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Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

Dragon Blooded Knight

"...I'm sorry."

Class: Rider
True Name: Siegfried
Origin: Nibelunglied
Height/Weight: 190 cm/ 80 kg
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Personality: Someone who could only be described as a hero. A man who placed everyone before himself no matter what, not once using his vast power to grant his own wishes. He fought for the sake of others, yet found himself empty in the end because of it. In the end he found that what he truly wanted, was not to fight for the sake of others or for his own sake, but to fight for the justice he believed in- to become a 'Hero of Justice'.

When not in battle Siegfried is a very reserved individual, speaking only the bare minimum amount of words to carry a conversation. It would be accurate to say he is very good at listening, making him easy to get along with. His self esteem is extremely low due to the misfortune he gave birth to after his demise, causing him to constantly apologize for any perceived slight against others.

— Parameters —
STR: B+| END: A| AGI: B| MAG: C| LCK: E| NP: A

— Class Skills —
Magic Resistance -: As compensation for obtaining the 'Blood Armor of the Evil Dragon', his Magic Resistance Skill has been lost.

Riding A: All vehicles and all creatures but those of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast-rank can be used as mounts with an extreme degree of skill.

— Personal Skills —
Animal Dialogue E+++: Animal Dialogue is communication of intention with animals that don't speak a "language of words". Siegfried can only use this skill to communicate with birds but has the ability to convey complex nuances that should be beyond the limited intellect of animals to grasp.

Golden Rule C-: Golden Rule is a Skill that refers to the measurement of one's fortune to acquire wealth. For Siegfried, due to the cursed Nibelung treasure promising him a lifetime untroubled by money, he has this Skill, but at the cost of his Luck being Ranked-Down.

Disengage B: The ability to withdraw from the battlefield in the midst of combat or reset the battle conditions. Bonus effect of returning battle conditions to what they were at the beginning of the fight and restores the condition of this Skill to the initial value.

— Armaments —
The cursed holy sword, Balmung, slayer of dragons. While it does not have the same power as when Siegfried is incarnated as Saber, it is still a weapon on par with a Noble Phantasm.

— Noble Phantasms —
Title: Tarnkappe: The First Cloak
Rank: B
NP Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Range: 0
Maximum Number of Targets: 1 person
Description: The origin of the "invisible cloak", the garment from which all of cloaks of obscuring are derived. Obtained from the dwarf Alberich, it is the prototype for all "invisible cloaks" to come, thus it is the most powerful. When worn the user becomes impossible to detect by any means, becoming hidden from magical detection and unseeable. The user can still be tracked by noise or smell, however those too would be impossible should Siegfried be summoned under the Assassin class.

Title: Armor of Fafnir: Blood Armor of the Evil Dragon
Rank: B+
NP Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Range: 0
Maximum Number of Targets: 1 person
Description: The invulnerability gained from bathing in the blood of the dragon, Fafnir. The turning point of his legend, when he went from being a hero to a legend. Covering himself in the blood of the evil dragon gave him a body like that of a dragon, becoming unable to be harmed by any weapon. His body is invulnerable to attacks or magic of B- rank or lower and gains a defense of B+ rank against Noble Phantasms. Even should an attack manage to actually pierce through his defenses, it would be heavily reduced in damage, making an A rank attack similar in quality to an E rank attack.

However this mighty armor possesses one weak point. While bathing in the blood of Fafnir, a leaf stuck to his back and covered his skin. This single portion of his back possesses no defensive qualities, making him completely vulnerable to even the weakest of attacks. Siegfried is cursed to leave his back completely exposed, nothing could possibly defend his back should it be struck at. If a shield were placed all around Siegfried, there would be an opening in the exact point where his weak spot is. Should he be struck here, he would surely fall.

