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Herbert

“How long does that usually take?”

He watched the creature scurry away, and then stared off into space, not looking at Twain. It was unspoken that Twain understood what he was going through, and that it had truly been him in that vivid dream, if one could call that experience of shared consciousness so. He feared the innumerable alternatives that didn’t bear thinking about.

A stiffness pervaded Herbert, and his vision was pulsating, the darkness at the edge of his vision ebbing and flowing, so that at times he could not see more than a few inches in front of his nose. In those instances, he was blessed; it hid apparitions, creatures made from floating spider silk and barely-fogged glass. They resembled human forms, in most cases, and faded in and out of the world, sometimes phasing through the room and the people in it, and sometimes they just stood. Their faces were indiscrete; Herbert could not tell if they were looking at or away from him. Whispers hung like cobwebs in the air, too faint and tangled to understand. He shivered.

“I am not overly fond of this.” He whispered on the barest of breaths, his own voice joining the hush, mixing with it, and forming an amalgam of sorts.

Louder voices, real voices, shattered the whispers, and chased them away until Herbert might find silence again. Dimitri's and Twain's. Herbert was beginning to accept the arcane and secret world unveiled to him, and he was not sure what that meant for his sanity. The recent experiences were irrefutable and too vivid, and had made his mind more open and plastic; clearly there were forces greater than science. That realisation seemed dully familiar, and reminded his of a dark-bound tome…

A hand on his shoulder and deafening clamour. It was Dimitri, but then his face warped, and his clothes melted and reshaped, and copper tufts spread in clumps until a ragged mop was covering his head. A fervent and angry face filled his vision, all frown lines and shining eyes.

“We’re so close Herbert, why do you want to give up now?”

“It’s… it’s inhumane.”
That was his voice. He remembered.

“So is what we aim to achieve; above man, above even God. Do not worry for your humanity, you’ve already sacrificed it coming this far, turning back now would mean all has been in vain.”

Air! Herbert sucked it in, in a shallow gasp, and then bigger, steadier breaths.

He remembered. A little at least, and it rattled him.

Dimitri was there still, and the parts of Herbert’s brain that had been in reality related what had been said to his consciousness. He realised he should say something, or they’d think him psychotic.

“Then you have my deepest gratitude.”

Herbert thought he was dealing with this all rather well. Perhaps it was the incentive; Herbert was a smart man, and not blind to the possibilities that has presented themselves. Or perhaps it was that part of him had been changed, corrupted maybe.

The monk left.

“I wouldn’t mind some tea,” Herbert said, mainly to Twain. He turned to face the man, and noticed for the first time, thing wisps of complete and utter darkness burning off him, licks of black flame. The corner of Herbert’s mouth twitch and his eyes flitted ever so quickly to look Twain up and down.

“Then after the meeting, perhaps we can talk?”
So, one character done. I tried not to screw up the continuity, but sorry if I missed anything.
Mallaidh

Safe? Mallaidh did not trust the sword with anyone but her blood, and even that had proven unwise in the past. Anger flushed her cheeks and the urge to add a bruised and broken nose to Rozalind’s medley of burns and blisters was so overwhelming that Mallaidh physically hurt from the effort restraining herself. It might have been noted in the clenching of her fists, or the long, hissing sigh and the extended, tight blink.

She is a host in this world, an Otherworlder. Treating a child of Danu to your fist would not be wise. Check your Anger.

Others responded, curiously the dog, but Mallaidh was still too heated to be impressed.

Then the regimental man, Wolfe, spoke up about her sword, and accused it of use in a heinous black act, and of being ‘wrong’.

“You held a sword,” Mallaidh corrected, hers brows almost knitting together over the green flames of her eyes. “You can’t be so certain that it was mine.”

However, when Rozalind also supported Wolfe’s assertion, the floor of her anger fell away, leaving just an oily sick feeling swimming inside her. She ran a distressed hand through her wavy locks of beaten copper. How could she refute the divinations of the Tuantha De? She gawped at the screen, at Fragarach, wondering how its majesty had fallen into the hands of such foul vermin that would use it to end the life of a defenceless sacrifice. It should be swung in glorious and bloody combat, not used for some cowardly murder.

The monk had returned, and the conversation turned to magic, the dragon, the question of any surviving cultists and a missing team. It all went over Mallaidh’s head, not that she made a terrible effort to understand any of it; she had much more pressing concerns.

“So if the sword is important, should I not be allowed to see it, and confirm that it is truly mine, and the one used for-” she didn’t even like thinking about it. “To confirm it is the sword we all think it is. I might have some information about it that is valuable.”
I HAVE FINISHED FARMING MY SUMMER EXAMS! Hopefully I'll catch up and post this weekend.
@KazeXDZ
I do.

