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Mana-script Academy for the gifted (Magical School RP)

Charles would of wrote down anything he needed to know fairly quickly, and rubs the back of his hand thinking for a second then shakes the thought out of his head and continues to write down anything he needs to know.

The Magic Apprentice(s)

It would be a day like any others, everyone doing their own thing enjoying their days... except for a group of 9 want to be apprentices, who are trans versing through a jungle to find the Castle of a Magic master, so he can teach them, they all have their own reasons, and this is where we begin our story. . . .

The Magic Apprentice(s)

alright I don't see anything else wrong with it so accepted, adding you to the accepted character list, we'll probably start up the rp sometime soon, maybe bit later today or early tomorrow depends on whats going on and if I can stop this annoying head ache of mine that I've had sense last night.

The Magic Apprentice(s)

"Now, he hopes to improve on his magic to track down his parents" that part in his back story makes it sound like he already knows magic which he doesn't, that would only work if you replace 'Improve on his' to 'Learn' shadow.

Mana-script Academy for the gifted (Magical School RP)

Charles would look to the entrance of the teacher and others, he would rub back of his head wondering what's with this place, one of the weirdest places he has been. he prepared himself knowing that the class most likely wont be simple, far as he knew. he took a deep breath and looked ahead, getting out any items he would need for the class that he would have... mainly paper and writing utensil related things.

Mana-script Academy for the gifted (Magical School RP)

Charles would look around the class room again wondering where the teacher(s) was, wanting to get class through with so he could see how this place would be. He would notice the other student looking at him and raises an eyebrow then just looks down at the desk/table and thinks to himself about his own abilities.

The Magic Apprentice(s)

good work GodOfChaos hm.... one thing that could fix this kind of thing if you all just said the type of magic lol instead of putting multiple things. i'll use booksmusicanime's as an example, 'She can cast spells for fire and anything relating to fire but they are significantly weaker than her fire spells' it would be easier just to put 'Fire Magic' sense that gets the point across fairly simply and doesn't confuse the heck out of me or make it sound wrong by the way it's put... Because they will learn all kinds of magic, All elements the 4 basic and the extended elements.. they will learn to enchant, they will learn to cast portal spells, they'll learn to heal, they'll learn everything related to magic besides maybe 1 or 2 types (that could count as forbidden magic) in the roleplay.... regardless of their talent, sense talent is just what comes easier and faster to them when learning to use and cast it. That's just something that would help when it comes to that. either way we have like 4 or 5 accepted characters now, which is good, we may get into the rp with this, unknown how long the rp will last lol, I hope a while. i'll wait maybe 1 more day for anyone else to fix up their things or any others to join then i'll start off the IC for everyone to start posting.

Mana-script Academy for the gifted (Magical School RP)

I've noticed this rp's thread can get pushed back a good amount of the time to pages 2-4 lol, guess got to try to bump it or something every now and again if don't want to get forgotten, which personal I hope it doesn't probably one of my best chances to use this combo of techniques, and if it works well enough my mind may set it for one of main abilities I would give to my characters in future rps. Though I will say be glad I didn't use my main ability that I made way long ago in other rps lol, I would of turned this rp upside down, inside out, and threw it across dimensions with it. The Random Card Draw, 'Draws' a random card out of the air, that has the power to do anything that is stated on the card, which is entirely random meaning there is no telling what would happen.. this often causes intense and sometimes funny as heck chaos moments.

The Magic Apprentice(s)

GodOfChaos you may of made the same error that three others have done, Talent is simply what they will learn easier than other magic. They do not know it already, they will learn it eventually in roleplay after meeting their master, and going through other training related things first, not to mention unlocking the power to even attempt to use magic to begin with. You make it sound like he can already control earth by how you stated it in his 'talent' section, when he shouldn't be able to. He'll learn the magic element of earth, plus possible the others and every other kind of magic in roleplay depending how long this rp lasts will determine how much they will end up learning before the end.

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I still am confused cause it still contradicts itself booksmusicanime, infact it looks the same as it was so... not sure if it saved. alright shadow when I see it i'll say if it's alright or not. well that would be advance type magic, he could ask their master to enchant it for him, sense it would be a good ways before he could start learning that type of magic.