Title: Grani: Curse of Rheingold
Rank: A
NP Type: Anti-Fortune/Anti-Mind
Range: 1-30
Maximum Number of Targets: 10 people
Description: Siegfried's beloved horse, Grani, descended from Odin's steed and gifted to him by Odin personally. The steed upon which he slew Fafnir. The beast that carried Das Rheingold for Siegfried, that cursed treasure that inflicts misfortune upon whoever possesses it. This Noble Phantasm manifests in a most peculiar way, for Grani's most famous deed was the carrying of Rheingold. That treasure which the Nibelung Dwarves fought over so viciously, that treasure which brought only misfortune to any who possess it. Thus the legend of Rheingold and Grani have become intertwined, it would not be inaccurate to say that Grani and Rheingold are one and the same now.

Grani manifests as a beautiful golden horse, a Monstrous Beast on par with the average Pegasus. It has many abilities, including flight, strength beyond that of any mortal steed, and supersonic speeds. However its true strengths lie in the curses of misfortune and greed it inflicts on all around it. Grani's curse attacks everyone's Luck stat, lowering it by 3 ranks. On top of this, as time goes on enemies will find that they are becoming increasingly unlucky. Whether it be a simple slip due to poor terrain or something extreme such as allies accidentally striking each other in the midst of combat, the curse of the Rheingold brings only misfortune.

In addition to all this, any who bear witness to the Rheingold will find themselves inexplicably drawn to it, they would feel an absolute need to own this great treasure by any means necessary. The curse of the Rheingold inflicts Mental Pollution on all targets around it, becoming especially effective against those whose hearts are filled with greed. Everyone around Grani will be compelled to attack Siegfried in an attempt to gain possession of the legendary treasure.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

Ok I think I'm finished with Siegfried now

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

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While Yui rushed over to her friends, obviously with important news to share regarding the information that had been unveiled, a young woman garbed in a maid's outfit watched them from from a nearby bench. She nodded to herself resolutely, indeed, these were the ones that she needed to find. While their fourth appeared to be missing, hopefully they would be able to find her rather quickly. This was a time sensitive endeavor after all. The maid rose with confidence, quickly approaching the three girls with a pleasant smile and a quite approachable aura.

"Excuse me? Young ladys? Her Japanese was impeccable, indistinguishable from someone who had been born and raised in the area. However a slight hint of an accent peeked through, betraying her British origins to the three Light Magical Girls. "I have a message for you three, well all four of you actually. I hope you can find your friend rather quickly, my master desperately needs your assistance." A letter was pulled out of her apron pocket, the wax seal on it somewhat fresh looking. It was quickly pressed into Yui's hands, a bit forcefully actually, after which the maid stepped back respectfully. Any attempt to ask the maid questions would be met with an insistent motion to open the letter, attempts to walk away would result in her simply following them. She was dedicated to her job to say the least.

Upon opening the letter, they would find the following message inside.

Hello Magical Girls! My name is Margaret White and I too am a Magical Girl! Well I was, but that's what I need to talk to you about. I need you to come to this address rather quickly, as time is of the essence! For my Emblem, that which grants me my magical powers, has been stolen! My maid Elizabeth will lead you to my home upon request, but if you want to use your powers to get here more quickly just tell her as much. She is privy to our lifestyle and won't tell a soul, so there is no need to worry about secrecy. In conclusion, I really need your help and you really need to get here right now please.

Signed, Margaret White

While for the most part the handwriting was impeccable, near the end where she is asking for help the handwriting seems to get a bit sloppier, as if Margaret was in a rush to get this written as quickly as possible. After they finished reading the letter, the maid now identified as Elizabeth would speak once more. "As you can see, we are in quite dire straits and need your assistance. I can give you some time to collect your thoughts and discuss this with your... companions, however time is off the essence." With that being said, Elizabeth simply stood there silently and waited for them to make their decision.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

@Parallel Hearts

I'm gonna take some more time on Siegfried, I feel like Grani could use some work

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

@floodtalon

Well, almost everything there is alright. I just have a couple questions:

1st, why is it that he has Clairvoyance when he's neither an Archer, nor a Caster, and (as far as I remember Siegfried's backstory in Fate) he's a very short-sighted individual who takes bad decisions at the drop of a hat if he thinks that he's doing good? In its place, he probably could have Disengage, or maybe something else in its place. Unless of course you have a reason behind it.

