those words, she propelled her body forward, sword raised high, coming down in an arc fully intent on splitting the child's head in two.

She saw his move and still did not believe her eyes. Kicking the sword from off the ground with his foot, the boy grabbed hold of the handle and then braced the flat of the blade against his shoulder blade as he took a step to the side. The edge of her sword skidded down the length of his, sparking grinding out in an impressive display, as the valkyr found herself with all of her weight through forward as the boy, quick as a snake, whipped the sword out from behind his back to strike at her leg as she went stumbling by.

She grimaced as she felt the bite of steel, staggering to a halt as she turned, her left hand reaching down to the wound in the back of her calf where he had neatly severed her hamstring.

"I was schooled in your arts of war by the Warriors Three," the young frost giant stated, casually tossing the sword from his right hand to his left, and then throwing it behind his back and catching it. "Sparred daily with Thor from the earliest days I could walk," the youth added, casually spinning the blade like a master swordsman as he leveled it out toward her in the same manner she had at him before. "Test me... at your peril."

Snarling, the valkyr drove forward again. Ducking left, then right, the boy proved lightning quick as he dodged back, under, or around her efforts. Metal clashed as his strikes were swept aside, as the two danced the warrior's dance of death. Her powerful strokes too slow to catch him, his reach too short to be a threat to her. Round and round they went, until a downward slice gave him opportunity. Using momentum and the weight of his blade to knock her's aside, the boy leapt up and slammed her across the face with his left fist.

Popped her right in the jaw. Cursing, the valkyr took a step back to check that she hadn't lost a tooth. Cradling a bruised pride more than a wounded jaw, the woman saw her own blood as her hand came away from her lips. Looking over at the boy, the warrior asked, "Was it Thor who taught you to hit a woman?"

Chest heaving, the young giant was obviously starting to struggle at maintaining his energy in the fight. "No," the youth offered breathlessly. "That was Hogun."

"Where?"

The voice boomed from out of the mists, as the shroud parted and there, in golden armor, was the one-eyed observer of Asgard. The newly installed Lord of Hel. The one foretold to kill Loki.

"Lord Heimdall," the boy uttered, at once at a loss of what to do. Should he be afraid? Should he be grateful? If Freya had betrayed Odin, then whose side was Heimdall on?

"Where did Hogun teach you to hit a woman?" the dark Aesir lord boomed, as he looked down on the valkyr and the giant.

"Svartálfaheimr," the boy stated simply.

And Heimdall said... nothing.

As he turned his head, Loki caught a fleeting glimpse of a large, valkyr fist. The woman's punch caught the boy about the head, blinding him as a series of stars exploded across his vision. Caught off-balance, the boy tried to ready his sword in case she pressed the attack. "You hit..." the child began, before he found his legs giving out on him. As he sank down to the ground, darkness claiming him, he uttered, "like... a girl..."
Aw, why not? Zak and SJ would make awesome mob enforcers.

"Pay up the credits, or we'll make you babysit these two."
Captain Jordan said
Come on, think outside the box. You can turn about anything into a sleeping quarters. One of the cargo bays could be proportioned into rooms with dividers, or just become a dormitory-style bunkroom. And I can totally see one of our Jedi Masters or Knights grabbing an escape pod for quarters (a la Inara from Firefly).

Yes, but if we plan on using the ship to haul more than ourselves then we'll need the cargo space.
I like the YV-666, but for the sake of tossing options out there there's also the Ghtroc 720 light freighter, which apparently has bunking for 15 (but they're stacked 5 to a room, 3 rooms, and one shared refresher). So much for privacy.
Sounds wonderfully freeform. :)

Hopefully some more people express interest.
Apologies for the double post, but I was looking at Caboose's last post again and it occurred to me... what knights are Krayton referring to?

Gat dropped out. Heat hasn't posted in 2 months. So if we assume Kalmi and Rego aren't with them, then our only knights are Kraytan and Vor'loch (who has a PC padawan already). Plus our jimmy knight, Deja. We have Master Sorni and then everyone else is writing a padawan (Erin, Kolinn, Alaric, Jerek, and Keilara... if Jaeda is still with us, she hasn't posted in a bit either).

