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    1. Kibaro 8 yrs ago

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8 yrs ago
Current *UEEUEEUEEEEE* LEVELED UP TO: Superior Lesser Noob! Next Rank: Intermediate Obnoxious Noob! Req: 400 posts, 6 mos
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@Speedwagon ^^^

Also, @Asura you still in or not? Please tell us so we know how to proceed :)
some users are spamming threads...basically it's making those categories useless until someone fixes what they did...
@Rai
if there's a curfew, how come the entertainers and the crowd around it is allowed on the streets?
@Yamazaki@Asura guys? you still on
@Pineappletumble
so far so good, i like how you narate :) can't say i've seen anything that caught my untrained critique eye :)) haven't seen how you handle dialogues, but you're doing well :) someone more experience might see more tho :)
@Rai also if you have time to look over my/our posts, at least for me, let me know if i'm doing something wrong, like too much/little talking, controlling stuff that i shouldn't too much, repeating a certain word/s too much and so on, stuff like that :)

that goes for everyone if they notice anything for me, please let me know :) i want to improve but not sure where, so yeah feedback whenever you feel like it ^.^
@Ashevelendar@Pineappletumble@Dark Light
hope the way i went about it was ok with you guys, of course you can always do stuff that changes what i said and done

@Ashevelendar was not exactly your outcome but...close? maybe, but i think either you or your IG char misunderstood the guard situation (not sure which), that being said, Kuvira's team wouldn't have responded like that, sorry, but yeah that's how I would've seen it, if you think something should be changed about the interaction, let me know, if not i put the "let's meet tomorrow to discuss the events" for a second chance at doing what you would've liked maybe...also could you please remove/change/edit the last 3 lines where my guards speak if that is ok with you?

@Pineappletumble did it like that because i was not sure wether Ashevelendar missunderstood the guard situation or not (what Rupal said as well), but as i said, we could meet the next day to talk about what you wanted to say, if that's ok with you
Walking through the streets of Sunfire, with Kuvira and Urukeh in front talking about future plans and the two drunken members of the squad, IInua and Krox in the back wobbling and talking somewhat nonsense but feeling a tad bit clearer than before, after about 10 minutes, the two in front heard a racket a little ways back followed by the sound of a vessel shattering. When they looked over to see what's happening, they saw Krox lying down unconscious next to a rather destroyed stall, facing a giant mountain of a man who's looking hostile towards the drunk while holding the handle of a broken vase. At the same time, Iinua is struggling to talk to this fellow, but having a hard time with it.

Kuvira and Urukeh make their way to the scene in haste.
"Wh-wh-whoddya thank you are? Attakin ma friend like dat? It wuz an honest mistake you big brute..." tried Iinua to argue with the big man not sure how to approach the situation, meanwhile the other two guards managed to arrive at the commotion.
"HEY! What's the meaning of this!? Why did you attack my comrade?!" snapped Kuvira at Oron shortening the distance between them slowly but not before being stopped by Urukeh's hand.

Without breaking eye contact with the big man, who's being titled the stall merchant's guard, responds with a slow sharp tone "My apologies, for my fellow soldier, here! It was, a mistake, what happened, our, mistake, we should have kept a better eye on him...them..." taking a second to look at Iinua and the unconscious Krox shifting his gaze to the merchant, throwing a short glance at her "guard" now and then, "We are not from here, we do not, serve the Vrondi military, but, we will, pay, for the damages done to the stall, I, will make sure, the payment IS, fulfilled, personally, tomorrow morning, here, you have my word! Now, excuse us, I think we had enough "walking", for today, we shall return to our quarters, good night, see you tomorrow, to resolve this."

Turning over to Kuvira, Urukeh says in a low voice, "Please help me with this fool, we need to get him back to his room, also let's keep an eye on Iinua as well, we do not want or need more trouble..", Kuvira nods and then both proceed to extract Krox from the broken stall, Kuvira looking angrily at the merchants guard, who's actions she does not agree with. Right before they left, Urukeh turned one more time to the big man and with the same tone he said, "Also, you should learn, how to control, your reactions better, that way of acting, could get you, in a lot of trouble...good luck.", returning to the task at hand of taking Krox and Iinua back.

"Urukeh, why did you let that brute get away so easily?..." asked Kuvira frustrated and a bit dissapointed, "We could have taking him!" continuing to carry Krox on her shoulder. "Aye, we could have, but I'm sure you can agree with me that he would have done a number on us as well, you've seen his stance, his body, he's an experienced fighter. There was no need for a fight for this fools stupidity. Don't worry, the money will go from his paycheck."
Sighing, Kuvira let the topic go for now and continued carrying "Friggin Krox..."

On the way to their quarters, a stammering voice could be heard from behind, "E-excuse me-e!", the guards stopped and a young lad appeared before them, proceeding to ask questions about questions about the curfew.

Urukeh answered, "I'm sorry sir, we are not from here, we just arrived today, we are tired and had enough troubles for today thanks to our friend here", then takes another short sharp look at Krox. "Maybe meet with us tomorrow in the market are. We will meet with a merchant there. They might have more information about it, having been longer around these parts, a good night to you", then went on their way before anything else could be said.

@Pineappletumble@Dark Light@Ashevelendar
will post tomorrow, too late and tired to do it now, sorry







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