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Duncan looked at Rai and smiled. "Rest asured, I will not follow blindly. I have a working pair of eyes abd a good head on my body that I use more then your average noblemen." Duncan got back up and put his sword away. "I may have sworn an oath but I will keep my indepedent thoughts." He walked away to let them talk. He went to Trevor. "And if I think they are about to mess up need a kick in their Royal behond I will polish my shining armour boot." He said with a grin.

Gnol watched silently as he ate. He noticed the siblings had the confidence but he didn't think that managing the castle eas enough but the boy could learn perhaps. "Well if it is determined who will take the crown, I would like to invite that one to join me to the Dwarves. Rai was right,you need alliances but Noble, you got to work how you are going to present yourself if you should choose so or have Duncan or someone speak for you but it might bot be easy to pursuade them."

Creessa grabbed something to eat again as she picked up Rai's last words. "Three branches? No fourth directly to the king and kill his sorry ass?" Creessa was considering to take off right then and there but decided to stay and either go to santuary or dwarves. It might be a good idea to tag along a bit and sneak off later when she and her dragon at least gotten.a bit better in fighting together. "Nevermind three it is." RedClaws nade an approving sound. It was smart to get a bit better together before rushing off.

Alan walked over to Ricki. "Yes, come with us, We are are the cool group. We can use a dragon rider too to protect us you know." He felt for the girl with the drooped ears. "What do you say, Coming with young, cool group or with those old serious ones?"

Gabe looked at what Lucian found. "Sweet, let's see that as a positive sign that you being here will lead you to glory and riches and mostly good fortune."
Gabe thought for a moment. "You know, I never found a potion and I lived here my entire life."

Gabe noticed the bus coming. "Ah, it's almost here. On to Lilan town and on to your new house." Gabe paused. "You have a map? Of the island? Unless you have a walking encyclopedia as sister it might be a good idea to have."





Gnol looked over his shoulder to the Centipede. "Right, right, all the better." He said. "We are nearly where we left the rest of the gang." He said. "I can hear them talking already." Gnol increased his pace, he felt some rumbles coming from deep down and it worried him a bit. It could be that the mages their battle had sent the tremors that were caused by the attacks deep down and that fracture lines were triggered.

Jill sighed and nodded both in response to Avia and Fer'a, she hardly heard the Dwarf his words. She did feel a bit better with Fer'a's words but it was a strange magical creature that was beyond her to understand how it worked.
Absentmindedly she walked on. Even though she had seen some strange things in the universe, magic still was strange to her and hard to grasp. Even the better to have Ash as her second in command. he was an expert on the matter.
Seb seemed to understand both science and magic.
Avia seemed to understand it better than herself and Althea would just accept it as it is and not pain her head with trying to make it fit in the universe.
Treghor was all science, he would try to explain it rationally or dismiss it.
Gnol was all technological and science too. Dwarves weren't really known for their magic after all. Ricki seemed to be.
Ricki and Derek both could do magic too and Alan was most likely to go with the flow and adapt to whatever he needed.
Jill sighed again, it seemed only she and Treghor would have to adjust to the magic all around them.

Althea spread her wings and flew up in the skies she looked around and tilted her head as she noticed some of the trees nearby starting to change colour. Which was odd given the temperature. As if the planet started to wither with the death of Traff. She dived down and scoured the planet's surface for some useful specimens as she knew the biologist and scientist would appreciate it. And even if they wouldn't, alive specimens or seeds of a dead planet would be worth a lot in some markets.

Alan looked at Ricki when they were above. "Thanks." He said before sighing in relief the Flarewolf wouldn't have her puppies right now. "I don't know if there is room for two adult flarewolfs and a litter of puppies. The ship is big to spacetravel standards but they would need a whole lot of room for exercise and I am not sure if they can get it in the quarters and the second deck. Maybe with the third deck, the storage and cargo area but when we are hauling big shipments or passengers I fear it won't be enough room. I hope the Captain will allow them on board, I wouldn't want to leave them behind." Alan said as he petted the female flarewolf. "Can Flarewolfs live on the things we have in stock, should we find some things they can eat and hunt or gather it quickly?" Alan turned to Alice. "Avia went back with Gnol to get to the Captain and Ash, I'm sure they'll be here soon. "Ricki is already back here so nothing has happened over there or she would have told us. They are on their way back." He glanced at Ricki. "right?"

Treghor paled at Ricki's words. "It is dying? We need to save as much as we can!" Treghor shouted as he rushed out to examine everything he could see. He had never been to this planet and wanted to know as much as possible about it. Preserve if possible. He took some vials, syringes and small orbs, half glass and half device, out of his backpack and started looking interesting specimens.
Vivianne glanced towards Ash, her lips curled slightly upwards. "Very lovely, not the biggest house indeed but I suppose for her alone and possibly with Datura it is big enough. Lovely kitchen, enough workspace and storage." Vivianne looked at her husband. "It will do."

Faber nodded in response to Ash's inquiry. "Yes, absolutely. I haven't noticed any structural problems and so far everything seems to be working properly. Two bedrooms or one?" Faber asked.

Marigold looked up as she heard the whistling and noticed the little bird. "Well hello there, I hope I didn't disturb you little friend." She said before she checked if she had everything she needed.

"I still need some rosemary and possibly bay leaf or sage. Perhaps some broad-leaf plantain and ribwort plantain." Marigold got up and looked around to see which way she would go.

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Hazel nodded, trying to ignore the whispers all around, she almost flinched when someone called April a demon, it felt all too familiar when people spotted her harpy form. "Witches and their curses."

Hazel sighed. She leaned a bit closer to April. "Maybe we should find less populated streets."

She knew all to well a lot of humans weren't used to see unknowns even though Silver Haven could be the exception. Villages and cities where mortals and unknowns lived together sometimes were very peaceful and everyone lived in the open or it was constant fighting and hostility towards the other. Or there were cities and villages where the mortals didn't have a clue unknows lived among them and in some it was peaceful and in others the mortals lived in constant fear because of strange events and murders.
Hazel hadn't been in Silver-Haven long enough to know which of the four it really was.
I've read the entries and here is my vote:

A Country In Ruins

As for feedback: I wish I could give detailed critiques about technical writing, grammar and spelling etc but I am too inexperienced myself to do so. However, I can tell which entry I liked best based on how I enjoyed reading it, how easy it was to read, how the story progressed and how intrigued I got by the myth in it.

Based on those criteria I felt A Country In Ruins is the better one therefor that entry gets my vote.

I read my competitors entries and my vote goes to Calle.

It wasn't easy because both stories were written well.
I chose Calle's story as the better of the two others because I feel the first contest rule was better portrayed. Also, it felt more being in the action while Fiber's story felt, to me, more of being a spectator with a narrative voice in the background.

That being said, I applaud to Calle and Fiber for making such wonderful stories.
How many characters can we play. Each one or can you make a second character?
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