@Natsu, alright, a good start, but pretty messy so far. The random brackets everywhere is a bit of an eyesore, you missed a color section and just a few grammar stuff. Aside from that, it's turning out just fine.
Also. . I don't think sociopathy should be considered a skill, just saying, lol.
Also. . I don't think sociopathy should be considered a skill, just saying, lol.




