Nishka bounced a rock off the wall, expertly ricocheting it back to her hand. She figured the wimps would either not fight or get shut down so it wasn't worth trying to spectate. Which put her here, with nothing to do. She didn't want to take a nap, hardly could with this shitty music. When was this stupid teacher supposed to get here anyway? It'd felt like hours since class had 'started'. Nishka threw the rock harder, bouncing off several surfaces before returning to her hand, leaving small imprints in the classroom walls. Stupid school.
Eldarin paused a moment, confused by Vane's hesitation. There was an enemy in front of them! Eldarin had killed many times before, fought wolves, carnivorous plants, walking tress, and a giant wolf to get here. He wasn't about to stop now. Still if Vane's slowness could cost him and the sound of scuttling legs quickly alerted Eldarin to the startling speed of the monster. Reacting on instinct to the attack he knew would have devastating power behind it, Eldarin rolled backwards, taken advantage of his downward and backward momentum to move him out of the way, then his roll to get some distance. How could he beat this thing by himself? With great difficulty. "Vane snap out of it!" Eldarin barked at him, eyes locked on the abomination, awaiting its next move. This time he would counter attack. Well, probably.
No problem. The only thing I wanted to note on Meditate was that you can't be Chanting in the same turn you're spending energy with a spell or what not and that Vunerable is this case is going to mean 50% more damage taken, you don't need to really change anything just keep those things in mind.
Aight first off your revised 3 cast spell. For the most part I like it, but I think a 50% dmg boost is a little much, so I'm going to say a change to 25% attack boost would be better. Savy?
For the most part all your equipment is good, I think a bit of leeway here is fine and you can pull out new stuff within reason.
Return Threefold: This is a weeeee bit too strong for my liking. A 3 energy spell that takes off at least 65% dmg from even strong attacks and five of them no less, is a bit much. 1, 50% reduction of a Strong Attack would be more what I'm thinking of along with only two blocks for a Weak Attack tops. Additionally I would prefer that an expiration time be put on it as well, three turns seems fair to me, since it's unlikely it would stay out that long in the first place. Sorry to be so harsh on this but it's REALLY strong in its current state.
Meditate: I'm add the note the vulnerable is going to increase your damage taken by 50% and chanting is going to prevent you from using any energy while chanting.
Beast Within: 50% boost once again seems a little large. I'ma add the stipulation that you can't cast spells in this state as well., thematically and balance-wise.
Overflow: 15 is a lot. I believe a more reasonable limit is going to be 8, though your overflow reduction is fine.
That should do er, the things you've left to GM discretion I'm fine with doing or leaving to Kaben to deal with. As for points needed, leeme take a look. First off energy can only be increased with traits, I don't see any that do that. HP is a 1:5 ratio, spend 1 point, gain 5 HP. Les see. The number in parentheses are your totals.
4 Points to begin with. -2(+2) for attack boost -2(0) for hp -8(-8) for traits -1(-9) for knife (Fairly Weak effect) -1(-10 for chalk (A strong 1, close to 2) -1(-11) for herbs (Fairly utility, weak effects) -2(-13) for book (Has some kick to it, status cure alone is like at least half a trait, so we'll give it to ya for 2)
Current Total: -13 Extra points, ugh these are up to my discretion aren't they?
Overflow: +4(-9), its a fairly big drawback but it also has benefits and isn't terrible hard to control. Think I'm being overly generous. Traumatophobia: +6(-3), as long as you play this well I'm willing to give you this many points for it. and I like your character Oops: Oy, +2(-2), both good and bad effects, though I'll probally dish you more pain then pleasure. Silence: +1(0), You're somewhat unlikely to encounter much of thisCo-GM note: Add silence to every encounter
Current Total: 0
Eh Gawds I'm generous aren't I? Take off the extra energy and make the changes and you're good to go, otherwise I'll keep working with you on your desired abilities. Note that some of these are malleable to how strongly or weakly you play them, if you go overboard with your spellbook it'll have to cost more, if your phobia never causes any trouble, it'll give you less. Always remember you can spend points to increase the effects of traits and (in this case) equipment you already have.
Hey everybody. Being an adult is hard. Being a kid is way more fun.
I've decided to start listing my dead RPs, not complete but oh well.
