Rockin Strings

Supernatural - The Dark

@RokkuHoshi I have a few statements and questions for you. I'm just going to list them in number format.

@Amphibious Assualt

Alright, let's answer your problems.

1.) Your character is Half Angel and Half Demon, correct? If that is the case, he would be classfied under the same catogory as my character, A Nephilim.

@Amphibious Assualt

Be that as it may, in the show, from what I remember, they refer to both the half-demon boy and half-angel children as Nephilim. I could label him as one.

2.) Be honest with this one, I don't like someone who lies. Have you ever watched Supernatural?

@Amphibious Assualt

Yes, I have.

3.) There is no special abilities to a Demon Dagger, they don't have the same properties as a Angel blade.

@Amphibious Assualt

Not true. Demon daggers can kill Demons but not Angels. That has been shown a multitude of times.

4.) As for you having an Angel Sword, at this point in the RP there is no plausible way to have one. The Angel blade hasn't been introduced until season 8, and we are still on season 5. As for acquiring the Angel Sword, it's not that easy due to the fact that the Grigori are the ones that wield them. And if memory serves when Sam, Dan and Castiel faced the Grigori it almost killed them, it was killed by a surprise attack.

@Amphibious Assualt

And who's to say the angel that came to visit young Dimidium wasn't a Grigori?

5.) On to the half of Excalibur bit, it hasn't been even introduced yet, the sword isn't brought in the story yet. At this point, it still sits in the stone, and Dean has not blown it up yet. So that is a No Go.

@Amphibious Assualt

It doesn't have to be Excalibur exactly. It could be another sword that was forged in the blood of a dragon. I just can't think of any others.

6.) As for your history, there is no plausible way to grow up as a Human Orphan. Demons and Angels have to posess a body to live in it. Demons ca do it at will, and Angels have to get invited in. Also, when you possess a body, it does not age, so even if you possessed a child's body it would not grow and mature. You'd be stuck in that body until you move on to an older body.

@Amphibious Assualt

His mother was an angel who lost her grace. Shortly after finding it again, she was possessed by a demon too strong for her to fight off. She wasn't gonna get help from Heaven so she did what she could. The demon left, getting bored with her, and she was pregnant. Soon after, she gave birth. Being unable to raise him herself, she put him in an orphanage. A series of unfortunate events, if I must say so myself.

Fix these things, and then PM me the new and revised version and we will go from there. Thank you kindly. Also, if I sounded like a dick, I am sorry, that's not how I wanted to sound.

@Amphibious Assualt

You're not the first to question my character. This is after changing the original story behind his parents twice.

Phoenix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP-Always Open, Open)

Still not seeing a TON of combat oriented back story, which helps explain fighting skills

@Zarkun

Never underestimate Solaris' illusions. You could see and hear him in front of you. Doesn't mean he's actually there. You may have your sword slicing at his torso. Doesn't mean he's actually there. He could literally seem to appear from nowhere.

Supernatural - The Dark

Also, let's be careful with overpowering people...like with weapons, and abilities. It makes things so much less manageable (and true to Supernatural) that way.

@AnnaBeth

Dimidium only has what he has because his role is supposed to be more like Cas (messenger warrior) but his attitude is a lot different. Just wanna make that clear before you realize my weapons might be a bit OP for a common hunter.

Supernatural - The Dark

Name: Dimidium
Age: Unknown (Appears 32)
Species: Half human, half Nephilim
Appearance:


Who's side are they on? With the Winchesters.

History: Dimidium was born to a half-angel mother and half-demon father. They despised each other but had fallen in love despite this. After years of fighting and... well... yeah... they had a son. They named him Derek.

Derek grew up as a normal human orphan, not knowing of his angelic or demonic blood. Many kids in the orphanage, however, feared him and the things he did. Once he was of age, he left with only the clothes on his back and a bit of food. He traveled for years, never staying in one place for long.

