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Djerád Thymár Captial of Karkarth
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The midday sun lay shrouded as it often did on most days behind a veil of black ash clouds. The black smoke may have blocked out the light of the sky, but the land itself gave off enough illumination as not to leave western Karkarth mostly within darkness. Lava pools bubbled, and great mushrooms gave off eerie illumination that caused great shadows to bend away from them. The roads remained well-maintained thanks to the efforts of the Ixelin despite the near constant ash fall. Fortunate given the royal procession that was making its way toward Djerád Thymár proper. Word had spread fast of the visitors from the borders by way of drakenit flocks. The small creatures made quite capable message carriers in the ash wastes, being more adapted to harsh environments then meeker carrying pigeons. It had not taken long for a local garrison to muster and meet with royal escort and providing it with a large screening force as they guided it to its destination. Markien (swordcaptian of the escort) had made the extra precautions to make use of gelded Carver mounts, as the beast were notoriously difficult to control around horses otherwise. Djerád Thymár itself was abuzz with activity, the news of the coming arrivals bringing rare excitement to the inhabitants. As most Jahun-ka, they had heard of their southern neighbors whom they affectionately referred to as ‘Little Chars’. Still they were rarely seen as they did not visit the capital city often, never mind their King. When the retinue of King Vrox Ganelon and his escort came within sight of the city, all was ready. The great stone city rested at the foot of the imposing Dread Mountain; the largest volcano in Avara. The city was reachable by three great stone bridges that spread out like a crows foot and each lead to a gate. They were each built over the same massive natural moat of molten lava that resided sixty feet below, though on rare occasions the lava could raise higher. Like the cracks of a pane of glass, smaller rivers spread out from that moat, and stone platforms bridged the gaps where needed when these cracks would otherwise cross a segment of road. The great walls of Djerád Thymár were as equally impressive as the giant it was built in the shadow of. For the construction of Djerád Thymár was such that it was built on four great levels, each climbing up and seeming to burrow into the mountain, and ringing each was built great walls of dark stone, and in each was a gate, with only the outer gate possessing three entryways. The gates beyond the outer walls however were not set in a line; the Ebon Gate that served as the center entry way was at the south point of the wall, but the next wall had it’s own gate facing half the easternmost entryway, and the third half facing the westernmost, and so to and fro upwards for the Jahun-ka were a judicious people and thus had built their entire fortress city with defence forthright in their mind; thus so the paved way that climbed toward the citadel turned this way and that and then back again across the face of the mountain climb. Djerád Thymár was boasted as the Jahun-ka’s most glorious accomplishment, and this was shown upon every wall on the climb toward the cities heart, for effaced in stone were great works of art of uncompromising skill. So the final lap toward the great iron gate was at last made and the procession came to an end. The great gates were awoken and swayed open to permit entrance of King Vrox and his chosen retainers. Swordcaptain Markien, their guide until this point, turned crisply in the saddle of his carver mount. He respectively inclined his head as he spoke. “Lord Vrox of Charlin, Vanquisher Tiberius would meet with you upon your ready. Should you wish to break-fast before words, accommodations can be made for you and your men at your convenience.” The men waited an answer, the helm he wore concealing all but his reddened eyes. King Vrox was a very tall and pale man, as were Charlinites in general, usually towering over the other races, all races except the Jahun-ka, who stood a whole foot above the tallest Charlinite. So, as was due, he looked up literally to the swordcaptain, whose reptilian mount surpassed the size of his own horse.
“I would be pleased to enjoy a Karkarthian breakfast, as I have heard many fine stories of how our honorable neighbors excel in all that they do, and would not ignore the chance to experience a dish made with the same care,” Announced the King of Charlin with regal pose and respectful tones. Vrox Galenon’s smile was deep, and he cared greatly to make a good impression, for it has been a long while since the two kings of the bordering countries managed to sit down together. So long in fact that the thick and harsh atmosphere of Karkarth was completely bizarre and alien to the King, but managed to perk his respect even more for the endurance strong natives of the harsh land that his own people referred to as their honor brothers and sisters.
