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The horn’s low note brought Baelon from his stupor upon the western wall. Leaning upon his guards-spear the young man twisted about, watching a flurry of wings descend below the inner fortifications, where trees concealed the Pool of Tears. Something was wrong. Baelon checked the sun, noting its position still high and well above the horizon, his replacement would not be for hours to come, and yet the Right Horn sounded. A first Baelon felt a sense of welcome relief at this realization, he would need not take part. He could not abandon his post, not when the high western wall was so vital a position. Leaving the bulwark unmanned for even a moment although not necessarily leaving the castle vulnerable due to the number of dragons which could spot threats from far further afield than a man atop a wall, was taken very seriously by the Dragon Guard nevertheless. The elite company of lesser aristocrats and noble sons who were sworn to defend the walls of the Keep with their very lives if need be looked down on degradations of duty. An antiquated duty perhaps, but one that was accompanied with great honor and prestige.

An explanation for the sudden scheduling was not long in coming. Armored footsteps approached and three men, of equal age and status to Baelon soon appeared taking separate positions along the fortifications, eight foot lances clutched in their hands. One of their number approached Baelon directly, a malicious light in his blue eyes. Baelon knew him by name, and addressed him thus when he drew close enough to hail.

“Sir Yhon, I did not expect a replacement for some time, and three…?”

“Things have changed, we are tripling the guard on all positions, and the Right shall begin at once.” The man paused, leaning one mailed shoulder against the crenellation staring out over the waters that surrounded the keep and on to the distant lands beyond where the Five Kingdoms and the border remained, as of now, unmolested in the fragile peace. “Against my better judgement, you’d best hurry or you’ll miss the choosing.” Sir Yhon did not need to explain further why Baelon participating in the Right was against his better judgement. The knight had expressed on numerous occasions that giving the son of a traitor a dragon, and making him a winged defender would be like placing a fox to guard the chicken coop.

The perpetual doubt to his loyalty resolved Baelon against his reservations. Straightening he handed Sir Yhon the warhorn and spear, leaving them in his superior’s possession. He might dread the Right, but he would do it just to spite the men like Yhon who watched him with unguarded suspicion. He would tolerate their mutterings and glances no longer. “The watch is your's Sir Yhon.” He said through gritted teeth, the ceremonial words expected of a changing of the guard. “All is quiet, nothing to report.” Turning he strode away, but Yhon would not let him leave without one last verbal thorn.

“Like father like son. Should you follow in your family’s footsteps Baelon Traitors-kin, I will be the first to put an arrow through your heart.”




The walk to the Pool of Tears was a long one from the outer wall. He took the lesser known route where people rarely trod. Each step brought him closer to his fate, leaving him wondering what the day might hold in store. Would he earn a dragon, or would they reject him upon learning his family's past? They were ancient enemies after all, Dragon and Rynor had been killing each other for hundreds of years, their roles once reversed. There was a time, many years ago when the name Rynor did not bring foul oaths and whispers, but praise and respect. That was before the war, and the unification of the dragons and Tur.

At long last he arrived at the gardens surrounding the Pool, now filled with riders, dragons, and hopefuls. He was late Baelon knew at once. A young woman already had a dragon, and others were preparing to step forth. Baelon slipped through the crowd, making his way to the front, wondering if he should make himself known, or remain silent. What if they had already called his name, and had moved on? Stopping beside one of the hopefuls Baelon laid a hand upon the person’s shoulder. “Excuse me, has the queen called for one named Baelon yet?”
WIP

Will our characters be operating in a group, fighting each other, or just interacting around the same general area?



I've been following this for a little bit, and I hope it is not too late to provide my own entry.



Looks like a full cast of Imperials and Sith, not that I blame anyone for not wanting to be on the Republic side of things. They are gonna get crumped pretty hard. I'd be willing to make a temporary Jedi or Republic character if that is an available option.

Anyway, Sith Warrior Kutar will be taking part in this as well.

Got enough Robins?

Anyway. I am interested, however considering you already have multiple parties posting or soon to be posting characters and only four open slots I'll remain on the sidelines for now. Put me down as a reinforcement character should anyone drop out, or if you want more players.

Warrior, Kutar Zema, apprenticed to Darth Embrus

@Jorick




Korriban always invoked an odd sense of familiarity in Kutar Zema’s heart, like a home returned to after many years apart. The Sith warrior hated this commonality with the red planet, the sense was almost a confusing annoyance in his mind, like an implant stitched to his soul. The force attached him to this world, an inseparable bond unwillingly or perhaps willingly forged by his own connection to the force. He did not know for certain. Unlike the new Sith that so populated the Empire, Kutar did not think of the ancient sith homeworld with the same ‘fond’ memories. The new sith recognized it as the origin of their powers. He however was trained and raised on the near aquatic world of Dromund Kaas, utterly forgien to the cold drylands of Korriban. Kutar could not recall a time when the planet ever gave him a sense of comfort, yet in his mind’s eye the world embraced him like a long lost son, welcoming him back at last. Seated where he was, cross legged on the floor of his Imperial Shuttle’s bridge, unease filled his heart. Not from the planet’s climate or the innate force connection, but from his reasons for entering Korriban’s atmosphere in the first place. Had it been his choice, he would have taken his orders and left straight for the rendezvous point, avoiding the capital and his master all together. However the Empire and his master had never functioned in accordance to his personal wishes and never would. He was summoned directly, and the reasoning behind the summons was what filled Kutar with dread.