2nd, the Luck rank down on his last Noble Phantasm is too harsh. Perhaps something like "Two-Three ranks down to a minimum of E" would be a little bit more fair, I think. After all, there are some Servants that are born just so lucky that even the greatest curse of them all wouldn't be that much of an issue to them.

@Parallel Hearts

I honestly don't quite remember why I gave him Clairvoyance, I feel like I had a good reason but I was also super tired last night. Will figure out something to replace it with.
Edit: Yeah I remember why I did it I think, Kriemhilde had lots of visions and my sleep addled brain attributed her visions to Siegfried. I'm a dumb.

And I can change the luck down thing, does three ranks sound good to you? Rheingold is a powerful curse in the end, pretty much everyone who has interacted with it has fallen prey to its curse after all.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

Dragon Blooded Knight

"...I'm sorry."

Class: Rider
True Name: Siegfried
Origin: Nibelunglied
Height/Weight: 190 cm/ 80 kg
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Personality: Someone who could only be described as a hero. A man who placed everyone before himself no matter what, not once using his vast power to grant his own wishes. He fought for the sake of others, yet found himself empty in the end because of it. In the end he found that what he truly wanted, was not to fight for the sake of others or for his own sake, but to fight for the justice he believed in- to become a 'Hero of Justice'.

When not in battle Siegfried is a very reserved individual, speaking only the bare minimum amount of words to carry a conversation. It would be accurate to say he is very good at listening, making him easy to get along with. His self esteem is extremely low due to the misfortune he gave birth to after his demise, causing him to constantly apologize for any perceived slight against others.

— Parameters —
STR: B+| END: A| AGI: B| MAG: C| LCK: E| NP: A

— Class Skills —
Magic Resistance -: As compensation for obtaining the 'Blood Armor of the Evil Dragon', his Magic Resistance Skill has been lost.

Riding A: All vehicles and all creatures but those of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast-rank can be used as mounts with an extreme degree of skill.

— Personal Skills —
Animal Dialogue E+++: Animal Dialogue is communication of intention with animals that don't speak a "language of words". Siegfried can only use this skill to communicate with birds but has the ability to convey complex nuances that should be beyond the limited intellect of animals to grasp.

Golden Rule C-: Golden Rule is a Skill that refers to the measurement of one's fortune to acquire wealth. For Siegfried, due to the cursed Nibelung treasure promising him a lifetime untroubled by money, he has this Skill, but at the cost of his Luck being Ranked-Down.

Disengage B: The ability to withdraw from the battlefield in the midst of combat or reset the battle conditions. Bonus effect of returning battle conditions to what they were at the beginning of the fight and restores the condition of this Skill to the initial value.

— Armaments —
The cursed holy sword, Balmung, slayer of dragons. While it does not have the same power as when Siegfried is incarnated as Saber, it is still a weapon on par with a Noble Phantasm.

— Noble Phantasms —
Title: Tarnkappe: The First Cloak
Rank: B
NP Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Range: 0
Maximum Number of Targets: 1 person
Description: The origin of the "invisible cloak", the garment from which all of cloaks of obscuring are derived. Obtained from the dwarf Alberich, it is the prototype for all "invisible cloaks" to come, thus it is the most powerful. When worn the user becomes impossible to detect by any means, becoming hidden from magical detection and unseeable. The user can still be tracked by noise or smell, however those too would be impossible should Siegfried be summoned under the Assassin class.

Title: Armor of Fafnir: Blood Armor of the Evil Dragon
Rank: B+
NP Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Range: 0
Maximum Number of Targets: 1 person
Description: The invulnerability gained from bathing in the blood of the dragon, Fafnir. The turning point of his legend, when he went from being a hero to a legend. Covering himself in the blood of the evil dragon gave him a body like that of a dragon, becoming unable to be harmed by any weapon. His body is invulnerable to attacks or magic of B- rank or lower and gains a defense of B+ rank against Noble Phantasms. Even should an attack manage to actually pierce through his defenses, it would be heavily reduced in damage, making an A rank attack similar in quality to an E rank attack.