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‘Next Day’ Chamber of Campaigns
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Lord Vanquisher Tiberius sat bedecked in his full regalia upon his high seat of stone; not a huge improvement from that iron seat that served as his throne. He wore his iron mask, a cowl of black cloth lined with a deep gold silk woven into the edges of the fabric and that ran up the center down the back. Unlike most occasions, he did not wear now his breastplate armor and gauntlets which served more a ceremonial role in any case. The smell of burning incense was heavy in the room, giving the air here an almost sickening sweet quality to it to fight off the otherwise strong ash heavy air from the wastes that oftentimes held an almost brimstone quality to it. Here four braziers burned in each corner, and adding to that light was a ceiling affixed chandelier of candles. Four large round-topped windows posted at the rear of the room offered little in ways of light themselves, for once again the sun only gave a few brief glimpses of itself from behind clouds of black. A true shame Tiberius mused as the view here was spectacular when the weather cooperated. The Chamber of Campaigns served as both a room for war councils, or as the cause would be now, more private meetings when necessary. It served as Tiberius’s favorite room in all the citadel. The center room was dominated by a great long table, one enchanted long ago by a Drathan wizard too, at command, reveal an extremely detailed map of Avara. It gave only landmarks, not armies, cities, or fleets. Yet was useful all the same. Tiberius had chosen this place to meet specifically for very good reason. Away from the trappings of court the prying eyes of others and the reminders of rulership he sought to meet with his honored brother of the south on equal terms. Such was the Jahun-ka way that titles and crowns meant little in comparison to action and merit. Few understood honored earned not given as well as among the other races of men as the Charlinites.
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It was after much after dawn of the next day following the arrival of King Vrox that everything was fully ready for the meeting of the two leaders. As his guide, a young maiden of rare lithe frame among the Jahun-ka (though still a head taller then he), escorted Vrox to the meeting room. Men in the classic armored plate of Karkarthian make who stood guard at each entryway saluted King Vrox on his approach; gauntleted fist beating steel breastplates. Upon the walls here and there were adorned tapestries of battles and wars long since past. Soon they at last reached a great archway entrance. This chambers portal was a rarity, fashioned of oakwood and bronze hinges. The young lass with bright brown eyes turned and said, “Lord Vanquisher will see you, he has asked your guards need not follow within and may await you here if it pleases you.” “They may even retire to their chambers if they so wish, I know I am in good honorable hands,” King Vrox smiled politely, crinkling the lines that were beginning to show at the corners of his eyes, a clear sign of his higher middle age. Vrox adjusted his circlet styled crown upon his long jet black hair as he pushed through the doors. The incense of the brightly lit room hit the Kings nostrils hard, but was a well-welcomed change from the scent of sulfur and ash. Upon seeing the Scorched king sitting in wait for him across a long and aged table, Vrox removed his crown as a sign of mutual honor and placed it on the table before taking his seat across from the large monarch. In comparison to Tiberius’ attire, the Charlinite wore simple regal clothes of purple and white, with a dark cape cloaking his shoulders. The king tugged on his short black beard and nodded at Tiberius politely. “May I first compliment you on your very hospitable chefs and servants of your home,” Vrox asked with contentment. "You honor me Lord Vorx, I am pleased you enjoyed yourself. Master Chief Orridon will be even more pleased to hear it.” Tiberius gestured to the chalice and bottle of a dark purple beverage near Vorx. “Pekha wine, another gift from Orridon, it is a rather weak spirit so you need not worry of it dulling the senses.” After a short pause he added. “I trust your trip through the waste was not wholly unpleasant? The light dust storms and the stink of the sulfur pits takes much getting used to I fear.” “I must be honest,” Vrox began as he lifted the chalice to his lips, “My sense are unused to the scolding ash, but it is of no concern to me, I am pleased to be allowed such an audience at little notice.” The Charlinite took a sip of the wine and nodded in agreement with the taste, “This is delicious, and much softer on the tongue than some of the harsher imports I’ve tasted.” “So I assume you might have some idea of the motivation behind my visit?” Vrox Galenon asked after another sip. Tiberius