So we have 4 padawans, 3 knights, and 1 master. That breaks even, if we include Caboose's NPC knight Deja. But that's not counting the PC youngling. If we toss in Zak, then the numbers no longer work, whether we count the jimmys or not. So, the only way the concept of pairing up works is:

Option 1: A knight/master is allowed to have more than one apprentice.


Option 2: A padawan advances and takes an apprentice for themselves.


Option 3: We move to a three-tiered apprenticeship in which an apprenticed padawan is allowed to take a youngling as his/her student-to-be.


Option 4: We unleash Spaceballs 3: Attack of the Jimmys and create NPC knights for our student characters.


Am I looking at this right or have I missed something?
Interested, but there's so much different vampire lore that I'm curious what you're basing your concept of the vampire upon. That is, the works of Anne Rice or Stephanie Meyer? Tomas Alfredson? DnD or White Wolf? Historical Vlad Tepes or Nosferatu urban myth? Or even your own conceptual design.
In we're including the younglings in the "adopt a student pool" here's some additional info on them in case that's helpful to anyone.

Zak Dymo is a tactile learner. He experiences the Force through action rather than reflection, primarily during lightsaber practice. In my first post, he's the student who is fluidly using Soresu to hold off three training droids while Sor-Jan is having difficulty with proper form and technique. I had in mind when I created him that he'd grow up to be a Jedi Guardian, but he's the outdoors-y type of kid who'd rather be camping so he'd make an equally good Sentinel in my mind. He kind of looks down on Consular Jedi, because he regards them as people who read too much. Zak learns more by experiencing something than he does by reading out it. He's basically the stereotypical "jock" of the school-based plot setting.

And if anyone wants to "adopt a Jimmy" (or maybe have our NPC Deja pick up an NPC student), Sor-Jan is the opposite of Zak. If there's a chess team at the Jedi Academy, Sor-Jan's probably on it. He loves to read and experiences the Force through meditation, so he's better at cognitive Force powers than Zak is. He's the dean's list student who is also on the science club, debate team, etc, etc. In other words, he's the poster child of the Consular Jedi.
The head tendrils of the young Nautolan drifted from side to side as the greenish-gray boy shifted his weight from one foot to the other, as he rested his chin on the uppermost box and continued to watch the Jedi and Jacen debate taking place on the floor of the cargo bay. The two younglings had an excellent vantage point, but there was just one problem.

"Can you hear what they're sayin'?" Zak inquired, glancing over at the black haired Anzat beside him.

"Kinda," Sor-Jan answered, giving the Nautolan an odd look. "Can't you?"

"I don't have ears like you do," Zak complained sourly, which was the first time that Sor-Jan realized he was right -- the Nautolan didn't have ears, just the head tresses, several of which had a series of gill-like slits near where they joined his head. The lesson on Nautolan anatomy was diverted, however, as both boys caught a glimpse of someone new walking into the cargo bay and turned their attention to this interloper. "Hey, Master Sorni's up," Zak noted brightly. He wasn't certain of why, but seeing another Jedi walk into the cargo bay was immediately reassuring to him.

But, while the Nautolan had excellent vision, he still couldn't hear for crap in the acoustics of the cargo bay. Vibration in a gaseous atmosphere just didn't resonate the same way it did in the youngling's aquatic home environment. "What are they sayin' now?" the youngling asked.

"Master Sorni's talkin' somethin' 'bout Nar Shadda," Sor-Jan answered.

"What's a nar sharda?" the Nautolan youth inquired, as the answer to his question only bred more questions.

The Anzati youngling turned and gave his frenemy a sour look. "It's not a what, it's a where, droyk!" Sor-Jan declared haughtily, the Corellian insult tacked on at the end immediately prompted the Nautolan to whip his head around to return the nasty look. "We learned this is seventh year cartography. It's a moon in the Y'Toub System," the Anzat stated flatly, smirking with obvious pride for demonstrating his superior knowledge.

