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Nori Hisakawa




Nori went from defending his teammate to defending himself in an instant. "Two more? And what is that silver liquid?" he thought to himself, leaping away from the silver balls launched at him, into the cloud of steam. He couldn't see easily, but it wasn't nearly as much of a problem for him as it would be for them. He could take advantage of this.

He'd seen his ally use a Water jutsu already, so he was hoping they would be able to make this work against this Confederate assault. "Water Release: Water Clone..." he mumbled to himself, making the handsigns and leaving a clone of himself behind the steam, moving itself to meet the sword-wielder's rush. He opted to avoid the strange silver technique for now, until he knew more about it.

"Redhead, we've got two more threats over here, and a possible kekkei genkai! Don't waste time on the clones, and we'll fight the threats while we can, but it's important to relay this to the Lady Commander! I'm giving us a fight-or-flight advantage now! Hiding in Mist Technique!

With that, the steam cloud expanded into a haze around the near area, shrouding the sights of all... except the Byakugan, the one thing he had missed in the chaos.
Meanwhile you are all here doing.. whatever, I just got my ass handed over to me in Destiny for attempting a raid all in my lonesome. I thought I could do it, I really did.


I know that feeling.
@texHelp, I'm suffocating under the weight of your ego, Tex.



Drowwwwniiiiing...
@Hatman1801 Just letting you know that, before you posted, Kanye posted stating he made clones that appeared like Hogoho. I'm not sure if you missed that but there's a chance you're attacking a clone right now.


I saw. I was operating under the implication that I had seen Hogoho fire the first shot (not that my character is aware of what vacuum palm looks like), and that I was attacking the attacker. If you want me to change it, I can.


Nori Hisakawa




It was going well enough. Loud explosions, lots of confusion, and little resistance. The mission was starting out great. Nori wasn't exactly enjoying himself, though. He had personally decided to stay towards the back of the assault, and keep an eye out for his comrades, who seemed to be thriving on rushing in blindly and cutting down any Confederate shinobi that was in their way. Which was, of course, their job, but some were thriving in it a little more than others, and thriving in combat meant sometimes missing sloppy seconds. He already had to take down three Confederate shinobi who thought they were going to be clever and strike from a blind spot of the group; two of them had been given ample gouges across the gut, and the one only one who wasn't stupid enough to let himself get struck down by his blade was now unconscious on the ground, doused with water and twitching in agony, still under the effects of his genjutsu.

"What a sad state to be in. These Confederate shinobi really should have seen this coming. I'm surprised we haven't been ambushed yet," he thought, keeping his eyes open. The Lady-Commander was fine; perhaps she rushed in a little early as a leader, but she was beyond capable, and he had seen several of his allies keeping to her defense. Others, however, were more content with cleaving into the enemy ranks. He noted one in particular, a rather flamboyant redhead, who was dancing around between shinobi, the men around him falling before realizing they had been killed.

And that's when he noticed the redhead was basking in his own glamour as someone off to the side--certainly not dressed as a shinobi--appeared to be preparing some sort of attack against him? He couldn't tell immediately, and it didn't matter. He changed course from the direction of the attack towards this grey-haired foe, making the appropriate handsigns. He'd shoot him down quick and move on. No way he'd see this coming. "Water Release: Water Bullet!"
@Raijinslayer the Mk2 chakra powergloves that I said were too much in my first review.


Went ahead and edited it into that old post I had to edit out in the first place, so I'm one above Tex on the list.
@j8cobWhoops, I had to edit the dreams/fears because of the massive history update, since they were affected, and it just slipped my mind by the time I finally felt the history could be considered finished. I'll put something in there.

And yes, he is extra nerd. All he needs are glasses.
@Partisan Alright, it took a bit but here's the edited character sheet.
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In short: if you can excuse my idiocy by not copy pasting the information about the previous villages, and rework it a little bit to reflect that Kirigakure was leveled (so he probably was evacuated or something) then I accept him. The jutsu's are really good by the way, kudo's for that.


*cries profusely*


I'll see what I can do about Kirigakure. Was it leveled right at the end of the war? Or should I go about editing the whooole history?
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Hard to edit the BBC? I thought televised media was king in editing reality itself ;D


In regards to editing, you might want to add the [/indent]s to the CC Skeleton you have on the character page.
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