inclined his head in a slight nod of understanding. “Indeed- it is no secret of holy Justinian’s will regarding the collapse of Somnus Imperium’s power and fall from grace. Their short-sighted in-fighting further brings shame on us all, and it would indeed be the will of Takataren to bring order to such chaos.” Tiberius leaned back lacing the fingers of his mighty hands together. “However, I must also consider the risk of this plague to my people. Your warriors have had much more experience with this vile sickness than any in Karkarth. I would seek your knowledge on this topic and see fears amended, or falling short of that, arm mind with knowledge toward wises course.” Vrox left his cup by his crown and nodded, “The plague spreads mysteriously, many of the Paladins that comb the land purging it claim it is airborne from the infected and cultists, both of which are burnt quickly to prevent such further infections. However, it is only dangerous to those who ignore every detail, and I assure you, both our great nations do no such thing. If I were to ask for your help in the matter, it would be for a full offensive into the plagued lands to set up a border, protecting our countries from further spread, ideally protected by a great wall, not of which to hide behind, but to preserve our lands to fund a complete purge of the area. The Paladins honed a protocol when dealing with the possibility of infections and would brief your given warriors in the preventions. Of course such help if given would most likely come at a price, and I am willing to set up a fair bargain for a dear brother in honor.” Tiberius was silent for a time, still and unmoving as his eyes seemed to look past Vrox entirely. The only sounds within the chamber was the crackle of the fires. Suddenly he awoke from his reverie and spoke. “Then it is as I have feared, and perhaps Grand Archon Shurdan is right in her suspicions as well.” He stopped suddenly and looked directly into Vrox’s eyes. “There is an old warning of sorts within the dragon teaching of my people. Speaking of a great malice like sickness that turns brother against brother. Such a thing must be crushed under heel before it can be allowed to grow and fester. Yet, I will not have our brothers and sisters of Charlin bear this burden alone. Neither will I send my people into a fruitless situation.” “There is an old order to the Dragon Goddess that follows many of the old ways here in Karkarth, though they still do not openly accept Justinian as one of the first elder sprites. Their teachings have not caused subversion so they have been allowed their existence. My people tell me they have been gathering support for an expedition of shorts. Not one into the plaguelands, but one that seeks to find a cure spoken of in the prophecy. Karkarth will stand with Charlin come strom or hell, yet I would ask one thing of you. The paladins of Charlin stand well versed in matters of this dream plague, and among those who stand taller still in skill. I would wish your most talented to join this expedition, and fire willing, strike a blade into the heart this mystery.” “As blood from my own veins, I will give you all you need to see your expedition a success, provided you return the favor with soldiers fit to defend our borders against the plague in the mean time. I will speak to my brother Marc immediately in the matter as well, as he is honor bound to serve my wishes, he will provide the Paladins help in this quest,” Vrox answered as he pulled on his beard in thought. “Together,” He said with authority, “With Charlinite zeal, Karkarthian steel, and Justinian’s heel, we will stand victorious before our crumbling opposers to wipe away all who do not kneel to the codes of honor, and whatever dares plague our lands.” “We are in agreement.” Came Tiberius’s echoing reply. “Good. The hosts of Karkarth will be assembled, and shall march with their Charlin brothers to victory.”
<Snipped quote by Grijs> Great! Now go get the Ghuls IC!
@GrijsFailing that at least get on the pad, you're the closes thing I have to a second none-NPC neighbour.
<Snipped quote by Celeste> even if the moonlanders are a rogue state, you'll always have friends in the drathan union :) Granted, the union is a slavery dependent police state state led by amoral, snobbish sorcerers. but friends are friends.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x0Aq9ZySKjg
