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Current Wow I couldn't be bothered to do anything this past weekend holy damn.
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Me: "I can't afford a Nintendo Switch" Also me: "Yes I would like two of every DLC for every game I own please."
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I've somehow only watched an hour of youtube in two hours of watching youtube. Man being sick sucks.
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Finally got my financial aid for college!
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Bio

Name: Burthstone || Zzyriphian

Age: 21

Schooling: 2-Year Degree

Occupation: I wish

Country: United States of America

First Language: English (USA)

Other Languages: Welsh (Introductory)

Preferred Units of Measure: Metric/SI (Imperial accepted)

Most Recent Posts

*Does a little 'hope this starts soon' dance in.*

This is indeed looking quite nice.

Though, I will admit, I did feel like I was being borderline daft when I decided to have my character affiliate with four affinities (See what I did there?). Now, that looks about normal compared to the person with ~5 and the person with ~10.

Edit: Oh, and I'll be adding the needed incantations to Riad's spells as need be. I don't want to come up with all of them at the moment, and it's difficult to be ambiguous enough to use in any situation and not sound weird, while still being relatively specific.

I like my one for "Flash Pain" though.
*Reads Damian's last line.*

Then why did you let Melina out of your sight?
Name: Riad Tyle Dromokov

Sex: Male

Age: 28

Race: Perili

Affinity: Sensus

Personality: Riad seems like he thinks he floats through life with no trouble, almost always aloof, amused, energetic, and definitely not entirely sane. While he doesn’t trust anyone, he doesn’t have the inclination or thought to distrust them either, and so simply settles for never letting his life be placed in someone else’s hands intentionally. He can often be seen frolicking about in an odd manner, and trying to think of new ways to use his magic when he needs to sit still. He also has a habit of coming up with a definite opinion of someone almost immediately, sometimes before even meeting them, as to whether he likes or dislikes them. Those he likes almost never hear him cease talking when his attention turns to them, and those he dislikes he ignores, or replies in his own made-up language until they leave him alone. If alone in a room with a lot of people, he can be caught staring lengthily at an individual, chosen at random, in an odd manner.

Fighting Style: Riad relies heavily on his self-created “physical” illusion spells. Combining the four affinities he has tought himself,, Riad is capable of creating illusions that are practically real, including the ability to cause physical pain. Almost all of his illusions are of two affinities at least, most often Lux and Sensus, as those are what he finds to make the best two-affinity illusions, though they do not cast a shadow. He only has one conduit, which he made himself, and is simply a short whittled stick that emits a bright flash of light that can easily cause temporary blindness. If Riad is forced to resort to physical brutality, he will bite, claw, and kick without knowing pain or fear, and has surprising strength for his frame.

Bio: Riad was born, unfortunately, on Spinel, and was subjected to raw magic at a young age, warping him permanently. Ever since, he’s had stunted growth, especially pale skin, a sickly look, and an equally sick mind. It wasn’t until much later in his life that he theorized that this incident actually increased the amount of power he had. After he made a partial recovery from the magic warp, he began thoroughly enjoying skinning, stabbing, throwing, and breaking the bones of any small creatures unlucky enough to come within reach of him long enough to be caught. He fortunately didn’t take this idea to small people, but not everyone figured that out after meeting him, resulting in him once or twice nearly getting lynched.

Around the age of twelve, Riad became almost obsessed with magic, teaching himself with every bit of knowledge available in the town he was in. His first spell is the one he’s almost come to master, his “Flash Pain” spell. He enjoyed torturing both person and animal with this spell, eventually getting himself into positions where he was avoided as much as possible. Riad had no problem with this, as it gave him more time to collect ingredients and make more spells for himself. At one point he had tried to create his own language to create spells in, but he found it just simply did not work, though he could not determine why. He held on to the language however, though it hasn’t saved him much trouble.

Once he turned eighteen, Riad left his home with no warning and began wandering Spinel in hopes of learning more about magic, especially the kinds he already used. After just short of a decade of this, Riad stowed away on a boat to Chalcedony, and has never once considered returning to Spinel since. He has since acted as a wandering vagabond, sleeping where he can and doing some random odd-jobs when he needs more coin. His wanderings eventually led him to the city of Ebb, where he finally decided to settle down. He has yet to find a single place to live, and so wanders the town during the day and sleeps in high alleys and other places at night, when something else doesn’t come up.

Appearance: Standing at 5’3”, almost marshmallow colored, and physically looks to be just skin and bones, the only thing intimidating about this little man is the insane look in his eye.To anyone who has any familiarity with magic warp, it is clear both his body and mind have been affected by it to the point of it being incurable, but seemingly survivable, and the patches of green-blue scales on seemingly random places on his bodies don’t help him look any less sickly. His gait is very precise and quick, though his slouch is noticeable, and gives him a sense of animality and savagery.

His wardrobe comes entirely out of his backpack, and is only a couple of changes of long shirts and long pants. He always wears a belt, and typically hooked onto it as well as around his shoulder is a awkward looking bag that contains his travelling food and money. The only item that is clearly a personal affect is a bronze band that he wears on his left ring finger.

Additional

Character Quote: “Don’t worry, Illusions can’t hurt you, right?”

Motivation: To be able to create illusions that are equivalent to their real counterparts.

