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Back a year later with starbux
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Wow Typos
9 yrs ago
Life working full time is a vortex of "IM SORRY I CANT POST YET IM SWAMPED WITH WORTH" Sorry ya'll<3;;;
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9 yrs ago
Dang thicc hips, Bomb ass lips, I could rule the world on my fingertips. ~<3
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@Daxam Is my character good to go, now?
Yes, he is accepted.
<Snipped quote by ReaptheMusic> I'll probably add something in tomorrow. Yeah haha even if he did get one of the 70s cars he'd have to be a billionaire conisdering the price they would cost. It's more just an appreciation and sort of recreation type of deal really.
Okay! Let me know when he's done!
@ReaptheMusic Is it possible for my character to be a medic for the Angels when they came down? Or do I need to think of something else?
I feel like I need to explain this better. Angels had their own, nonphysical roles on earth before it needed to be destroyed, similar to the roles we know now. Angels that could control elements protected humans from demons that wished them harm; the 'sword' essentially. Angels that can control Aura were there when miracles needed to happen [cure 'incurable' diseases, help humans who would never do 'xyz' again do 'xyz' again] or to ease others in pain, suffering losses, dying, etc; and, on the smaller spectrum, give the hopeless hope; they're the miracle workers. Angels that could fly are there for deliverance [to a souls final resting place], observation and quick defense against the demons or other bad juju, but are not much for fighting, at least not like the element wielders. They are the shield. To put it in terms that are similar to lore you may or may not know, it could be put like this: Cherubims-Aura Angels, Halo only Guardian Angels-Winged Angels, Wings only Seraphim-Element controling angels, Holy Robes only They don't conform entirely to those roles going by lore, but in terms of fighting capability and strength, that would be the rank they could go by just to make things easier to understand. Now, when all the Angels came to earth, it would be absolutely necessary for all three types to be present come Earths destruction. You're pretty smart, do you think you can piece together exactly why that's so? @Art of Fun I'm not ignoring you, I swear, I'll get to you in a moment x-x
Everyone in this rp is really good about interacting with others, I'm impressed! A lot of times other characters ignore each other but it dies so quickly that way. Brownies for everyone!
@ReaptheMusic Wow you weren't kidding about being harsh. xD anyways, I will be changing it ASAP. And I will be changing almost anything. Is it possible to have a medically inclined Cyborgel?
Do you mean like having one that was in the medical profession? If that's what you're asking, then definitely! I even have one in the examples under Character Types-Cyborgels.
I love this character as well. I can tell you've put a lot of thought and effort into it, and his story is one I look forward to coninueing ^^ However, given his age up against present day [He would have lived through it himself], I would think that he might have some thoughts about the Rebellion against the angels, Cyborgels, Mechangels, and Desium Corp, etc, seeing as they're everywhere. Do you think you'd like to tack something onto your background or just share with me his thoughts? I should also mention that this is far into the future as it states above. You say in his likes that he has a passion for 70's muscle cars. Nothing wrong with it, but I just felt it needed to be pointed out. He must really take amazing care of those cars because if it were from 1970 it would be a complete rustbucket under normal hands. (Of course he could always recreate them and have an appreciation for 70's muscle car aesthetic, that would be fine too!)
Abso-freaking-lutely not. 1. Cyborgels were early Desium Corp creations. No machinery could be hidden as you put in her description. 2. No Angel was sent to earth to kill any one person. These are angels we're talking about. They came down in Legions to literally OBLITERATE the earth. Not to mention you say she had a halo, which are creatures of healing. No Aura-based angel would be sent to 'assassinate' anyone, and much less would they have to train for it in their purified state. These were ANGELS. Extremely powerful beings specializing in the class they were in. To restate, a healing angel would not be sent to assassinate any specific person, much less assassinate at all. 3. The eventual power, wound reversal, is far too powerful. 4. This character is definitely leaning on the side of Mary Sue. My rules explicitly state that that is unacceptable. 5. Why would she have a nickname, and one so different from her own 'name?' Cyborgels were treated like machinery, no one would give her a nickname (much less care about any name. It would be like naming a cell phone, but since the angels did have their own names, I digress.) 6. Trained in every form of weaponry? BEFORE she became a cyborgel?! How did no one pick her out of the crowd considering she was never military registered and no at ALL suspicious, might I add. 7. You give us literally nothing about what her career was. At all. 8. How the FUCK did she come across throwing knives, a pistol and a sniper? And she works as a body guard? Out of the question. Completely out of the question. Cyborgels right now are obsolete and there would be no way to not pick her out of the crowd. Any Cyborgel that the government even gets a whiff of being sentient, she wouldn't be able to survive. 9. All cyborgels were brainwashed. Even if I allowed that nonsense of a healing angel 'training' to kill someone, she would not remember any said training. She would, however, remember her military training since she worked for them.
I really enjoy this character! He seems like he will be a lot of fun and provide lots of contrast to the complete seriousness of the rp. However, there is one small error that might have been my own fault in not presenting more clearly. Cyborgels, while in reality WERE turned into the living dolls you see today, were not publicly marketed as being augmented versions of the demons (angels) that had attempted to destroy earth twenty years ago. Cyborgels were marketed as 'replicas' inspired by the demons (angels) that attacked earth to be servants. See, to the public, it was kind of a commercial joke. Like those old racist Donald Duck cartoons where he fought in WWII (that's actually a thing, look it up.) But for the demons in control, it was an easy way to dispose of the angels without getting ANY kind of lashback. So maybe just make a few adjustments to the bio and you should be good. As for the rest of you, I look forward to seeing your completed WIP's!!
OMFG yes please
Added: Unlockable characters to be revealed during the rp. These are pinnacle to plot but may take quite a long time to be revealed. More will be added to the list, and revealed as the story progresses. Not much has been added to their CS, but the optional sections for them have been filled in. These are clues to who they are, especially their theme songs. Just things to shoot for during the story.
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I'll hopefully have my CS up by tonight. --EDIT-- I might have a military battle cyborgel.
Alright, you best be prepared for being very thoroughly critiqued then.
I'll wait for nerm before posting ^^
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