ML

Beyond the Storms

I love all these posts jesus

Beyond the Storms

Yay!

I also get worried when I need to write long posts!

@Caits

I wouldn't say that you "need" to, as long as you fulfill the anatomy: in my mind, that's a response to something that has occurred, potentially internal dialogue or character development, and then an action which allows others to respond and move the story forward. If that's four lines, so be it.

it says advanced but really i just want to have an awesome, character-realistic story

Beyond the Storms

I mean you guys are giving me plenty of updates, I appreciate that.

Beyond the Storms

It was excellent :)

Beyond the Storms

Well now I'm just going to be watching

cant sneak anything past ol me

Beyond the Storms

My plan is to get working on my post tomorrow and have it up no later than Sunday. I'll also probably be updating the Ysmirod glossary as I introduce new words. I intend to introduce the Ysmirod word for 'shit' in my intro, because why not?

EDIT: Also, in case you couldn't tell from my CS, I like to edit things...a lot. I promise, however, that my edits are purely for phrasing and such. I don't edit dialogue to make my characters come out on top of conversations or alter fight scenes so they emerge victorious. Just a head's up. I'm a wee bit of a perfectionist lol.

@Lexicon

Lol if you hadn't told me I wouldnt have noticed

Beyond the Storms

Oh.

Wow:

I think j might wait until I'm at home and can use my tablet to post!

@Caits

no rush, i gotta lot of school stuff goin on rn anyway

Beyond the Storms

I just came up with another thing we could stash aboard the Garrloch: can you say hot air balloon

Beyond the Storms

As long as it's enough to keep the ball rolling, the timeframe isn't really a huge deal to me. Just want to make sure this gets somewhere, since I'm pretty excited with it

Beyond the Storms

No worries, then: throw her in the cs section and let's get to work :D

Ps, I hope Constance has a strong stomach, she'll need it for what's comin soon