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Radical Feminism, Misandry & the Rise of MGTOW

I've been waiting since Guildfall for another thread like this to be created. Hold on, let me go grab a couch so I can sit back and bask in the warmth of the civil and rational discussion that will be brought forth…

Sincerely, I do actually hope there will be a civil discussion.

RPGC #3 -- Voting AND Discussion

No reviews have been written yet, just humble ol' me putting up the list and getting the coding down to make this easier when I get back to it. Okay. Cool.

REVIEW CHECKLIST: I've reviewed the poems. Prose will be next.

PROSE

A Tale of Two Soldiers

The Birth of a Unlucky Star

Wise Men

As Beautiful as the Stars

Per Aspera, Ad Astra

Cosmic Mind

Star Crossed

POETRY

The Meta Universe

I don't know if this can be quite classified as a poem, but I also suppose the rules of any written art can be broke in some sort of fashion. Anyway, I loved the conversational tone of the piece. The back and forth dialogue from an optimist against the pessimist. Your use of vocabulary was done well, but if I were to say the primary problem of the piece was is that it lost it's flow halfway through. The lines were shorter in the beginning than they were in the end. That pacing of the two conversationists was enticing and engaging, and then suddenly the end dragged out with what seemed like ranting. Ranting in itself is fine but structurally it takes away the impact of the deep thought the poem has within itself. And usually in conclusions of any type of written work, you want the ending to hit with a bang rather than a dull plop. Otherwise, this was an intriguing idea carried out in a fun format. Well done my friend.

Time and Space

Not the epic poem you put up like the last time, but hey, we all can only push ourselves to put down awesome pieces of poetry so much in so little time lol. And that doesn't even mean this poem is bad. Quite the opposite. Rhythm and flow, and Holmishire already pointed out some of the aspects of the meter. At first I'm not sure what to think of this. But as I re-read, your title became more and more fitting. Time and space interlocked was a key theme. Concepts of time and the vast space that we inhabit. Looked at as separate, but in fact not at all. Coexisting, coinciding together with threads of different actions, reactions, and consequences. Short and concise, beautifully written. Well-executed, though perhaps it might have been lacking the punch. Something about it made me a little indifferent though I recognize the effort behind the idea is admirable and a rather hefty thing to undertake. You're pretty good with the poems, keep it up.

RPGC #3 -- Voting AND Discussion

Read 'em all. Got a quality batch of entries here, reviews shall be in the coming days. Faster than the last time!

Werewolves are Endangered? Reboot [Starting soon!]

Hellz yeah!

The Twelve Labours: General Discussion

Thanks Terminal, you're awesome!

RPGC #3 -- Voting AND Discussion

Woo woo! Can't wait to read all of these!

RPGC #3 -- THE COSMOS

Surprise entry!

@Keyguyperson

You son of a...

RPGC #3 -- THE COSMOS

@Dark Wind Nopenope, objective midnight. midnight at gmt-12. (pacific is gmt minus 8 I believe) still though, try to get it in by midnight in your timezone to ensure you don't miss it.

@RomanAria

<Snipped quote by Dark Wind>

Example: Midnight for me is in three hours. I need to be done in three hours. We take late entries as long as they're in before the voting thread goes up -- but you're guaranteed safe if you submit it by midnight local time for you. Past that, no guarantees.

@mdk

Alright, posted it in. Unfinished unfortunately but still a rather long entry! If I get more done before the thread is up, would that be accepted?

RPGC #3 -- THE COSMOS

Midnight pacific time, yes?

RPGC #3 -- THE COSMOS

Remember -- tomorrow at midnight! We definitely have enough entries for a contest now, plus mine is trickling in sometime later today. Anyway there will be no further extensions, so if you're still not finished, HURRY!

@mdk

I'm hurrying! And much hurrying will be done tomorrow!