Greatest Love: Causing Pain

Greatest Fear: Losing the ability to do spells.

Miscellaneous Objects On Person: A Butter knife, a spoon, two forks (“One for stabbing and one for eating”), a small block of wood, a picture of a woman, a ticket to a play, a copious amount of pencils, his home-mad magic wand, and two sealed vials of raw Tenebris.

List of Spells
(Key: ▲ are Cast spells, △ are Touch spells, ■ are Self spells, ● are Area spells, ○ are Curse spells, and ◨ are Rune spells. The number of ★’s represents how skilled Riad is at that spell, with a maximum of five.)
Single Affinity Spells:
★★★★★, △ Sensus; Flash Pain: "Scream for me." Causes instant agonizing pain in target.
★★★★, △ Sensus; Feeless; Causes the target to not be able to feel the caster temporarily.
★★★★, ■ Tenebris; Vanish: Causes the caster to vanish from sight, works best in shadows.
★★★, ● Sonus; Deafen: Emits a very loud piercing sound.
★★★, ● Sonus; Deaden: Reduces sound in the area.
★★, ▲Lux; Focus: Redirects light.

Dual Affinity Spells:
★★★★, ▲Lux, Sensus; Bladed Pain: Creates a blade of light in the caster’s hand that causes severe pain when the blade is touched, and is capable of passing through solid objects.
★★★★, ▲ Tenebris, Sensus; Speaking Shadow: Creates fake shadows that give living creatures the sense of being watched, and the caster is capable of making a particular individual think they are hearing whispers.
★★★★, ◨△ Sensus, Sonus; Warning: This spell can be of any size, and when triggered lets out a high-pitched squeal as well as sends a short sense of feeling to the caster, informing him or her of its being triggered and cannot be activated by the caster.
★★★, ▲● Lux, Sonus; Blind and Deaf: This spell is the equivalent of a flashbang.
★★★, ▲ Lux, Sonus; Speaking Illusion: Creates an illusion of any shape or size that can be seen and heard.
★★★, ▲ Tenebris, Sonus; Walking Shadow: Creates shadows at the edges of the targets vision that seem to be walking around, and sometimes whisper.
★★, ▲ Lux, Tenebris; Solid Illusion: Creates a visual representation of something that can interact with the world, but not be heard.
★★, ◨▲■ Lux. Sonus; Farsee: Caster puts a rune on a surface that can be activated by the caster at any time to see and hear what is going on in front of/around the rune. Very Limited “Signal” range.
★★, ● Lux, Tenebris; Confuse: Creates nonsensical shadows and lights around the caster that are often conflicting and distracting, not to mention confusing.

Strengths:
Spells naturally have a higher potency.
Wide variety of spells.
Can use four different magic affinities.
Doesn’t feel pain.
Wonderful at lying.


Weaknesses:
If he likes someone, it’s impossible to reverse that, and he will always be friendly to them.
Physical deformities due to Magic Warp
Due to using four affinities, they are not as powerful as using one or two.
Does not always act or speak coherently.
Distractible.
Terrible at gambling.
Completely untrustworthy and everyone knows it.
<Snipped quote by Silver Fox>
The amount of slayers is too damn high!


Ikr?

*Debates arguing that Melina is kinda a Blood <Insert thing here> slayer since she can consume blood to increase her power.*
<Snipped quote by t2wave>

We know that. Still doesn't stop us from joking about it xD

Edit: Also, damnit @Caits. You make me wish to have Karn as a Chimera Slayer


What would he do to recover power though? Eat other shapeshifters?
Apologies for double post, but I added strengths weaknesses to the bottom of the CS (Most of the strengths are just taken from the CS and don't "Stack" with what the main body of the CS says.)

Should I put my CS in the Character tab?
Wow, a very well developed concept! I can see you migrated some of the nice sections from the other roleplay into your sheet. I ended up doing a more standard sheet out of habit, but it might be worth it to include the 'greatest love' and 'motivation' section in the character sheet and then strongarm all the poor souls who've already made theirs into editing it in. Hm...

In terms of actual feedback, the sole concern might be that your character is slightly overpowered. His magic is quite potent and pretty versatile, it seems. While I'm not averse to having one character that's the strongest, weaknesses are an important part of any character. Could you summarize Riad's?

Oh, out of curiosity, what sort of reptile is our parili friend?


Alright! Thanks for calling it well developed :D

And I'm cool with adding some weaknesses, shouldn't be too too difficult.

And which reptile? Uh... Uh... *Rolls 1d100* A Monitor Lizard, but not a Komodo Dragon.
Alright! Here's my CS (Finally). If there's any problems, or when I'm accepted, let me know~!

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Do you mean creator as in IC, or as in you? Because if it's the character, then no. Incantations are made from meaning, and an invented language (especially one known to only one person) has no real meaning. If this was integral to your character, I might relent, but I'd prefer it to not be.


Alright, it was just a fun little thing I wanted to do, and it was far from integral. I do apologize for the enormous host of questions though.
Alright! Many thanks @Lugubrious!

I can now finally complete my CS.

Edit: Oh wait! And two more questions.

Is it possible to create a spell in a language the creator made up?
Is it possible to use multiples spells in conjunction to create a single effect? (From one person)

Edit #2: I have too many questions...
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