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/90483-dice]Dice[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/91697-the-red-dragon-bone-guild-tales-of-the-hinterlands] The Red Dragon Bone Guild: Tales of the Hinterlands [/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/57258-the-two-villages]The Two Villages[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/88621-the-darkness-descends-fantasy-conquest-rp]The Darkness Desends[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/91262-i-died-and-reincarnated-into-fantasy-world-whats-with-this-light-novel-l] I died and reincarnated into fantasy world- WHAT'S WITH THIS LIGHT NOVEL-LIKE SETTING!?![/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/82270-r-a-t-s-rapid-assault-tactical-squad-1-slot-open]R.A.T.S. - Rapid Assault Tactical Squad - 1 Slot Open[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/92438-masters-of-the-hidden-valley]Masters of the Hidden Valley[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/125993-pok-mon-one-looking-for-one-player-and-a-co-gm] Pokémon: One[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/147575-from-goblins-to-gods]From Goblins To Gods[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/73334-a-game-of-throhs-medieval-pokemon-rp-a-revival/ooc] Medival Pokemon[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/75165-blade-master-academy/ooc]Blade Master Academy[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/76935-yugioh-the-100th-annual-battle-city-tournament-reboot/ooc?page=8]Yugioh[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/75863-the-magic-apprentice-s/ooc?page=16]Magic apprenctices[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/45234-one-piece-legacy/ooc?page=60]One Piece[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/75352-fire-emblem-lights-end/ooc?page=55]Fire Emblem[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/2824657]Reboot of Fire Emblem[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/76074-mages-of-atmara/ooc?page=3]Mage RP[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/2399023]Medival Hero's RP[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/85595-fairy-tail-wings-tails-rebooted/ooc?page=40#bottom]Fairy Tail RP that seems to endlessly reboot[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/76658-mana-script-academy-for-the-gifted-reboot/ooc?page=17]Mana Script and its 3 reboots[/url]
[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/76694-thieves-guild/ic#post-2408188]Theives RP[/url]
<div style="white-space:pre-wrap;">Hey everybody. Being an adult is hard. Being a kid is way more fun.<br><br>I've decided to start listing my dead RPs, not complete but oh well.<br><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/90483-dice">Dice</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/91697-the-red-dragon-bone-guild-tales-of-the-hinterlands">The Red Dragon Bone Guild: Tales of the Hinterlands</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/57258-the-two-villages">The Two Villages</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/88621-the-darkness-descends-fantasy-conquest-rp">The Darkness Desends</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/91262-i-died-and-reincarnated-into-fantasy-world-whats-with-this-light-novel-l">I died and reincarnated into fantasy world- WHAT'S WITH THIS LIGHT NOVEL-LIKE SETTING!?!</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/82270-r-a-t-s-rapid-assault-tactical-squad-1-slot-open">R.A.T.S. - Rapid Assault Tactical Squad - 1 Slot Open</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/92438-masters-of-the-hidden-valley">Masters of the Hidden Valley</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/125993-pok-mon-one-looking-for-one-player-and-a-co-gm">Pokémon: One</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/147575-from-goblins-to-gods">From Goblins To Gods</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/73334-a-game-of-throhs-medieval-pokemon-rp-a-revival/ooc">Medival Pokemon</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/75165-blade-master-academy/ooc">Blade Master Academy</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/76935-yugioh-the-100th-annual-battle-city-tournament-reboot/ooc?page=8">Yugioh</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/75863-the-magic-apprentice-s/ooc?page=16">Magic apprenctices</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/45234-one-piece-legacy/ooc?page=60">One Piece</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/75352-fire-emblem-lights-end/ooc?page=55">Fire Emblem</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/2824657">Reboot of Fire Emblem</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/76074-mages-of-atmara/ooc?page=3">Mage RP</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/2399023">Medival Hero's RP</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/85595-fairy-tail-wings-tails-rebooted/ooc?page=40#bottom">Fairy Tail RP that seems to endlessly reboot</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/76658-mana-script-academy-for-the-gifted-reboot/ooc?page=17">Mana Script and its 3 reboots</a><br><a href="http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/76694-thieves-guild/ic#post-2408188">Theives RP</a><br><br></div>