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Taiga was shocked when Kaelani arrived. This was way too crazy. Did she know him? Taiga really wasn't too sure about her story. Aquaintances? Maybe more? He couldn't pry. But he couldn't help but be relieved. Still part of him was so confused and unsure. Even if she'd just saved him he couldn't just trust a fallen angel. And yet here he was watching her. Staring, his eyes penetrating as he paid close attention. He didn't really have the energy to keep running or fighting. Part him wanted to shout that he could handle it or not to interfere, but even his sacred gear had retreated. God he was so weak. He was just barely standing. He was bleeding, a cut along his right arm. His chest slashed as "payback" for his earlier attack. And a small wound along his back from where he'd just narrowly avoided a direct hit from a Spear of Light. He felt as though all his work had been pointless. Despite seeing obvious results... To still be so weak. Even now all he could do was leave a battle that was his to fight just a moment ago to another member of the household who he'd so recently insulted. A member that even now he couldn't bring himself to fully trust. Somehow he hated himself for it. And even so he hated the fallen angels. So much confliction. So much anger and frustration. And he could still do nothing about it. ABSOLUTELY NOTHING! His arm was bleeding a bit more than he'd have likely. But there was still one thing he could do. If he could activate his sacred gear and have Kaelani touch it he could transfer power that it had accumulated over time to her. Yeah... At least then he could be helpful. "Sacred Gear. Great Dragon Sword. Welsh." He said summoning the blade once more. Almost immediately there was a rather loud Boost!. After another minute or so another. And another. "Come on..." Hopefully that damn Fallen Angel bastard wouldn't get to him before he could try and transfer the power to Kaelani. I'm gonna need to train a hell of a lot more after this... He thought frustrated with himself.
Hmmm I should have Taiga be a little hurt... Gonna go post now.
Wrong? Could Tristan have been wrong? But... Abi had died... Didn't she? For a moment he was out of it until he heard Lydia. No... Abi? No... Luna... Fuck this guy was getting to him. Still, he landed and soon was off the ground again this time kicking the guy in the face while he was off balance.
Tristan grit his teeth under his mask. "I'm telling you she's gone!" He threw himself back as if he were going to do a back flip. However, rather than flipping he kicked upwards aiming at the beast of a man's chin.
Uh how?
At the top of the page you can edit the thread name. There should be a text box that lets you and up to two co-gms. Type your username. Etc.
She my Co gm :)
give her a co-gm ribbon like your gm ribbon :P
"Sorry ugly. Hate to break it to ya, but Rad girl's kinda gone." Spider-man said as he swung just over Abi kicking the monster square in the chest sending him flying back a bit. "Yo Luna. How have ya been? Getting work done I hope." He said calmly. He noticed the girl. "Maybe you should get her out of here. And come back and help. It'll be better for your image. Maybe get the boys in blue off your back every once in a while." He said with a slight chuckle completely prepared for another attack.
<Snipped quote by Demon Shinobi> Usually when people make a multi-part series of posts in a dramatic scene, they tend to outdo themselves before the actual climax and result in a lackluster conclusion. Wasn't so much as your earlier parts specifically but for multi-part posts in general. You didn't climax before the actual climax and that is good. x3
OH! Now I get what you meant. Yeah why would I want the something epic and amazing to happen before the end XD I try to write in a manner so it's build up, build up, build up... CLIMAX! (giggity) and then conclusion. XD
I quite enjoy Vicier's posts. Other's as well of course, but Viciers are just enjoyable sometimes x3
Finally finish reading IC, rest for a day, come back to find IC overfilled again with unread posts. Jeez, do you people know of the word sleep XD?
Considering almost no posts were placed yesterday XD lol
@Demon Shinobi Welp, the akura members would have died one way or the other. A little suffering didn't change much. Good overall post. *thumbs up*
He had reason to make them suffer. He just didn't know it at first XD
True. But twas a nice post. Concluded just fine, considering the previous parts.
Thank you. And why considering the first parts? They were made to be continued XD
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