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@LuckyBlackCat

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Some more feedback and suggestions

"I second the compliments about sticking with the Sugimori style- pretty impressive. That said, I think that she could do give the characters more depth if she used multiple layers of color, ideally different colors that mix and enhance the drawing. For example, Breloom's green can have yellow or peach mixed where the lighter areas are to give a sense of warmth from the sun, and a teal mixed where the shadows are would give more depth and a richer shadow.
Color mixing can get much more complex, with the colors straying significantly from the base color. Obviously, extremes like this don't suit Sugimori's coloring style, but I would recommend playing around with mixing colors for non-Sugimori-style drawings.

In the case of the slug-dragon and dragonite, the cave in teh background could have much more depth if colors besides grey had been used. Indigo or blue-violet would have worked well as they'd also contrast the dragonite's colors and make the lighter purples of the slug-dragon stand out."

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@LuckyBlackCat More general comments for your pics

Comment 3:"this person is very good and sticks with Sugimori art style (a difficult task to maintain with so many pokemon in so many poses) kudos to her"

Comment 4:"They all look great! I personally would of positioned the legs to look a bit more dynamic but besides that, 👌"

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@LuckyBlackCatsome positive comments for you

Comment 1: "I like the colors and simple shading. Everything feels slightly soft, which contributes to the warm, loving scenario."

Comment 2:"it is aesthetically pleasing"

Question: "What brand colored pencils do you use? Have you tried blending to enhance shadows and mood?"

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@LuckyBlackCat The only thing that bothers me is the stomachs of the dragons. They could be less plump. Other than that, I love it. They are going to be a great family. Aren't goodra and dragonite both pseudo-legendaries

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@LuckyBlackCat That looks great. Thanks.

@LuckyBlackCat@Heckno12sorry been busy with other stuff. Hopefully life will calm down soon

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Oscar Berg

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Another trainer joins in. Oscar waits patiently as Rheese and Sophia talk about today's plans, the damn detective and sophia's physical state. Sophia continues to put on a tough facade. "We are not saying that you are weak but even the greatest heros need to rest from time to time. All I ask from you is to take it slow for a while. Plus I was hoping you could help me with raising and training Daisho or maybe take a day off and do some sightseeing. Maybe we could let our pokemon out somewhere and let them have a bonding time together."

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@LuckyBlackCat I have been focusing on other stuff atm

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@LuckyBlackCatnope i have been busy with real life atm. I will post this weekend

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Oscar Berg

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Oscar rises a brow at Sophia's confident demeanour towards the battle against the gym leader. " If you think that you are ready, by all means go ahead. Win or lose, I will be there to support you." As much as Oscar thinks that Sophia is a bit over zealous but Oscar is going to try a different approach towards Sophia. Oscar still thinks that something in her past is driving Sophia to act the way that she does. Oscar puts hands in pockets and talks in serious tone. "You do not have to act tough all the time. I don't think it is the real you and I hope I can meet the real you someday."