How long had it been? Years now seperated their last meeting, and after months of self imposed isolation Kutar found himself called before Darth Embrus for reasons unknown. After Savvory’s evaluation Kutar hoped to be back into his master’s graces again, a favored and loyal apprentice, yet it took months for orders to arrive, and they only to call him to Embrus’ dark tower. The implications Kutar thought, were not good. To many defeats, to many wounds and men lost to be ignored and forgotten by time. Embrus did not care to associate himself with such failures. Kutar had hoped that those mistakes be forgotten, so that he could collect himself from his slump. Apparently in vain.

“Sir, we have been cleared for landing and are entering Korriban’s atmosphere now. It should be roughly ten minutes before our final approach.” Opening his eyes Kutar found the two pilots had swiveled in their chairs and were watching him, concern in their gaze. The one who had spoken was a balding man in his forties, the flight officer in command of the shuttle. His executive officer was a younger man, more curious but just as reserved in his questions. They had spent the last fourteen hours watching him, wondering if he’d died in transit, so silent and still had Kutar been in meditation. They had been ever so careful not to disturb him, gingerly stepping around his bulk to relieve themselves or refill their canteens. Kutar had ungraciously planted himself on the bridge, all but blocking the door with his long legs and broad shoulders making such a trip to the vessel’s small latrine difficult to say the least. The upcoming landing must have given the flight officer the excuse he needed to finally say something that might stir their quiet passenger. Giving only a silent nod to humor the man Kutar closed his eyes once again, dreading the their inevitable arrival all the more.

The last stages of the flight were in essence as uneventful as the last fourteen hours. The Imperial shuttle made good time over the wastelands, dropping faster and faster until it was hovering over a venerable city. Ancient buildings of stone dominated the cityscape, irregularly marred by the occasional oddity structures that conformed to the whims of the Sith lords who resided within. A large glass dome here, a silvered spiral there and at last an intimidating tower of blackened steel. Orbiting the monolith twice Kutar’s ship swiveled on an invisible access before descending the final two hundred feet. The pilot was skilled in his craft, and the ship touched down gentler than Kutar ever could have managed. Pipes hissed and a spray of cool air wafted over the vessel’s inhabitants as the internal mechanisms adjusted the shuttle to Korriban’s atmospheric pressure.

In standing Kutar nearly fell over. His legs were dead, having been tucked under his weight for so long. Grabbing ahold of the pilot’s chair to steady himself Kutar waited a moment, letting the blood flow back into his lower limbs.

“Refuel and restock the ship, and then rest if you must.” He ordered once he felt he could walk again without stumbling. The younger pilot jumped at Kutar’s rumbling voice, he must have thought him a mute. “You may not leave the shuttle, I want it ready to depart the moment I return.” Leaving them to their ship-keeping the warrior crossed the platform, eating up the remaining distance with his long legged stride. Every step brought him closer to a confrontation, and Kutar did not know what to expect. Would he be praised, admonished, or simply given orders face to face? Praise was not likely, orders could be beamed across lightyears… Kutar’s hands curled into fists and he kept walking. Two guardsmen spotted him approaching, and made to intercept him before they recognized who he was, stepping smartly aside to allow the hulking apprentice to pass.

Every obstacle, every barrier moved aside, nothing coming between him and his objective, an almost amusing situation for a man so used to overcoming hurdles, having them non-forthcoming in the one time he would appreciate something slowing his advance. It brought a grim and ironic smile to his lips. Across the stone plaza he could hear Tishombra’s mocking voice and the sound of whirring lightsabers nearby. Kutar did not sense his master’s presence there amongst the training apprentices. In private then, he thought turning for Darth Embrus’ study.

Up and up he went, up the winding black stair his pace steady and resolved. Coward he called himself in his head. Coward who feared no man or thing but the stinging rebuke of his master. He needed no courage to face Darth Embrus, his master trusted him like no other. Kutar was his loyal servant, his strength and sword. Yet he feared the worst.

At last he stopped before the study doors, a silent behemoth in emotional turmoil, a seemingly unmoveable boulder but crumbling inside. His master was within, Kutar could tell, alongside another whose presence he did not recognize. Taking a well needed moment to calm the storm, Kutar took a deep breath exhaling his worries and fears and doubts as he would before a battle, concentrating only on the meeting before him. Raising one large hand he knocked, announcing his arrival at long last.
@Sini

Hahaha thanks. That's definitely going to be his Darth name.

@Ellri

Since the meat of this is on the force section, I'll just post the revised version here.



The key addition, one I admittedly overlooked was a greater explanation of his lack on innate talent. I think it was briefly mentioned in his 'interview' but I made it clearer here. I also added a basic abilities section to the list as asked, to flesh out his force abilities a bit more, just added a few random ones from the provided list. Lastly I changed his final tab to well-trained talent and added Force Rage as requested.

  • Why does he have a faulty cybernetic arm? has Darth Embrus refused him to acquire anything more reliable?


Yes actually, Darth Embrus is very displeased with his student at the moment. On a writing level I want his arm to be something of a character development award later on. So when he overcomes his failure its something he earns, and getting a 'better' cybernetic arm will represent this growth.

  • Out of curiosity... Is there a reason you chose such great height? Anything you intend to play on/explore ICly with that?


Yes actually, there should be a number of things that come up. One writing point for example is his preference towards larger bombers with plenty of room for activities over compact fighters that are meant to house six feet of leg room at most. He's gonna have trouble like that constantly, little Padawans hiding in little hidey-holes he can't follow, getting sniped from hundreds of meters away because he stands out like a sore thumb, a considerable lack of stealth capabilities. Moreover I wanted a character that would be physically intimidating on the simple merits of being way to large.


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