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Leonard Sunfield is dead. He tried to smite an evil slime monster and tripped. He shall be missed.


He leaves behind a rich cornacopia of pornographic novella's, mainly about wanting to do the horizontal didgeridoo with your siblings.
They shall be, unfortunately, lost to time.
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That wouldn't be incest, at least. Not that anyone in the roleplay has a hope in hell of getting to her like that. :D


its too late. Leonard Sunfield will make his debut next post. The fond memories of that one summer in the family hunting lodge will be atleast four chapters. You could say it will go on...incestantly.
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Tricky Asshole who is cynical as fuck but had a revelation and still strives to be a force of good through cunning.


He also diddled his sister :D
Edit:
Yeah, gotta agree with VV, Sult's background is fine to me. Even if you think the background is dull, I think her personality is interesting enough to compensate for that.
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Well, I wanted her to be more rogue-ish and less of a noble bon vivant.


Could modify her backstory so where she is more a nouveau riche noble than the current set up (which, if I'm reading it right, seems like old money?)
Keeps the pushiness of her parents in place (no idea how important that is to you), but also sets her up to be socially 'low' enough to engage in roguish behavior. (like sneaking, blowing stuff up, showing her ankles to men excreta.)
How much the IRK would train her in that is up to VV.

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Edit: For some reason i am growing unhappy with how i made sult. If only i could redo.


What do you see as being her major design problem? Also, 's early enough in character development that a behavior shift can be readily explained as having put up airs to impress people (or another excuse)
So,...sorry if I've been really out of place/awkward in the story so far. Big fight scenes are not something I'm really great at (spent several years doing mostly dialog RPs). Should get better once the fight gets done and characters can start casually interacting/ hashing out ideological differences / making oblique references to Ian's hot dog parts (probably more that first one though.)
Posted, finally. I foresee no way this could potentially go horrifically wrong for anyone involved(or horrifically right). Especially not for any of those unnamed knights!
Hot ash scored across Gillian's face as the tree slammed into the battlefield. 'Ah, just what this needed. Even MORE burning timber.' he though, following the offending fir (or was it an oak? Botany was not his strong point) to its point of origin and was surprised to find a giant of a man bearing down on the young captain. "The hell is she doing up-" he begins to say, cut off abruptly as he feels a sharp pain across his ear and the whizzing of a bolt in flight.

Out of reflex he raises his shield and backs up quickly, resisting every urge in his body to paw at the fresh gash. His comrades seems to not share his reaction, screaming forward (in one case quit literally), to aid the captain. Calming his momentary panic, he looks for the origin of the shot. 'Lucky shot?...' he thinks, watching as the offending crossbowmen and his friends where over taken by Tyaethe's forces. 'No. too many. Ambush. Well laid too...", he thinks, looking over the devastation. While few in Fanilly's charge were hurt (it seemed Sir Aethelmund's forces claimed the majority of the honors) they were woefully out of position, cut off from both their captain and the fray. They held their position, slaughtering any bandit still on their side who was too dumb or too desperate to escape the flames to stay away, but were hesitant to do much else, fearing another trap.

Gillian cursed it all, the damage to morale (much less the physical) had crippled their line. The only savings grace was the flaming sanctuary the felled tree provided. The situation called for a charismatic, tactical young knight to step up and take charge! But Gillian didnt see any candidates in the throng of knights(self included), so he'd have to wing it. "..P.." He shouts above the ruckus, barely sure of what he was doing (engagements like this were why he was a mercenary). "PIN THE REMAINING BANDITS BETWEEN US AND THE FIRE, WE'RE GOING TO MOVE TO THE RIGHT FLANK AND GET AROUND IT. THEN PRESS ONWARD TO THE MIDDLE!" He calls out as the company begins to move, though purely from a sense of urgency rather than and regard for rank. "If I live through this Klien, I'm going to beat you within an inch of your life....", he thinks bitterly, hoping he'd not just doomed the very charge he was in (or any of the others).
"I wanna bangarang my sweet 16 commanding officer, but her zombie baby sitter wont let me D:"
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