However this mighty armor possesses one weak point. While bathing in the blood of Fafnir, a leaf stuck to his back and covered his skin. This single portion of his back possesses no defensive qualities, making him completely vulnerable to even the weakest of attacks. Siegfried is cursed to leave his back completely exposed, nothing could possibly defend his back should it be struck at. If a shield were placed all around Siegfried, there would be an opening in the exact point where his weak spot is. Should he be struck here, he would surely fall.

Title: Grani: Curse of Rheingold
Rank: A
NP Type: Anti-Fortune/Anti-Mind
Range: 1-30
Maximum Number of Targets: 10 people
Description: Siegfried's beloved horse, Grani, descended from Odin's steed and gifted to him by Odin personally. The steed upon which he slew Fafnir. The beast that carried Das Rheingold for Siegfried, that cursed treasure that inflicts misfortune upon whoever possesses it. This Noble Phantasm manifests in a most peculiar way, for Grani's most famous deed was the carrying of Rheingold. That treasure which the Nibelung Dwarves fought over so viciously, that treasure which brought only misfortune to any who possess it. Thus the legend of Rheingold and Grani have become intertwined, it would not be inaccurate to say that Grani and Rheingold are one and the same now.

Grani manifests as a beautiful golden horse, a Monstrous Beast on par with the average Pegasus. It has many abilities, including flight, strength beyond that of any mortal steed, and supersonic speeds. However its true strengths lie in the curses of misfortune and greed it inflicts on all around it. Grani's curse attacks everyone's Luck stat, lowering it by 3 ranks. On top of this, as time goes on enemies will find that they are becoming increasingly unlucky. Whether it be a simple slip due to poor terrain or something extreme such as allies accidentally striking each other in the midst of combat, the curse of the Rheingold brings only misfortune.

In addition to all this, any who bear witness to the Rheingold will find themselves inexplicably drawn to it, they would feel an absolute need to own this great treasure by any means necessary. The curse of the Rheingold inflicts Mental Pollution on all targets around it, becoming especially effective against those whose hearts are filled with greed. Everyone around Grani will be compelled to attack Siegfried in an attempt to gain possession of the legendary treasure.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

Been a bit busy as of late, will be getting up a Rider sheet soon hopefully

Ruins of Norn: Walking Apocalypse

Tbh no, I've got a lot on my plate. I think I'm dropping, sorry guys

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

Ami Murota

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It would be an understatement to say Ami was shocked. Her jaw was hanging open, she was wide open to attack, just staring at Miss Tamashi with the dumbest look possible. What the hell just happened? The teacher just showed up and did... something! She tried to go back into Magical Girl form, only to find herself powerless. The annoying teacher yammered on about lunch period being over and needing to head back to class, but Ami was more concerned with the loss of her powers. She absentmindedly followed after the teacher as she continued trying to transform, disregarding anything else she might be saying. She even ignored the light magical girls who had been similarly depowered, her intense hatred for them put to the side as she focused on more important issues.

"Just who the hell are you?"

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?????

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"Oh man. Oh man oh man oh man. I knew I came to this place for a reason. It's no Vassal, but it's a step in the right direction." He tossed aside his telescope, looking out at the collection of Magical Girls from afar. Bloodshed. Violence. Entertainment. Who would have thought he would find all these things and more in a backwater realm like this? Most of the population was boring old humans, yet they have something like that living among them! And they don't even know!

"Oh Ami, you sweet dumb student of mine. I'm gonna have to teach you something real cool later for leading me to something like this. Oh man I can't wait for tonight." He picked himself up from the ledge of the building, grabbing the leashes to several dogs. "Come on guys, we have a wild night to prepare for."

And then nothing remained, not even the sound of the wind.

Fate/Exit Order

Consider me interested.