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20 days ago
Current I might slowly be coming back to life. Getting laid off does give one more time to think about stories and such.
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3 yrs ago
Happy new year. Yes I am still alive. Bleep you 2022.
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4 yrs ago
You need to chill, girl. ;P
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6 yrs ago
I still don't know why I'm awake.
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6 yrs ago
I have no idea why the hell I am still awake right now. I blame my brother.
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I'm a 30-something woman just looking to keep those writing muscles in whatever shape I can. I'm also Canadian, so fill the rest of this bio with every stereotype you can think of. I've also single, so clearly I'm a catch.

"She's horrible and stuff" - @BangoSkank

Most Recent Posts

I gave Raven my input, so we should be good to go soon.
I will also indicate interest!
Bout time I got off my lazy ass and moved my sheet over.

I'll trust in the vision of the GM and go with it.
Just the obligatory "I'm here and paying attention" co-GM post.
I will check in and advance the interest. Yes. I think I worked all those words in there nicely.
I was still waiting for Alice, but I guess something happened. It's been a busy time. I know I haven't done much writing in any degree, although I'm trying to get back into it.
Sorry I haven't been more active. Work, work, impromptu date, dad's birthday kinda wrenched my week.

@Alchemist All right, first I support any criticisms my co-GM may have brought up. He is in that position for a reason. So I can confirm everything he has put forward. Now as for the edited sheet, I will bring up my own points.

- First of all, she needs a last name. I don't care if she calls herself Snow, Sand, whatever. Madonna would use her real name to register for something like this. She needs a full name.
- The contradictions in character are rough to balance. She's kind to the point where people take advantage of her, yet shy and untrusting. Does that mean she judges character that poorly? Can't be, since you say right after "she's been known to read others well." The patient yet reckless line, I'm willing to overlook, because I believe I can see where you're going with that, but you're veering dangerously into a case of Meredith Brooks Syndrome (I'm a bitch, I'm a lover, I'm a child, I'm a mother, etc.)
- Orphaned on it's own is sketchy, especially if you're giving her access to a bunch of materials to allow here to be a mythology expert and a martial artist. Giving her a direct link to multiple established canon characters is sketchy as well, definitely to the extend where you're claiming one as a brother and another as a step father.
- Amnesia is one of the defining Mary Sue character traits, and I'm definitely not having that.
- Your starter Pokemon would be at level 5.
- Aura in general is a subject I'm not looking to bring into this RP. It just adds stacked on layers that is going to be lost in the main plot. I don't see a way to incorporate it without bogging it down more than my current life schedule is already doing.
- Nitpicking, but the English graduate in me sees the writing with all the capitalization in random places, and spelling errors, and I die a little inside.

@Shiny Figment
- There are some editing errors in here as well "somethe, ofthe, himso" Other than that it looks pretty good. Welcome aboard. Place your sheet in the characters tab and go try and convince an angry Gary Oak to give you a Pokedex.
Shoot, I missed the post. I'll try and get my sheet edited up as soon as possible.
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