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The mighty blows of hammers to hot iron echoed throughout the great vaults that were known only as the Chambers of Making. Here miracles of metal were woven into meticulously well-crafted works of art that proclaimed the skill of their artisans. Jahun-ka smiths armed with numerous tools and shirtless but for their work aprons and great gloves toiled away while seemingly immune to the intense heat of the chamber. Forging, like smelting, was a refined art in Karkarth. Nearly every technique used by men and beastkin alike were utilized here, together with a myriad of specialized processes known only to the Jahun-ka. Theirs was a craft unmatched by any other peoples; nowhere was such more apparent than within the forgeworks of the great Chambers of Making. Rows upon rows of master smiths worried away at their stations, twisting, melting, beating, and brewing works of iron and steel. The sound of their work held a kind of sublime tune all it’s own. All bolstered by the crackling of flames and the hissing breath of steam when hot metal met cold water. Built deep within the great Dread Mountain itself, such fuels as coal and wood were scarcely needed and at best redundant. Through Jahun-ka ingenuity, rivers of molten lava were funneled away from the core of the sleeping beast, it’s heart giving the fires they needed for their craft. Out of great archways built high into the walls came great assembly lines holding freshly made ingots, all operated by extensive pulleys that turned the Chambers of Making into a true machine of industry. From the lower levels that twisted throughout the under depths of Djerád Thymár, were the great mines that feed the needs of the Chamber of Making. Achvyn of House Orlious was appointed Master of Crafts of the Chamber, and worked closely with Clan Orlious’s far land traders. It was the Orlious who were responsible for a great deal of the Karkarths trading wealth. Achvyn position meant he oversaw the most lucrative sources of income for the Scorched Lands. Thus, Achvyn held the position with much pride. He watched the proceedings on his usual inspection walks down the chambers long hall, smiths on either side working away. Ingots were dropped within overhanging melting crucibles, each resting just over red hot flames which slowly melted down their cargo, once mostly liquidated, the smith pulled on a chain to tip it thus pouring its payload into finely made molds at the makers choosing. At Achvyn’s side marched his assistant carrying a flat wooden tablet with leafs of paper upon it and armed with a quill, was jotting down various bits of information as Achvyn directed. Replacement tongs or where levers and pulleys needed fresh oiling. He also jotted down various quotas that still needed to be met. They began passing by a rake of newly forged Karkarthian blades. Achvyn raised a hand to call a stop, and walked to one of the swords. Having only reached the phase of making before they received their hilts and handles, the swords seemed markedly naked. Despite this, they still held undoubtable sense of beauty to them, and each revealed the mark of their marker. As every smith in Karkarth made sure to leave their sign on their works. Each blade was deeply engraved with ancient Draconic symbols, etched into the very soul of the weapon. The smiths of Djerád Thymár were a superstitious lot and believed every blade held it’s own spirit, it’s own personal legend. One did not forge a new weapon so much as allow it to take the shape it wanted. Achvyn didn't know what to make of their strange practices, but he could not deny their efficiency. A nod of approval sprung from Achvyn as he traced the lines of the runes with a dark finger. “How many newly born are ready for shipment to Otnemarcasan?” Achvyn asked. “Given our current output this month and today's progress, we should have as many as six hundred ready by weeks end.” Orvo, his attendant, answered crisply. “Our quota will take another month to complete, taking into account our efforts to meet Charlin’s growing needs in their current wars.” Achvyn nodded. As expected the Chamber of Making within Djerád Thymár was excelling expectations. Theirs was the premier foundry within Karkarth, and easily outpaced the works of other great forges elsewhere in Karkarth, and very likely all of Avara given the Jahun-ka’s advances in metallurgy. Still, even the skill of Karkarths forgemasters would be hard pressed in the coming times. War often meant a surplus of work and trade for smiths throughout all of Karkarth. Yet even in all the centuries of warfare it had faced, Avara’s needs for armor and weapons had never pushed Karkarth like this in the past. The timing was good, considering the lackluster harvesting of shroom’s this year. Due in no small part to the working of a particularly large Ash storm. Something that would hopefully be fixed in the coming days with trade. However, if rumors were true, Karkarth might not be able to risk getting such much-needed foodstuffs from Charlin their closest ally in these trying times. Not if the plague spread any further or grew even worse... The two continued on their way. “Let us hope those grains from Charlin arrive soon then. Preserving us from famine is the least they can do given our aid in their conflict.” “The hottest fires forge the strongest steel.” Orvo chirped, quoting a popular Jahun-ka saying. “I’m sure our allies will hold. Their nothing if not resolute.” “That's putting it mildly.”