"Active: Falling Stars - Weakens evil and strengthens allies as he sees them as well as heals all physical injuries of anyone and anything touched by the drops. "

How does this spell appear? Drops, you say. So do they look like water? Do multiple appear when used? If they do have a form, how fast do they travel and where do they originate from when cast?

Evil is also quite a subjective thing; any enemies you encounter likely wouldn't think of themselves as evil. I think "foes" would be a much more suitable term here.

How rapid is the healing? Anything? Could it "heal" damaged items then?

Is there a cooldown to this, or any sort of cost?
@Eyeris
I've moved the CS to the character tab as it seems @jdh97 accepts him as well (correct me if I'm wrong! I'm just assuming because there was no objection). I'm looking forward to the intro.

Your assumption is correct.
@Belwicket@KazeXDZ
The trouble for me is that it has not gone into enough depth and seems to assume a lot. For example, contracting a spirit. What does that entail? Is it a mutual agreement, or does the spirit have to first be dominated before it becomes compliant? How do the spirits appear? Do they have a corporeal form when they are not sharing his body? If so, is there range they can be from him? How quickly can he switch between spirits? Is there a recovery time after being possessed? Is there a psychological cost to it? It’s mentioned that his race can utilise the spirits of the dead, is that inherent or does it have to be taught? He can use energy, but how does that manifest? I use energy to walk, but I’m assuming that’s not what is meant here. Once the strengths and limitations are clearer, then a much fairer process of balancing can take place, if keeping all the spirits is truly necessary. In its current state, however, it is looking to be over-powered for this setting.

Kaze, it should also be considered that as this rp is not going to be 100% action constantly, the history section might want to be fleshed out. At the moment it is not clear what your character’s motives are, or if he even has any. If you explore where he’s been, you might better understand where he’s going. However, the biggest problem right now is the relative strength of your character.
Herbert

Fingers snapped in front of his face. Herbert slowly opened his eyes. It had been the large monk.

Flakes of white fell from above and melted into transparent drops, and then spread into dark circles of wetness upon the sheets. Herbert stared out from behind the screens of his eyes. His mind was reeling. A cold was turning slowly to warmth. He remembered running through water and fog, under stars, and then… Then it was now. There were other things of course; most Herbert could recall only vaguely, except for the man lying on the floor, Twain. He was very vivid in that dream, almost real, but dressed far differently.

It was then that Herbert noticed a shadowy octopus-like creature dragging its way awkwardly towards Twain. Herbert’s eyes widened. Twain didn’t seem to even notice it, but in a nonchalant motion, transitioning from laying to sitting, he knocked it away.

Words whirled inside his brain. The conversation happening around him did not help; he tried to grab and focus on each word, but every time he did, a new one knocked it away. It was going too fast. For a little while, Twain seemed to be talking to an orb of light. Then it left. The words still rung like bells inside his skull.

A flicker of motion caused Herbert to look down. A bloody head with arms extending from its eye sockets was pulling its way up the covers towards Herbert, smearing a trail of red behind it. It was terrifying to behold, and seemed to be snarling.

Herbert looked at the other two, and in a panicked and confused voice, shouted, “Hrrrnngh?!”
Mallaidh

Rozalind seemed also to have the capability to create and change the floating blue images. Now it displayed a ruined castle, clawing from its snowy grave. Mallaidh stared into the luminescence, noting all the features as Rozalind described them. Then the projections changed to the blue ghosts of the dead, horribly mutilated and burnt things, somewhat akin to Rozalind’s injuries. Others were broken more horribly. Some did not even resemble the men or women they must once have been, and she felt a pang of pity that they must have passed in such agony. However, all of that washed away when it transpired that they had been conducting a ritual, the very ritual that the consensus held brought the gathered together in this plane. These were not honest druids, but malignant beings dealing with dark and uncontainable malice; their dismemberment and disfiguration proved testament enough to the nature of the forces they were reckoning with.

Then Mallaidh was quite taken aback. Most prominently amongst the phantoms of items and relics that replaced the corpses, was a large sword, one she recognised, and half reached-out for, before she composed herself. She knew it very well. She knew its edges from the evenings spent oiling it; the grip from the sweat she shed upon it; the weight from every step she had carried it with her. It was hers. There was no doubt about it in her mind; there was no other weapon like it.

Practically falling upon Rozalind, Mallaidh fought back the growing anticipation. She pointed at the sword, but it was several seconds before she spoke. Her other hand shook as a clenched fist by head side.

“That is the sword of my family,” She said, her eyes locked in an intense stare, her impassioned heart shining brightly behind those emerald orbs, “It was handed down from father to son from the time since your people roamed Éireann, and now it belongs to me as the sole heir, the first daughter to carry its grandeur.”

“Where is it?”
I don't know how long it took Eyeris, but it took me about an hour because I closed the window I was doing it in and had to start over.
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