While running through a forest, he heard something running towards him. Without even knowing what was going on, he used some of his powers to knock it back before staring at his hands. He had powers. When the beast tried to escape, Derek began chasing it and trapped it in a cave. He heard more footsteps behind him and spun to see humans. After exchanging questions, Derek had his calling. He was going to be a hunter. His first hunt was the Wendigo in the cave.

A few years later, Derek began thinking he needed a new name. While looking through a Latin-English dictionary, he found Dimidium. He smirked, not knowing just how true it was. Shortly after choosing his new name, an angel came up to him. He spoke to the young man, offering to help him control his angelic powers. Dimidium used his powers to disarm the angel before killing it with its own weapon. Only a week later, a demon tried the same thing and met the same fate by the boy's new blade.

Now knowing of his angelic and demonic bloods, Dimidium began trying once a week to go into heaven and hell. He eventually succeeded but didn't stay in either place long before being attacked and having to retreat.

Dimidium is currently walking along the road, looking for his next hunt.

Some personality: Childish at times, loves to read, hates angels, demons and most monsters, loves sweets and enjoys working on vehicles.
Special abilities/powers: Enhanced healing, enhanced strength, teleportation, enhanced speed, telekinesis.
Weapons: Angel Blade, iron pipe, half of sword forged in blood of dragon, 6-shot Revolver with silver bullets, sawed off shotgun with rock salt rounds.

Phoenix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP-Always Open, Open)

CS is finished.

Thanks to everyone who gave me advice. It's nice to see people here trying to help each other out. What was said did help me flesh him out a little more, though I'm not the best at CSs. I saw a few concerns that I hope I fixed.

If Solaris is accepted then Kaze and I shall begin with a conjoined post.

Phoenix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP-Always Open, Open)

Name: Solaris "The Jack of Trades" Nightwing
Age: 35
Birthday: 1-7

Magic: Solaris can use illusion magic as well as small amounts of fire, ice make and requip.

Illusion: Solaris can make anybody see or hear whatever he wishes. He prefers to use this over his other types of magic as he doesn't care for physical combat as much.

Wind: Using this type of magic, Solaris can use small tornadoes to either give himself short-range flight or knock his enemies off balance as well as create gusts of wind to do a long-range concussive attack.

Earth Make: Solaris can create shields, barriers, walls and other obstacles to prevent his opponent from reaching what they wish to get to if needed.

Requip: Solaris has 1 set of armor known as the Alicorn and a single sword known as the Winged Horn.

The Alicorn armor appears to be heavy armor but weighs very little without giving up any of its protection. The helm has a horse head design with a small horn sticking out. On the back of the armor is a pair of wings embossed which can be used to fly when a bit of magical energy is pushed into them. The longer the flight is used, the more it taxes on the user's magical energy. There is also a horseshoe design on the inside of each wrist and the back of each ankle.

The Winged Horn is a shortsword which resembles a flattened horn with the guard resembling wings. In this state, they add to his speed a little and his strength a lot. With a small amount of magical energy, the wings can grow and the blade shrinks, followed by splitting in half, becoming a pair of tonfa-like armblades which increase his speed more than his strength.

Magic Level: A

History: Solaris was born and raised not far outside Fiore in a small kingdom known as Questra. He had been born a prince but didn't really care for the easy life of royalty. He preferred to be with the other kids, running and playing and getting dirty, until he was old enough to begin his battle training. Once he was old enough, he left his home to travel the world, learning more magic from multiple people, leaving the throne to his younger brother, Mari. During his travels, he found a young child which he adopted. He named the boy Sky. Shortly afterwards, while on a job to get money to feed himself and the child, he had come across a user of Ice-Maker magic. With a bit of training, he was able to do the basics, adding to his arsenal. He eventually found Phoenix Wing and began watching some of the members in a playful brawl. It wasn't long after that he decided to join them, further expanding his learning of magic. While in Phoenix Wing, he had gained some useful armor

Personality: Being a wise leader, he prefers to teach than to battle but can hold his own if needed. He is caring, compassionate and cautious. He often watches over his teammates as a father would his children, though tries his best not to make them feel smothered. He cares about everyone to an extent, even his enemies, often giving those who deserve death a second chance at life to pay for their crimes in other ways.