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He stood atop the treeless hillock that sat between two running rivers of magma and he waited, his eyes glued to the eastern horizon, to the tiny sliver of light heralding the approach of dawn. He was naked, every hair, every nerve feeling the tickle of the hot breeze. He was naked and he was free, and as the horizon brightened a bit more, he lifted his sword, a large but well-balanced weapon, into the air before him, both hands clasping its long hilt, the muscles of his arms bulging. Sparks of fire wafted through the air and met flesh, but the sword wielder neither hissed in pain or made any note of feeling them. Fire Prince Kelnzo brought the sword across in a gentle sweep, his weight lifting gradually with the movement of the outstretched blade to keep his balance perfect. Up went the blade over his left shoulder. He stepped right foot forward, then brought the sword back, again slowly, perfectly balanced. His left foot came forward, then went out to the side, blade and right foot following, turning the young man as if he were now facing a second opponent. Strike, parry, strike, all in harmonic and slow motion, and then he dropped his right foot back, coming around in a fluid movement to stalk back to the left. Strike, parry, strike -- the same routine. Then he dropped his right foot back again and half pivoted, so that he was facing exactly opposite from where he had started. He came ahead in three strong strides -- strike, strike, strike with the blade as he moved, then repeated the same motions he had used, left and right, from this new position. "Bi'nelle dasada," it was called, the sword-dance of the Iron heart discipline. The young man continued for nearly an hour, his arms and weapon weaving ever more intricate patterns in the empty air. This was the bulk of his physical training, sparring rarely but gaining a memory of the movements within his muscles. Every attack and parry angle became ingrained in him; what had been conscious battle strategy melded into a reactive response or an anticipatory strike. From under a great shroom across the eastern river of fire, Thurirl’ver and some others watched the sword-dance in sincere admiration for their prince. Truly the muscled young man was a thing of beauty and grace, a combination of pure strength and uncanny agility. His sword swished with ease, as did the long braids of his midnight black-colored hair. Never losing the slightest edge of balance, Kelnzo’s muscles worked in perfect harmony, perfect fluidity, none battling, flexing and complementing each move. And his eyes! Even from this distance, the others could see the olive-green orbs sparkling with intensity, truly seeing the imagined foes. The young Kelnzo’s movements improved with every day, and so Thurirl’ver had gavin him more of the sword-dance, the most intricate battle movements known to the Jahun-ka, who collectively were the finest swordsmen in all the world. Kelnzo mastered the intricate movements, every one, soaked them into the sponge he had become and held them fast in his heart, mind, and muscles. No longer did any, even Jatil, question his prowess or his bloodline. Never again in Irrál Feth were the words "Blood of the Dragon" spoken derisively where young Kelnzo was concerned. For he had passed through the "wall of nonperception," as Thurirl’ver called it, had shrugged off the common view of societal inhibitions of consciousness, had become one with the greater powers, the natural powers, about him. On those occasions when he did spar, he not only understood how to defeat any attack, deflect, dodge, or block, but also knew which tactic would offer appropriate counterattacks or would keep his defensive posture strong against subsequent attacks from that foe, or even from others. Kelnzo now won far more often than he lost, even held his own when battling two against one. His routines became more varied, more deadly, resembling in many instances the motions of an animal predator. He could put a dagger in his hand and curl his arm in such a way that he might strike as the viper. Or he didn't even need the dagger but could stiffen his fingers that he might drive them right through any obstacle. And every morning, before the ash veil blanketed Irrál Feth, Kelnzo came to this spot and watched the dawn, weaving his sword-dance, building the memory. There was no doubt Kelnzo was his father's son in every way. The Blood of The Dragon.
Finals are done, so I'm ready to get started on my sheet. Please be excited. :P
WOOOOO8888888T!!
Roll reqesting. If you please.
You know what, i'll join this as well.
I like how my question pertaining to the RP earlier was ignored. :'(
Stance on the possibility of operating a single character rather than an entire nation?
You despise the status-quo?
<Snipped quote by GreivousKhan> You know what, I'm going to just quote the first post, since you didn't read two of the rules, and are breaking them. I'm also going to point out that if you actually read the sheet you would see that he does make it his own, and bring to life the nation, rather than make it a simple port. In my opinion, it takes quite a bit more imagination and creativity to take an established historical nation and make it your own. <Snipped quote by Flagg> <Snipped quote by Flagg> You haven't looked over the nation, and you've already made a decision that it's unacceptable? You're a better GM than that Flagg. I mean, come on. At least look over the nation first before you make big judgements on whether or not someone is allowed to play a nation.
How arbitrary, I'm breaking rules because I'm expressing my opinion. Then you assume I have not read his sheet for some reason, and also I assume I have a problem with the sheet itself. (Which I do a bit on the tech range but that's another topic altogether.) First off, I was responding to that fact it was called England. It's a rather a bit of a shellshock to immersion for me to have one fantasy nation in a fantasy world to randomly hold the moniker of a real world nation surrounded by fantasy ones, I mean if this was based on a historical world that would be fine and make sense. Here it's a bit of a double take and a bit jarring, for me at least. Remember, assumptions make asses of you and me. But mostly the assumpter. I'd also add I have nothing against Legion himself, in fact I've always enjoyed RPing with them in the past. Which contributes to my disappointment here. But that's just my opinion. :K (I.E I'm not telling him or anyone what to do, in as that was not clear.) EDit: Also the rules you are referring to run in line with flaming, spam, and hate speech etc. So I don't really see the connection here...
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