Swinging his hip to the left, the Nautolan youngling took a side-step to the right as he swung his weight around to slam into the side of the Anzati boy, knocking the black-haired youth from off their shared perch. "Droid brain," Zak uttered, adding insult to injury as SJ tumbled onto the floor. Lifting himself up onto his toes, the Nautolan resumed watched the padawans, knights, and Master Sorni -- except now he was doing so to make sure they hadn't seen that.

A sudden sensation, like an electric pulse chasing up his spine, gave warning as the Nautolan's preternatural sense through the Force provided a millisecond of forewarning of what was coming. In that fraction of time, Zak turned and countered Sor-Jan's attempt to use the telekinetic technique known as the feather push against him with one of his own. The Nautolan's Force push pressed against the Anzati's and, for a moment, it seemed as though both younglings had managed a concrete and stable effort at manifesting the Force.

This promptly blew up in both of their faces, as Zak and Sor-Jan each went flying backwards in opposite directions, smashing into the sides of their box-and-crate fort as a sound like thunder echoed loudly through the cargo bay while the children's fort collapsed in on itself in a rain of containers. And, there, standing in the middle of the commotion and rubble, were two younglings. Each of which managed to look more guilty than the other as the two boys looked over and realized that several of the Jedi were now looking at them. Sor-Jan pointed at Zak, Zak pointed at SJ, and both clearly indicated the classic non-verbal expression of youth that said: He did it.

And then the Sector Ranger named Jacen waved at the two boys.

Wait, so they weren't in trouble?

The two boys looked at each other, then at the collective group across from them, then at each other again. Zak gave a slight shrug and the two younglings both waved back at the Sector Ranger-hero-dude. Then they went to the task of surveying the array of containers around them, as though divided between asking themselves how they were going to clean up the mess or contemplating how they would re-design their imaginary fortification. While Zak took the practical approach of using his own physical strength to lift and move the boxes, Sor-Jan adopted the imminently more Jedi-lazy approach of using the Force to lift and move the clutter around. Lifting a box and setting it aside and atop another, the Nautolan reached down and picked up a training lightsaber, holding it in his hands as he tried to tell by looking at it whether it was his or SJ's.

Neither of them really had a lightsaber though. Just training lightsabers, which were all constructed the same. Finally, Zak depressed the activation switch in the side of the handle, revealing the bright green blade that was most closely associated with the Consular branch of Jedi Knights. Making a face, as though disgusted by the revelation, the Nautolan promptly shut the training shoto back down and handed it over to the Anzati.

It wasn't that Zak had anything against green. Far from it as a matter of fact, not to mention a matter of skin tone. But his favortist color was blue. Not bright blue. Not azure blue. But Jedi Guardian Blue, because the most awesome-ist Jedi duelists were Jedi Guardians. Those were the real guardians of peace in the Republic. So Zak always picked a blue training shoto for himself when he went to saber practice. And then, one day, when he was bigger and got to build his own lightsaber, he was going to make a purple one -- like Master Windu. And he'd become a Vaapad master, like Master Windu.

And then no clone army would ever hurt anyone again.

As the Nautolan shuffled through the ruins of Kilo Base in search of his training shoto, the young Anzat perked his head up and looked over at the adults for a moment. "They say we get our own room to share," SJ remarked, taking a break from the salvage efforts.

"Astral!" Zak cheered brightly.

"And then somethin' 'bout us being the future of the Jedi."

The Nautolan's nose wrinkled slightly as a look of confusion became visibly apparent. "What does that mean?"

"I dunno. Adults always say that stuff," SJ provided with a shrug, resuming the salvage efforts for their stuff among the rubble. "It usually means we have to clear our room or somethin'" the Anzat added.

"Clean our room," Zak whined plaintively, adopting a pained expression. "Don't we have droids for that?"
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