Guild and guild mark location: Phoenix Wing, left side of neck
Team Members: Sky Nightwing
Three Strengths:
1. Wisdom beyond his years.
2. Always on his guard.
3. Extremely fast learner.
Three Weaknesses:
1. Shies from a fight.
2. Can sometimes get distracted by random objects.
3. Has an extreme distrust of statues.
Greatest Love: Plays, operas and musical performances.
Motivation: Family.
Appearance: Solaris is a rather tall man with pale skin and navy blue hair with forest green and garnet red streaks. He wears a long, white, flowing coat with a solar design on each hip over his bare chest and white shorts, the tail of which reaches to just above his knees and the front opened to show off his toned chest. On his feet are a pair of light brown, almost tan, sandals with white straps, also having the solar design in the center of the straps.
Additional Details: (Was originally created as a female but my sister didn't like her)

Supernatural - The Dark

@AnnaBeth Looks like you got 3 CSs to yay or nay.

Supernatural - The Dark

Name: Dimidium
Age: Unknown (Appears 32)
Species: Half Angel, Half Demon
Appearance:


Who's side are they on? With the Winchesters.

History: Dimidium grew up as a normal human orphan named Derek, not knowing of his angelic or demonic blood. Many kids in the orphanage, however, feared him and the things he did. Once he was of age, he left with only the clothes on his back and a bit of food. He traveled for years, never staying in one place for long.

While running through a forest, he heard something running towards him. Without even knowing what was going on, he used some of his powers to knock it back before staring at his hands. He had powers. When the beast tried to escape, Derek began chasing it and trapped it in a cave. He heard more footsteps behind him and spun to see humans. After exchanging questions, Derek had his calling. He was going to be a hunter. His first hunt was the Wendigo in the cave.

A few years later, Derek began thinking he needed a new name. While looking through a Latin-English dictionary, he found Dimidium. He smirked, not knowing just how true it was. Shortly after choosing his new name, a demon came up to him. He spoke to the young man, offering to help him control his demonic powers. Dimidium used the demon's own knife to kill it. Only a week later, an angel tried the same thing and met the same fate.

Now knowing of his angelic and demonic bloods, Dimidium began trying once a week to go into heaven and hell. He eventually succeeded but didn't stay in either place long before being attacked and having to retreat.

Dimidium is currently walking along the road, looking for his next hunt.

Some personality: Childish at times, loves to read, hates angels, demons and most monsters, loves sweets and enjoys working on vehicles.
Special abilities/powers: Enhanced healing, enhanced strength, teleportation, enhanced speed, telekinesis.
Weapons: Demon Dagger, Angel Sword, Iron Pipe, Half of Excalibur, 6-shot Revolver with silver bullets.

Bleach: Soul Extinction

By limit we mean like post limit. Like my character Ike has this energy boost that last two post, but when it ends he needs to wait five post. Or if its instant than its duration is obvious but it would still need a cooldown.

@Oblivion666

Yeah you should have a look in the character tab at the other CS's Zanpakuto skills ^-^ You just state how many posts your move will last for and how many posts before your character can use that move again :P This makes sure that no one can spam and it can also help gage how powerful that move is too

@AbigailTenshi

Except that would be changing because of other people's post lengths. My posts are approx. 1 paragraph but, from what I've seen, people here can post 2 paragraphs with a lot going on or 4 with almost nothing. I know how to be responsible with my posts. This ain't my first rodeo.

As for how powerful it is, I've put its distance and it can cut skin but can be blocked by swords. they're pretty weak blades of sound.

Bleach: Soul Extinction

@Phobos I won't spam and I added limits to number and range and speed. Not to mention he prefers to be up close when fighting.